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M. Williams
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I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 611Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeZbAxkhGoB
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.611Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBknBi3WA3o
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.611Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLlZmzBQTiw
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!611Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw8eUcpNh76
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!611Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7qpKdgVlSX
Well done, Zak!
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