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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTjII6PfGLB
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxq8mS2gw18
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5rIjunjEfY
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Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIsBeLeQRp3
549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡitk2BzJnWj
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyjkNGk0Igx
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And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVzH3zn8eo5
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Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZo35nx2F1j
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And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWWImyhiTKo
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And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtbOTMyoeuD
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By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBnHHgqpOzG
549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbSIaWLbnbg
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdEHJV5trY9
549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoFF6yTDs7f
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡybS7vu2zWL
549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrU2cuoHNbv
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvqHarMPp56
549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYPFhBPh9L1
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS5vV8TF5TF
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So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHvwdbOKDPA
549Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQY4N15CaYZ
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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