In the words of M. Williams
M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16583Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡddQItg6Kos
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 583Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6VLcYH3lSB
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.583Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJLfqXd4ug0
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.583Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9HjPTcAZQj
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!583Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaicdaxtFSf
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!583Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡel8FMjlmF3
Well done, Zak!
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