作者妳好747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH18ClQv7Ay
受到妳的邀请747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡziR85M1gxQ
稍微看了下这本佩姬747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4xLvR4f9qc
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKKdsogAiO1
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4xtaSzLNDM
现世一堆东西747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgZoP98LukB
其实就很简单一个道理747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ706l3LKajX
主角想要被爱747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVXRDauiBxO
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡT84J9wU3pQ
男主卢克爱747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdXmNNSpSeb
主角就爱回去747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuptCjOtEEb
女主伊莎爱747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ40KKPoXT3o
主角就爱回去747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQA0ylDiKw1
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrmKisT4PUp
想要被爱是佩姬的主题747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrZEGap58oC
主角性别不是问题747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZfWuypDlDD
内心冲突不是问题747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwGHJ2QWT3r
主角被爱就迎刃而解747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBlH4EWEyXg
看不懂这点整部书就看不了747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd3Rh1HodR7
妳的书乏人问津是这道理747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSJmsfIARm8
作者妳说主角口是心非747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9t1kHGtNVa
欸我说这不对747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuYNAtBFXYB
这明摆着口非心也非747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0ijMdhtUm0
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEZymcCBXm5
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvBeEeWYSxJ
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQDqNjpsgoE
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9PtxlJU0BI
为了被爱747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9JiFGv22ja
连原本的性别都不要了747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiyLfSmsvZU
这主角疯的傻的747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7zNTRkHzNL
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkVzBK7VwUG
女主伊莎747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWm82ddrW6v
单纯的色鬼747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMX0Q6aE9p8
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPaWHprqUEa
黑化可能
艾德兰747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGNnesstMi2
可怜虫阿747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAbrNbKvrdr
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4AG4mVan6i
妳说解释不够747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4kIhnlbJxE
我到觉得清楚747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbeuR5wFFuL
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRSVabptuib
他为啥强747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOQDlmiNwYR
妳啥都没讲747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYm0HyUQ0v3
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5zulyAHOtt
也是除主角外最明白的角色747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡebB9cF5YhC
她就拿来爱主角的747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLScyvEBC4q
功能性角色
还有其他许多747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHDbvV1A3Di
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNZd4S6GlpT
可以瞧见妳的苦心747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMk82fgtQnj
我觉得这没必要747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ852XGVoRgl
好的台词提一次够了747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwKztlYMZdb
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWakV200zyM
我倒嫌设定囉嗦747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTy1UOrLsuN
空白很重要747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSGZunAfwGx
没明白有没明白的好处747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwsJohjRyp8
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsOaeu6N2PJ
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDxZPnLXr4u
我还会继续看的747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyHaJ7mibxa
确实好看747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvwyYs50QBp
希望你这能写完747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKbi77swtNW
能放上起点不747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjcROJnGzKd
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRxGBB0UgPB
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvLopzs0DcP
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHAKLdlnvu2
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrXJ1OvGQOP
感謝你的評文747Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ199hLEpPC3
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