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我02/14/2023西洋情人節這天,註冊成為Penana的一份子。8964 copyright protection196PENANAJmtjzwQ8yA 維尼
剛開始是以《W. H. 新詩集》做先頭部隊,因為從去年12月中旬直至目前(02/21/2023),我都還處於對新詩迷戀的狀態,也寫了不少,恰好可以放在這本新詩集裡。8964 copyright protection196PENANArfZVv2I7wh 維尼
之前我小說、童話、新詩、漫畫、塗鴉、隨筆等,均上架於鏡文學網站——當然,以後仍是——註冊Penana,是想多一處可以擺放我作品的地方。沒想到一來就發現,這裡太好玩了,特別是「創作挑戰」,讓我玩得不亦樂乎!加上大家的互動熱絡又有趣,我都捨不得離開,如果打開最近我電腦Chrome的歷史記錄,肯定是一片黃澄澄的P字。8964 copyright protection196PENANASzfo0edZiJ 維尼
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我在02/18寫了〈發現 Penana〉,收錄在《W. H. 新詩集》—— 這首詩,是我對這個心/新遊樂場的小小感想。以下是〈發現 Penana〉全文:8964 copyright protection196PENANAH3kdk47U0F 維尼
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也沒人給我花8964 copyright protection196PENANA8NFCkdhGFT 維尼
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越浪!8964 copyright protection196PENANA9QA1Qxx2J6 維尼
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「情人節快樂!」8964 copyright protection196PENANAa0T7z0WuzI 維尼
情人拿了一串8964 copyright protection196PENANAm9Pxya55rZ 維尼
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「我們來做香蕉船,8964 copyright protection196PENANAzcsjiPoRnf 維尼
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「好,我們來做香蕉船,8964 copyright protection196PENANAWQWPBDMdJk 維尼
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找到一個好玩的地方⋯⋯」8964 copyright protection196PENANAK1s0zpopdN 維尼
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心靈遊樂場。8964 copyright protection196PENANAy1uYN1oxLe 維尼
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〈發現 Penana〉的創作背景及方式,我寫在留言區,也跟大家分享:8964 copyright protection196PENANAN8CmuAoqHL 維尼
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「這是我第一次寫這麼長的詩(高中寫的不算),這首〈發現 Penana〉是我來Penana玩了近5天的感想:好活潑的地方啊,尤其創作挑戰,讓我玩得好開心!200Please respect copyright.PENANAbK58C5sRjw
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雖說這首是「自由聯想詩」(自己覺得),不過裡面幾個概念/意象都有跡可循:西洋情人節、網上衝浪、書海/字海/線條海、香蕉、遊樂場。200Please respect copyright.PENANA5QPJp6gKQO
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我喜歡詩和現實「若即若離」的特性,這些意象也有,譬如衝浪,我用了真實世界的衝浪詞彙:落水、爬上、越浪(我很喜歡這個詞~)、烏龜翻(碰到大浪時,將衝浪長板頂在上面,從浪的下方穿過去,然後再翻/爬回板上)⋯⋯來指涉網路上的衝浪(surfing the net),有一種虛實相生的趣味。200Please respect copyright.PENANAN3n7l8nmke
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順道一提,我完全不會衝浪——我運動苦手啊——這些概念是從網上衝浪得來的,如果有誤,煩請告知,但請勿噴~謝啦^^8964 copyright protection196PENANAyYwYk2CphG 維尼
香蕉也是。200Please respect copyright.PENANANVmO87uT5N
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我用真實世界的香蕉,來指涉Penana,之後還要做/坐「香蕉『船』」再去遨遊書海/字海/線條海呢!200Please respect copyright.PENANAplODFdXHfp
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這首詩最讓我發噱的一句是「我接過香蕉,凝視它們」,我光想到「凝視香蕉」這個畫面,嘴角就忍不住失守;而後面寫的香蕉馥郁氣味,就是要帶出「創意➝栽下➝照拂➝培育➝成果➝芬芳」,這是真實世界果實,也是文字/圖畫世界作品的栽種過程。200Please respect copyright.PENANAFNsAYGouYD
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又,《在海裡飛翔》是一部紀錄片,記錄海龜Feebee用25年遊遍整個大西洋的故事。」8964 copyright protection196PENANAwAVGh6zgZQ 維尼
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很高興自己找到一個這麼好玩的地方,就算之後蜜月期過去,或是自己的「不定性」又開始發作,至少目前我玩得很愉快,也已經在此寫了一些原生(=不是從其他網站搬過來的作品)的新詩&小說/故事。8964 copyright protection196PENANAQQABStKon8 維尼
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我覺得我的「恐怖故事寫輪眼」快要打開了,不少發想正蠢蠢欲動,希望能將它們化成文字(我沒本事將其圖像化~),一一生出來!8964 copyright protection196PENANAWLrVv21YxR 維尼
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