作者妳好515Please respect copyright.PENANAP18DA3WgUl
受到妳的邀请515Please respect copyright.PENANA2wqea4s2yd
稍微看了下这本佩姬515Please respect copyright.PENANA2AOfmVga5T
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法515Please respect copyright.PENANATxz6gip0pl
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西515Please respect copyright.PENANA9nu3tTCFEO
现世一堆东西515Please respect copyright.PENANAB38EtB5zg2
其实就很简单一个道理515Please respect copyright.PENANA6yjKaKgMBX
主角想要被爱515Please respect copyright.PENANAnrNLOg7QSN
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱515Please respect copyright.PENANAGw0j66C6dw
男主卢克爱515Please respect copyright.PENANAzyD9iQzOJn
主角就爱回去515Please respect copyright.PENANAAXyzCZcGr9
女主伊莎爱515Please respect copyright.PENANAHmm19Xsr9d
主角就爱回去515Please respect copyright.PENANAYm7SQKkrAJ
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理515Please respect copyright.PENANAdAponWiEFX
想要被爱是佩姬的主题515Please respect copyright.PENANAXQcbE66aVf
主角性别不是问题515Please respect copyright.PENANArEIWmyTUtL
内心冲突不是问题515Please respect copyright.PENANACBJOKGdnet
主角被爱就迎刃而解515Please respect copyright.PENANAskXwdHA3Oh
看不懂这点整部书就看不了515Please respect copyright.PENANAu14jCfSrQ2
妳的书乏人问津是这道理515Please respect copyright.PENANACcXAuuejmS
作者妳说主角口是心非515Please respect copyright.PENANAfA8GXD7AZi
欸我说这不对515Please respect copyright.PENANAuFvrhTAxJw
这明摆着口非心也非515Please respect copyright.PENANATzSH9R2Am1
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰515Please respect copyright.PENANAul6lTds1bX
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵515Please respect copyright.PENANA1GgCrD4Q0K
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜515Please respect copyright.PENANATL7wwCTT5P
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的515Please respect copyright.PENANAd74UvuwoBE
为了被爱515Please respect copyright.PENANAtKYTNS9Mp5
连原本的性别都不要了515Please respect copyright.PENANA3ghQ6vMkKZ
这主角疯的傻的515Please respect copyright.PENANA0XRzUwjX15
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色515Please respect copyright.PENANAGaeTPQOgEb
女主伊莎515Please respect copyright.PENANAqpspFBXKdh
单纯的色鬼515Please respect copyright.PENANAIakPJI34Bq
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性515Please respect copyright.PENANAWYyUPEypIx
黑化可能
艾德兰515Please respect copyright.PENANALKPgbkPMGr
可怜虫阿515Please respect copyright.PENANAVjKKkvt1nv
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了515Please respect copyright.PENANAaYOfYR3bHa
妳说解释不够515Please respect copyright.PENANA6ygOLIJXwg
我到觉得清楚515Please respect copyright.PENANAIIWD2A0uuS
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够515Please respect copyright.PENANA8s36OUNP9W
他为啥强515Please respect copyright.PENANAfRw5CJEdzc
妳啥都没讲515Please respect copyright.PENANApNBrq713je
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白515Please respect copyright.PENANAODTSe7VMwj
也是除主角外最明白的角色515Please respect copyright.PENANAHrnm0d0UMk
她就拿来爱主角的515Please respect copyright.PENANAHb6YkasPbn
功能性角色
还有其他许多515Please respect copyright.PENANAXXuX4GN1OY
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多515Please respect copyright.PENANAMHwNoWkbcB
可以瞧见妳的苦心515Please respect copyright.PENANA3D7Arra41I
我觉得这没必要515Please respect copyright.PENANA7iHeihgG1H
好的台词提一次够了515Please respect copyright.PENANAJJ3t9D4GNJ
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨515Please respect copyright.PENANACn3IJMEmbL
我倒嫌设定囉嗦515Please respect copyright.PENANAL5TZUp8d3v
空白很重要515Please respect copyright.PENANAYdOkVaIjN5
没明白有没明白的好处515Please respect copyright.PENANADXOJcmVm66
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说515Please respect copyright.PENANATyF9nA7PWs
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书515Please respect copyright.PENANA9QusoczyrM
我还会继续看的515Please respect copyright.PENANACTwZ0IvUQn
确实好看515Please respect copyright.PENANAnnhiE1nFdb
希望你这能写完515Please respect copyright.PENANAVb5W8EnHLJ
能放上起点不515Please respect copyright.PENANA3Mz1hMSqBa
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
515Please respect copyright.PENANA6bMSwJB1Fu
作者回應:515Please respect copyright.PENANAnr2hCyl9MO
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,515Please respect copyright.PENANAh3GgH7g9x4
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,515Please respect copyright.PENANApGohYP3QvP
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞515Please respect copyright.PENANAfVvjFYQLM9
感謝你的評文515Please respect copyright.PENANAW7yKQOkzbx
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