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稍微看了下这本佩姬708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡliISrpQLIt
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVqQUrsQi52
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIbjt5ZOEZu
现世一堆东西708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGnPwqdJNJ0
其实就很简单一个道理708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcfzf6dIFLz
主角想要被爱708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK7fjmcsP9v
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDMwRj98VkE
男主卢克爱708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡijCzNCJjeH
主角就爱回去708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAeSBhQaJwM
女主伊莎爱708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡh5HmZp44pa
主角就爱回去708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2NF28EYpmF
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrw2mLCt0Xe
想要被爱是佩姬的主题708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUyYPXnAadK
主角性别不是问题708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1mjCacuyVg
内心冲突不是问题708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjptdzH5CR3
主角被爱就迎刃而解708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg8Zq0O3A2b
看不懂这点整部书就看不了708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡceN5ZCxa20
妳的书乏人问津是这道理708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8bTQSa9Oks
作者妳说主角口是心非708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfHygtZ8mRW
欸我说这不对708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwh5AMkskuT
这明摆着口非心也非708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu8BcLkgQ3B
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvuLxTD71cN
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUGQUdesmTQ
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWWNuvEHSIl
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBerQaDu5OP
为了被爱708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcO0EYmQYc3
连原本的性别都不要了708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcejnFr7rLt
这主角疯的傻的708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzbwd35goOS
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ46AkKczBd9
女主伊莎708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR4I1cHSzcW
单纯的色鬼708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE4vXt9lpM6
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNffbp3NuZc
黑化可能
艾德兰708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡh9nIu8VOvm
可怜虫阿708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo3N3GhKi7x
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8JzOqYb9Jx
妳说解释不够708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbNsXA9xzDP
我到觉得清楚708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtoBwawrC6o
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTZ4TOhkay5
他为啥强708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡP7pZXbFMZF
妳啥都没讲708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhXV0DS2eY7
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcLBhQ1RxnF
也是除主角外最明白的角色708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPFK788tiGr
她就拿来爱主角的708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVqq3W7OfaX
功能性角色
还有其他许多708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNfeGqH4KkH
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjLq1aV19yD
可以瞧见妳的苦心708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5e6YIXvBJi
我觉得这没必要708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡraBXCO2oHo
好的台词提一次够了708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ5dl3OGMDo
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMWhJK8xBFT
我倒嫌设定囉嗦708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡolUrguszQr
空白很重要708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAL1uV1Vfq8
没明白有没明白的好处708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeUdgixZwXi
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtyTrj0QtUU
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7oACuu4U2V
我还会继续看的708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMAxTc4dX8T
确实好看708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyuDHv9Kv8b
希望你这能写完708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5W3LNfU9i5
能放上起点不708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmjnVPfZ6XK
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1ndHfHKmF8
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIaLbrTTWKf
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtHOQbrgnpp
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPkdMWjWzeW
感謝你的評文708Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAqA4I5M4Fd
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