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M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16607Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcOyUrRR0l4
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 607Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz5qVgJwA0r
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.607Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzNPiOZXX37
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.607Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ53llzmWu7l
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!607Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwLx8Cq9Y70
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!607Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQKrD1bC5JD
Well done, Zak!
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