作者妳好724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrQkGlIMU5z
受到妳的邀请724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjX7JFzQA8J
稍微看了下这本佩姬724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpyluS08E1b
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡteDMOcEedN
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAv6Gg3n3ci
现世一堆东西724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn8FHVk8PPx
其实就很简单一个道理724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0ZMW8OHxa3
主角想要被爱724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSBBwzrBxgy
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8gFh7f822d
男主卢克爱724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrqTUR1pEP1
主角就爱回去724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTT6QEIUBnp
女主伊莎爱724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡURZ75qejWD
主角就爱回去724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRBit47lEaE
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvefJDas9or
想要被爱是佩姬的主题724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoZBKSXvEUt
主角性别不是问题724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMUXOYdbH10
内心冲突不是问题724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡL4F9yoAO1V
主角被爱就迎刃而解724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6VM16fBN5b
看不懂这点整部书就看不了724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡivTPLt5zZW
妳的书乏人问津是这道理724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNDGqy6djny
作者妳说主角口是心非724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnCHcs1gQPC
欸我说这不对724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUN6oUlU1YN
这明摆着口非心也非724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpAZerZTrZe
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2NGrpwxHSY
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHww0pVCKI7
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG6ehbcoDq4
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGdssBuKUfF
为了被爱724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7BOKz9wYbA
连原本的性别都不要了724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq7Jo2mDHCb
这主角疯的傻的724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDejPp0PxTZ
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQuilsVSCet
女主伊莎724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaXXwA7TiQV
单纯的色鬼724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcHYEcAGTwa
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD6ezjNzAYB
黑化可能
艾德兰724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBGJHFZj3Wo
可怜虫阿724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHHwH5LNRtA
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTUK3FgW3kT
妳说解释不够724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7VMHhhcjX5
我到觉得清楚724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡivLMEbwLIw
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdociTMGRFk
他为啥强724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv0NSSKeyqp
妳啥都没讲724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB3mfh68WHa
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGUSv1VCh8M
也是除主角外最明白的角色724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1YjB5bxPGW
她就拿来爱主角的724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7lCPjAxJQI
功能性角色
还有其他许多724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtjYumb4U44
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ298INb4SDt
可以瞧见妳的苦心724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqRf7jPV44H
我觉得这没必要724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeGbUlUXG1c
好的台词提一次够了724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJbNQrB2xoD
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2E4buVdeOI
我倒嫌设定囉嗦724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMNY5eOxU5c
空白很重要724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB1L29kIWLV
没明白有没明白的好处724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOFegZDH4ro
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGh3ubL3Nds
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ72yqhCNax6
我还会继续看的724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhgCxIj9sYd
确实好看724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqNeTDxcBEz
希望你这能写完724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLt0Dh7RMDw
能放上起点不724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRXqeYQrZCP
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRzVeVlzDQJ
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVkYJwu6EF4
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZxL9yxI2zB
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIwn3jorIJU
感謝你的評文724Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk8CWPjiILS
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