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演譯？演繹？

弄墨

Jun 6, 2022

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初次看到《青花瓷》的翻譯和演唱時，委實有驚艷之感。

不過聽著聽著，總感覺意境美是美，韻味不太一樣。

有時候，翻譯和演繹真在相去不遠。歌詞移除了「檀香」、「宣紙」、「漢隸」、「打撈月色」、「芭蕉夜雨」等中文文化專項，加入picture frames、fields of morning dew、greener world等等專屬英文的文化項目，與其說是翻譯，不如說藝人很成功地重新演繹成唯美西式情歌。

「冉冉檀香透過窗心事我了然」VS "The fire in my heart burning white and true"？

由始至終的「天青色等煙雨，而我在等你」 VS 由 "The sky is crying blue as I wait for you" 到 "The sky still dark as I make my way to you"？

相思等待與熱烈奔赴，實在是各有各的美。

歌名：青花瓷

歌手：羅藝恆

作詞：羅藝恆

作曲：周杰倫

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素胚勾勒出青花筆鋒濃轉淡

Your touch like brush strokes you hold colour in my skin

瓶身描繪的牡丹一如你初妝

The deep blue and pearl white glow like porcelain

冉冉檀香透過窗心事我了然

As I stare clear through the window that I'm locked within

宣紙上走筆至此擱一半

I count the seconds to see you again

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釉色渲染仕女圖韻味被私藏

Possessions reach cannot hold beauty such as yours

而你嫣然的一笑如含苞待放

Yet still its clouds shroud your light so your petals fall

你的美一縷飄散

Your flowers kiss I reminisce

去到我去不了的地方

now I only see in picture frames

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天青色等煙雨，而我在等你

The sky is crying blue as I wait for you

炊煙嫋嫋升起隔江千萬里

The fire in my heart burning white and true

在瓶底書漢隸仿前朝的飄逸

A thousand miles the smoke is rising high both sides

就當我為遇見你伏筆

I see your shadow outlined through

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天青色等煙雨而我在等你

The sky still dark as I make my way to you

月色被打撈起暈開了結局

White moon light guides our way fields of morning dew

如傳世的青花瓷自顧自美麗

Our world is greener on the other side so free

你眼帶笑意

The time is calling

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色白花青的錦鯉躍然於碗底

Perfection locked and untouched trapped behind this glaze

臨摹宋體落款時卻惦記着你

The shining white holds its shape so elegantly

你隱藏在窯燒裏千年的秘密

Beautiful blue hides entwined hold its secrets tight

極細膩猶如繡花針落地

All of its mysteries subdued beneath

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簾外芭蕉惹驟雨門環惹銅綠

These eyes have only one mind set upon us two

而我路過那江南小鎮惹了你

My present past and the future reside in you

在潑墨山水畫裏

Although the ink has come to fade

你從墨色深處被隱去

Its art and meaning still remain

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天青色等煙雨，而我在等你

The sky is crying blue as I wait for you

炊煙嫋嫋升起隔江千萬里

The fire in my heart burning white and true

在瓶底書漢隸仿前朝的飄逸

A thousand miles the smoke is rising high both sides

就當我為遇見你伏筆

I see your shadow outlined through

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天青色等煙雨而我在等你

The sky still dark as I make my way to you

月色被打撈起暈開了結局

White moon light guides our way fields of morning dew

如傳世的青花瓷自顧自美麗

Our world is greener on the other side so free

你眼帶笑意

The time is calling

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天青色等煙雨，而我在等你

The sky is crying blue as I wait for you

炊煙嫋嫋升起隔江千萬里

The fire in my heart burning white and true

在瓶底書漢隸仿前朝的飄逸

A thousand miles the smoke is rising high both sides

就當我為遇見你伏筆

I see your shadow outlined through

536Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTz52QZSNVB

天青色等煙雨而我在等你

The sky still dark as I make my way to you

月色被打撈起暈開了結局

White moon light guides our way fields of morning dew

如傳世的青花瓷自顧自美麗

Our world is greener on the other side so free

你眼帶笑意

The time is calling

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你眼帶笑意

The time is calling

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