
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』272Please respect copyright.PENANAAFT01IPRle
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:272Please respect copyright.PENANA4Ea6jXh1Un
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐272Please respect copyright.PENANAQl3Qh5DUfc
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆272Please respect copyright.PENANANLGFShRuWg
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲272Please respect copyright.PENANAnDZHRGURpU
帶出角色支線272Please respect copyright.PENANABCLVM2rwTr
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破272Please respect copyright.PENANAn84HsdN4TT
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫272Please respect copyright.PENANAC2OPmHWXvx
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴272Please respect copyright.PENANApMNGWVIKsF
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌272Please respect copyright.PENANAI0sO7NA32V
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊272Please respect copyright.PENANAHk2JJgupJU
殺人犯vs富婆272Please respect copyright.PENANAAjAEKnzB6T
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌272Please respect copyright.PENANAHCtJPyizjM
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴272Please respect copyright.PENANAUTsviYrjWu
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕272Please respect copyright.PENANA1vEeiJjrOg
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。272Please respect copyright.PENANAonNkYAdi1f
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。272Please respect copyright.PENANAvLdQDFxTQX
魂之詩272Please respect copyright.PENANAYUmQtq4hyB
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