
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』266Please respect copyright.PENANAxPCIstRLG0
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:266Please respect copyright.PENANAVe6SYIwacK
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐266Please respect copyright.PENANAiRvSQxH0AU
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆266Please respect copyright.PENANAal38grlaE7
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲266Please respect copyright.PENANAWxrhhxV1lN
帶出角色支線266Please respect copyright.PENANAjdTjb1uPGM
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破266Please respect copyright.PENANA7qbLMV3Y7X
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫266Please respect copyright.PENANAJOW0xmSidF
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴266Please respect copyright.PENANA2Bj0tVKQ5X
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌266Please respect copyright.PENANAzvB54aw2vU
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊266Please respect copyright.PENANAGLtKCzsLyN
殺人犯vs富婆266Please respect copyright.PENANA5OF0FqRSBH
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌266Please respect copyright.PENANALhJpXPdTgq
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴266Please respect copyright.PENANAJJjPcWGOqn
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕266Please respect copyright.PENANAENFrQkVw7F
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。266Please respect copyright.PENANAQqDm3baWcY
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。266Please respect copyright.PENANAmUcafKwR0g
魂之詩266Please respect copyright.PENANA9qelJipjfv
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