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趙蒔蕳
Joined Oct 8, 2022
趙蒔蕳
✪ From Taiwan
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趙蒔蕳 趙蒔蕳 on 劍舞輪迴 (Sword Chronicle)
背景設定代入時可以再更和緩、不著痕跡一點，剛起頭就突然出現一大道坎。理想的情況是藉人物的對話、互動來慢慢的道出資訊。… more
趙蒔蕳 趙蒔蕳 on 劍舞輪迴 (Sword Chronicle)
兩段下來，贅字有點多，不影響閱讀，但不順暢，主要事件被飾物遮掩了，且那裝飾不怎麼美麗… more
趙蒔蕳 趙蒔蕳 on 劍舞輪迴 (Sword Chronicle)
序有種“風之名”的調調
趙蒔蕳 趙蒔蕳 on 一直混水摸魚躺著分錢的狙擊手終於被踢出了隊伍被迫自力更生 ～成功的關鍵在於堅持初衷以及無恥抱腿～
這幾篇似乎很趕，不太像小說而是故事架構
趙蒔蕳 趙蒔蕳 on 一直混水摸魚躺著分錢的狙擊手終於被踢出了隊伍被迫自力更生 ～成功的關鍵在於堅持初衷以及無恥抱腿～
倒數第二段有點硬核
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