
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』265Please respect copyright.PENANAaEU7KuHg8v
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:265Please respect copyright.PENANAA3B1ukR6Du
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐265Please respect copyright.PENANA1J7fE4JihG
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆265Please respect copyright.PENANANnpytU5d87
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲265Please respect copyright.PENANAzHT1SvVv5G
帶出角色支線265Please respect copyright.PENANANZdYnYeftM
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破265Please respect copyright.PENANA0L9w5phbP8
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫265Please respect copyright.PENANAckVFTSXU0t
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴265Please respect copyright.PENANA49iOk2Tz6s
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌265Please respect copyright.PENANARsPsrKAGTX
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊265Please respect copyright.PENANADoAOym59Ps
殺人犯vs富婆265Please respect copyright.PENANANU68pUSDls
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌265Please respect copyright.PENANANkGhixyyrp
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴265Please respect copyright.PENANAXDyc7TIvJw
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕265Please respect copyright.PENANAwY2biQoPQE
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。265Please respect copyright.PENANAxJZiSLKVPy
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。265Please respect copyright.PENANAH7o1MTHeIk
魂之詩265Please respect copyright.PENANAndemBY7mHG
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