作者妳好747Please respect copyright.PENANAH18ClQv7Ay
受到妳的邀请747Please respect copyright.PENANAziR85M1gxQ
稍微看了下这本佩姬747Please respect copyright.PENANA4xLvR4f9qc
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法747Please respect copyright.PENANAKKdsogAiO1
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西747Please respect copyright.PENANA4xtaSzLNDM
现世一堆东西747Please respect copyright.PENANAgZoP98LukB
其实就很简单一个道理747Please respect copyright.PENANA706l3LKajX
主角想要被爱747Please respect copyright.PENANAVXRDauiBxO
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱747Please respect copyright.PENANAT84J9wU3pQ
男主卢克爱747Please respect copyright.PENANAdXmNNSpSeb
主角就爱回去747Please respect copyright.PENANAuptCjOtEEb
女主伊莎爱747Please respect copyright.PENANA40KKPoXT3o
主角就爱回去747Please respect copyright.PENANAQA0ylDiKw1
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理747Please respect copyright.PENANArmKisT4PUp
想要被爱是佩姬的主题747Please respect copyright.PENANArZEGap58oC
主角性别不是问题747Please respect copyright.PENANAZfWuypDlDD
内心冲突不是问题747Please respect copyright.PENANAwGHJ2QWT3r
主角被爱就迎刃而解747Please respect copyright.PENANABlH4EWEyXg
看不懂这点整部书就看不了747Please respect copyright.PENANAd3Rh1HodR7
妳的书乏人问津是这道理747Please respect copyright.PENANASJmsfIARm8
作者妳说主角口是心非747Please respect copyright.PENANA9t1kHGtNVa
欸我说这不对747Please respect copyright.PENANAuYNAtBFXYB
这明摆着口非心也非747Please respect copyright.PENANA0ijMdhtUm0
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰747Please respect copyright.PENANAEZymcCBXm5
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵747Please respect copyright.PENANAvBeEeWYSxJ
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜747Please respect copyright.PENANAQDqNjpsgoE
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的747Please respect copyright.PENANA9PtxlJU0BI
为了被爱747Please respect copyright.PENANA9JiFGv22ja
连原本的性别都不要了747Please respect copyright.PENANAiyLfSmsvZU
这主角疯的傻的747Please respect copyright.PENANA7zNTRkHzNL
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色747Please respect copyright.PENANAkVzBK7VwUG
女主伊莎747Please respect copyright.PENANAWm82ddrW6v
单纯的色鬼747Please respect copyright.PENANAMX0Q6aE9p8
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性747Please respect copyright.PENANAPaWHprqUEa
黑化可能
艾德兰747Please respect copyright.PENANAGNnesstMi2
可怜虫阿747Please respect copyright.PENANAAbrNbKvrdr
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了747Please respect copyright.PENANA4AG4mVan6i
妳说解释不够747Please respect copyright.PENANA4kIhnlbJxE
我到觉得清楚747Please respect copyright.PENANAbeuR5wFFuL
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够747Please respect copyright.PENANARSVabptuib
他为啥强747Please respect copyright.PENANAOQDlmiNwYR
妳啥都没讲747Please respect copyright.PENANAYm0HyUQ0v3
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白747Please respect copyright.PENANA5zulyAHOtt
也是除主角外最明白的角色747Please respect copyright.PENANAebB9cF5YhC
她就拿来爱主角的747Please respect copyright.PENANALScyvEBC4q
功能性角色
还有其他许多747Please respect copyright.PENANAHDbvV1A3Di
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多747Please respect copyright.PENANANZd4S6GlpT
可以瞧见妳的苦心747Please respect copyright.PENANAMk82fgtQnj
我觉得这没必要747Please respect copyright.PENANA852XGVoRgl
好的台词提一次够了747Please respect copyright.PENANAwKztlYMZdb
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨747Please respect copyright.PENANAWakV200zyM
我倒嫌设定囉嗦747Please respect copyright.PENANATy1UOrLsuN
空白很重要747Please respect copyright.PENANASGZunAfwGx
没明白有没明白的好处747Please respect copyright.PENANAwsJohjRyp8
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说747Please respect copyright.PENANAsOaeu6N2PJ
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书747Please respect copyright.PENANADxZPnLXr4u
我还会继续看的747Please respect copyright.PENANAyHaJ7mibxa
确实好看747Please respect copyright.PENANAvwyYs50QBp
希望你这能写完747Please respect copyright.PENANAKbi77swtNW
能放上起点不747Please respect copyright.PENANAjcROJnGzKd
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
747Please respect copyright.PENANAnAbZdgZcKs
作者回應:747Please respect copyright.PENANARxGBB0UgPB
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,747Please respect copyright.PENANAvLopzs0DcP
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,747Please respect copyright.PENANAHAKLdlnvu2
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞747Please respect copyright.PENANArXJ1OvGQOP
感謝你的評文747Please respect copyright.PENANA199hLEpPC3
我會盡量把文章搬上對岸起點的