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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFcghtMb3B6
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUg5xAy1fY1
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqscCSu449S
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Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡA33yQPPiBO
459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAunknM0jQs
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3sdDaJcYoK
459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGWA6zM8x45
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOTEartl5GS
459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJSQLqbTrpx
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMlhksWLiFD
459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7E2c6EDfJX
And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRH96wHGAQa
459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRJf3oGwcUc
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlntsoJAafo
459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgB63gl2Pbv
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkZoN32ys6f
459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHFxgUBYXnk
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnk9RIL4NO6
459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ86yOVSJKdf
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpQnT0faLDx
459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8hcGKZcRuS
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiCUOGa3VuF
459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHkDATOzoAl
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDkkPKRNGmu
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So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVf3Ku77ePk
459Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaVEJtSGqI6
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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