
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』239Please respect copyright.PENANA60jrwwYPMU
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:239Please respect copyright.PENANAkQFz6P6uaV
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐239Please respect copyright.PENANAE3WtMVVYkp
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆239Please respect copyright.PENANA2o4w76C2Zg
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲239Please respect copyright.PENANAAsn9QSANoq
帶出角色支線239Please respect copyright.PENANAbXoZfz5yR5
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破239Please respect copyright.PENANAxGhX8jGOn1
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫239Please respect copyright.PENANANzQtcmnFiO
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴239Please respect copyright.PENANAJ9WzEl9JdB
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌239Please respect copyright.PENANAiCYrPBsEHc
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊239Please respect copyright.PENANAEuhxcit3Rs
殺人犯vs富婆239Please respect copyright.PENANA23ilGSCwtd
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌239Please respect copyright.PENANAqV7LlguTsv
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴239Please respect copyright.PENANAzs1jrurZeS
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕239Please respect copyright.PENANAd8J6OMMEoD
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。239Please respect copyright.PENANAK0W1N0xuNH
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。239Please respect copyright.PENANAmWmSzZrmuj
魂之詩239Please respect copyright.PENANAxaMK0X8lbe
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