其實這首並不算正式的詩,44Please respect copyright.PENANArufuWvYKBo
幾乎沒有用到任何詩體,44Please respect copyright.PENANAcnoofy1rCK
就算真的有也只是巧合(沒有特別去查或故意使用)44Please respect copyright.PENANAqLOGvta1Gw
勉強來說是新詩(結構比較不嚴謹)吧!
這題一樣是先有答案才有題目的~44Please respect copyright.PENANA4AmQsFtBzY
而這首詩是由昨晚的一場夢開始構築的。
夢中的場景是這樣的,44Please respect copyright.PENANA3PGj17TWFv
心中有著各種混亂(壓力或者恐懼或者哀傷、絕望),44Please respect copyright.PENANAf4qSfEJTAL
為了讓自己能夠靜下心來,44Please respect copyright.PENANAYcuBVhevpy
我開始寫書法。44Please respect copyright.PENANAtTaiuNlgIo
這個書法的第一句叫做44Please respect copyright.PENANATLM8Q5J7gL
「天地無用」44Please respect copyright.PENANANiFI9hCdea
結果用這個字偏小,44Please respect copyright.PENANAVGteVPy19L
潛意識告訴我那是因為我對自身感到無能,44Please respect copyright.PENANAeXOiQnrCjr
所以才會越寫越沒自信~44Please respect copyright.PENANAPYEavg8Xm7
接著想要寫上另外三句,把整首詩補齊,44Please respect copyright.PENANAjGOiF3FUQE
所以最後的版本是:
天地無用44Please respect copyright.PENANAEXF6ZahiI3
山河不移44Please respect copyright.PENANABPNZV8lC7x
人間有情44Please respect copyright.PENANADE9Wx9YVBq
日月無雙
在練習的過程中,44Please respect copyright.PENANAEXvLDTzgEa
似乎練了1~2個小時,44Please respect copyright.PENANAaGCaM9aPMk
不過字的大小幾乎一致,44Please respect copyright.PENANAg5qhSBYp0L
雖然一撇的捺還是如國小時那樣收尾收不好,44Please respect copyright.PENANA6618Mb2TIM
但是心終於靜下來,44Please respect copyright.PENANA0SSaAIocsX
只是手也爆酸~44Please respect copyright.PENANAgpaDqRUrcZ
於是我就醒來了。
先來分析到底這首詩(雖然可能不算詩)代表的涵義吧。44Please respect copyright.PENANAOEc1BCqEGS
第一句的天地無用,44Please respect copyright.PENANAwL2gbnKRCs
是暗指天與地也幫不了你,你必須靠自己來解決問題。44Please respect copyright.PENANA7Qc34n2n5b
第二句的山河不移,44Please respect copyright.PENANA7VhpwA4VNt
其實也可以寫作山海不移,44Please respect copyright.PENANAs0SGFz3ue5
但是好像是第二個字的平仄要跟第一句相反(地和河、用和移),44Please respect copyright.PENANAXLyBwZCLqk
所以才改用河。44Please respect copyright.PENANAsvNgEBlNzG
其實跟第一句類似,就是44Please respect copyright.PENANA5yTJzMDx2L
山不轉,路轉。44Please respect copyright.PENANAysnpGTAyJg
路不轉,人轉。44Please respect copyright.PENANAi3bxOMi41A
的意思。44Please respect copyright.PENANAXEG5MmLdwZ
第三句的人間有情,44Please respect copyright.PENANAdfkGvov615
是說在困境中,還是要相信人間溫暖、相信愛,44Please respect copyright.PENANAqwganZEIC0
要看陽光面、不要鑽牛角尖,44Please respect copyright.PENANAA7S3E6LzcI
也可以說是如果自己不行時,那就找親朋好友幫忙。44Please respect copyright.PENANAe61nl9JPw7
最後一句的日月無雙,44Please respect copyright.PENANAi4Q4HCNQpq
指的就是一枝草一滴露,44Please respect copyright.PENANAfGKJ5Ay3BA
也就是說每個人都是獨特的,44Please respect copyright.PENANAefJeQHNu3J
即便是日和月,也都是唯一的44Please respect copyright.PENANAYoz114ufdO
(就算是神話的九個太陽也只剩一個啦!)
這首詩是對應我的什麼心境就跳過吧!44Please respect copyright.PENANAzyAsiyGCNK
但是我為什麼會覺得這首很適合獻給學長呢?
