這次跟大家分享五月天《我不願讓你一個人》的歌詞翻譯練習。8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡWMe1zhbWvI 維尼

網上大多版本用的是I don't want to let you be alone，這裡我用了在英語世界裡更自然、而且語氣更難捨難離的I don't want to leave you alone。翻譯感情細膩的文字時，除了客觀技巧以外，更需要和原文以及原作者共情，才能譯出同樣感染人心的文字。8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡdHmcGZuj8Y 維尼

作詞：阿信8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡ76vx1sYcpQ 維尼

作曲：阿信 冠佑8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4X68x09Dgk 維尼

翻譯：弄墨8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡmH13dXwSFK 維尼

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你說呢，明知你不在還是會問8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6GUKMiRX7P 維尼

“What would you say?” I ask, even though you aren't there8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡWcSFfw9r2y 維尼

空氣，卻不能代替你出聲8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡnczo91dJoi 維尼

The air cannot speak on your behalf8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡF2sSewhYGZ 維尼

習慣，像永不癒合的固執傷痕8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡUAZVvwdm8F 維尼

Habits are stubborn wounds that never heal8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9bOgfg6H6a 維尼

一思念就撕裂靈魂8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7yJ8U2XGIc 維尼

tearing my soul apart whenever I start missing you8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡHxbudYvyx6 維尼

把相片讓你能保存多洗一本8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡBuzbxm38KT 維尼

I get an extra album for you to keep 8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5401TFJRjB 維尼

毛衣，也為你準備多一層8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡc7LqGsp1EK 維尼

and an extra sweater for you to keep warm8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡVwNL51wuPE 維尼

但是你孤單時刻安慰的體溫8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡkM8wHNOayE 維尼

Yet, when you’re lonely and need comforting warmth8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9RSA6juBfg 維尼

怎麼為你多留一份8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡfL99mC1Q4u 維尼

how do I reserve it for you?8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡg5dXX6o4E8 維尼

我不願讓你一個人，一個人在人海浮沉8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡoUXOtrCl0o 維尼

I don’t want to leave you alone drifting in the sea of people8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡZG4DBHTnyN 維尼

我不願你獨自走過風雨的時分8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡKUXoJtuZDc 維尼

I don’t want to leave you alone walking through the storms8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡLEULtUwDq7 維尼

我不願讓你一個人，承受這世界的殘忍8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡUdWVMnAu8C 維尼

I don’t want to leave you alone suffering in this cruel world8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡYypLtdlSBN 維尼

我不願眼淚陪你到永恆8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡjLg2J994rc 維尼

I don’t want tears going along with you till eternity8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡGKmqIUbbrD 維尼

你走後，愛情的遺跡像是空城8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡNCWEr8CrNV 維尼

When you're gone, the remains of our love a forsaken town8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8Whdfr7pXL 維尼

遺落，你杯子手套和笑聲8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡVyE5j4MKoP 維尼

where your cup, gloves and laughter reside8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5AKmxubtxz 維尼

最後，你只帶走你脆弱和單純8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡCioUmhHYjn 維尼

In the end, you brought your delicacy and innocence with you8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡh4YC212cGj 維尼

和我最放不下的人8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5cjsgpmz1G 維尼

together with the person I can't let go of8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡTjkgXnKQAg 維尼

也許未來，你會找到懂你疼你更好的人8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡSbXgrV6xtA 維尼

Perhaps someday you’ll find a better one who knows you and loves you8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡ28uzlwY7Uk 維尼

下段旅程，你一定要更幸福豐盛8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡD5MfLHlpRb 維尼

Your next journey must be richer and more blissful8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡgMGVrdwVDZ 維尼

你說呢，明知你不在還是會問8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7ObiwBSemS 維尼

“What would you say?” I ask, even though you aren't there8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡos757tKZpD 維尼

只因，習慣你滿足的眼神8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡqz88lrb7qP 維尼

Only because I'm used to your eyes gleaming in satisfaction8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡxWQYHjQNys 維尼

只是，我最後一個奢求的可能，只求你有快樂人生8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡOemVS9g8dO 維尼

My last, perhaps extravagant wish, is for you to live a happy life8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡXqr3u4ji6r 維尼

只求命運帶你去一段全新的旅程8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5GuCp1oqAC 維尼

All I wish is that you are taken on a whole new journey8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡV0EcoxyVXx 維尼

往幸福的天涯飛奔8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡTkrPcHTdES 維尼

Speeding towards a world of happiness8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡzVKHxjWsr1 維尼

別回頭就往前飛奔8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5TNi3hdMdn 維尼

Please don’t look back, just go forward8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡE9Q1yqQX1t 維尼

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請忘了我還一個人8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡhIe3bbWTQY 維尼

Please forget that I'm still alone8964 copyright protection601ＰＥＮＡＮＡInLD03e04D 維尼