作者妳好708Please respect copyright.PENANAyn8MI18ZT7
受到妳的邀请708Please respect copyright.PENANAXLmGbEfVq5
稍微看了下这本佩姬708Please respect copyright.PENANAliISrpQLIt
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法708Please respect copyright.PENANAVqQUrsQi52
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西708Please respect copyright.PENANAIbjt5ZOEZu
现世一堆东西708Please respect copyright.PENANAGnPwqdJNJ0
其实就很简单一个道理708Please respect copyright.PENANAcfzf6dIFLz
主角想要被爱708Please respect copyright.PENANAK7fjmcsP9v
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱708Please respect copyright.PENANADMwRj98VkE
男主卢克爱708Please respect copyright.PENANAijCzNCJjeH
主角就爱回去708Please respect copyright.PENANAAeSBhQaJwM
女主伊莎爱708Please respect copyright.PENANAh5HmZp44pa
主角就爱回去708Please respect copyright.PENANA2NF28EYpmF
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理708Please respect copyright.PENANArw2mLCt0Xe
想要被爱是佩姬的主题708Please respect copyright.PENANAUyYPXnAadK
主角性别不是问题708Please respect copyright.PENANA1mjCacuyVg
内心冲突不是问题708Please respect copyright.PENANAjptdzH5CR3
主角被爱就迎刃而解708Please respect copyright.PENANAg8Zq0O3A2b
看不懂这点整部书就看不了708Please respect copyright.PENANAceN5ZCxa20
妳的书乏人问津是这道理708Please respect copyright.PENANA8bTQSa9Oks
作者妳说主角口是心非708Please respect copyright.PENANAfHygtZ8mRW
欸我说这不对708Please respect copyright.PENANAwh5AMkskuT
这明摆着口非心也非708Please respect copyright.PENANAu8BcLkgQ3B
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰708Please respect copyright.PENANAvuLxTD71cN
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵708Please respect copyright.PENANAUGQUdesmTQ
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜708Please respect copyright.PENANAWWNuvEHSIl
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的708Please respect copyright.PENANABerQaDu5OP
为了被爱708Please respect copyright.PENANAcO0EYmQYc3
连原本的性别都不要了708Please respect copyright.PENANAcejnFr7rLt
这主角疯的傻的708Please respect copyright.PENANAzbwd35goOS
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色708Please respect copyright.PENANA46AkKczBd9
女主伊莎708Please respect copyright.PENANAR4I1cHSzcW
单纯的色鬼708Please respect copyright.PENANAE4vXt9lpM6
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性708Please respect copyright.PENANANffbp3NuZc
黑化可能
艾德兰708Please respect copyright.PENANAh9nIu8VOvm
可怜虫阿708Please respect copyright.PENANAo3N3GhKi7x
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了708Please respect copyright.PENANA8JzOqYb9Jx
妳说解释不够708Please respect copyright.PENANAbNsXA9xzDP
我到觉得清楚708Please respect copyright.PENANAtoBwawrC6o
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够708Please respect copyright.PENANATZ4TOhkay5
他为啥强708Please respect copyright.PENANAP7pZXbFMZF
妳啥都没讲708Please respect copyright.PENANAhXV0DS2eY7
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白708Please respect copyright.PENANAcLBhQ1RxnF
也是除主角外最明白的角色708Please respect copyright.PENANAPFK788tiGr
她就拿来爱主角的708Please respect copyright.PENANAVqq3W7OfaX
功能性角色
还有其他许多708Please respect copyright.PENANANfeGqH4KkH
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多708Please respect copyright.PENANAjLq1aV19yD
可以瞧见妳的苦心708Please respect copyright.PENANA5e6YIXvBJi
我觉得这没必要708Please respect copyright.PENANAraBXCO2oHo
好的台词提一次够了708Please respect copyright.PENANAJ5dl3OGMDo
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨708Please respect copyright.PENANAMWhJK8xBFT
我倒嫌设定囉嗦708Please respect copyright.PENANAolUrguszQr
空白很重要708Please respect copyright.PENANAAL1uV1Vfq8
没明白有没明白的好处708Please respect copyright.PENANAeUdgixZwXi
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说708Please respect copyright.PENANAtyTrj0QtUU
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书708Please respect copyright.PENANA7oACuu4U2V
我还会继续看的708Please respect copyright.PENANAMAxTc4dX8T
确实好看708Please respect copyright.PENANAyuDHv9Kv8b
希望你这能写完708Please respect copyright.PENANA5W3LNfU9i5
能放上起点不708Please respect copyright.PENANAmjnVPfZ6XK
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
708Please respect copyright.PENANA9QDlBiocit
作者回應:708Please respect copyright.PENANA1ndHfHKmF8
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,708Please respect copyright.PENANAIaLbrTTWKf
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,708Please respect copyright.PENANAtHOQbrgnpp
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞708Please respect copyright.PENANAPkdMWjWzeW
感謝你的評文708Please respect copyright.PENANAAqA4I5M4Fd
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