這邊我們假設學長的煩惱是控制慾(反向面則是不想被控制),44Please respect copyright.PENANAjw7ON95kWh
不要問我為什麼這樣通靈~44Please respect copyright.PENANArLde80Kc2C
再回來看看那首詩:44Please respect copyright.PENANAw3B6ID9z1R
第一句的天地無用,44Please respect copyright.PENANABhZ023xaFd
雖然學長出生在合眾地區的道館世家,44Please respect copyright.PENANAopDlm1wpL0
然而他卻來到藍莓學園,44Please respect copyright.PENANAUCGBIX1oHO
並且成為聯盟社(學生高度自治)的社長~44Please respect copyright.PENANAJQqJeTlxcc
即使平常看起來懶散,44Please respect copyright.PENANAeBz27i3kGv
對戰時卻不馬虎~44Please respect copyright.PENANAZQVhxqPTTB
我相信這並不是因為他的家世背景或從小的訓練,44Please respect copyright.PENANAzJDQO3Xjwp
就能達到這樣的成就~44Please respect copyright.PENANAdeDP4hzNc7
不然他也不會就這樣敗給烏栗(相較之下沒有那樣的背景)
接著第二句的山河不移,44Please respect copyright.PENANAvcRdH4pMQU
雖然是馴龍師,但是喜歡寒冷。44Please respect copyright.PENANA5PHbfLQrjK
對戰中會看到他的寶可夢有許多反制剋龍系的技能,44Please respect copyright.PENANAbxtI1Hmf0z
因此即使想要用剋屬性贏過杜若也不是那麼容易~44Please respect copyright.PENANARIuKqZSn3J(除非你作弊使用神獸)44Please respect copyright.PENANAfwV0GmL0Iv
即便龍系也有弱點,44Please respect copyright.PENANAhDXWN5cXJd
他也能隨機應變讓自己扭轉局面、44Please respect copyright.PENANA5JNQthaGwx
反敗為勝!
第三句的人間有情,44Please respect copyright.PENANAKJu2m1q51w
儘管連工作人員都不信任他、44Please respect copyright.PENANAEFboNh49Hd
紫竽又指責他、44Please respect copyright.PENANAliidMS61op
連小學弟赤松也希望他做什麼事情,44Please respect copyright.PENANAzf4amU6oIc
能跟自己討論,不然會被人誤會或讓別人反感~44Please respect copyright.PENANA9PrALohpF8
他還是關心四天王的大家還有烏栗以及主角們。
最後一句的日月無雙,44Please respect copyright.PENANAQawTdtahBi
這句其實是這首詩的重點,44Please respect copyright.PENANAqvCO0y4VKD
這個日月倒不是指太陽與月亮寶可夢~44Please respect copyright.PENANAu9VAhd6n7u
意思是希望他不要計較特別,44Please respect copyright.PENANAQiyOb8lrYe
而希望他能專注在獨特上面。
曾經有位友人出了一本書,44Please respect copyright.PENANAHxYqA09v5h
其中一個觀點就是「Special vs Unique」44Please respect copyright.PENANAFiXE7esD9L
我們常常會著重在Special上面,44Please respect copyright.PENANAe73P6VOvQZ
比方喜歡的人、偶像明星、老師長輩上司...44Please respect copyright.PENANAR4xZaXeqgt
這些都是各種意義上的Special,44Please respect copyright.PENANAOamilG2TCi
而我們有時候也希望自己成為Special的人。
然而,44Please respect copyright.PENANAkBtFC6sFv2
有時候這樣的執著也會帶給自己困擾,44Please respect copyright.PENANADAUHDdN1HR
甚至舉步維艱...44Please respect copyright.PENANAS0Kdd2nNQj
有些人甚至因此想不開、一直鑽牛角尖...
然而每個人都是獨一無二的,44Please respect copyright.PENANAzMKu7H1ot1
即便是長相類似的人、即便是雙胞胎,44Please respect copyright.PENANAjIBOElyodN
也有不同的個性、興趣、志向,44Please respect copyright.PENANAp39VN17CBZ
甚至我認為複製人,44Please respect copyright.PENANAhtGMkos0tg
也會有不同的人生目標和原則~
為什麼會獻給學長這句話呢?44Please respect copyright.PENANAKp4MVEaLoA
學長霸著社長的位子卻不認真做事情,44Please respect copyright.PENANADWz4bgwHyJ
這是為什麼呢?44Please respect copyright.PENANAputq0MiyoW
還有留級三年看似無所謂,44Please respect copyright.PENANAIKF9QWh5Ss
但是他與八朔老師的對話卻耐人尋味~
畢竟這些都是我腦補的東西,44Please respect copyright.PENANAazkrOHYenD
所以就只是分享我淺薄的見解了~44Please respect copyright.PENANACllNGchvmA
除了獻給學長這首詩,44Please respect copyright.PENANAgNwwC1PGPz
也希望自己能做到~44Please respect copyright.PENANAJjckwj17uY
彼此共勉之!
6/21 完
p.s. 這首詩絕不是暗指我的名字是詩字輩的那個詩喔~
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