
相信自己的直覺,有時靈光一閃的念頭,比深思熟慮的結果更令人拍案驚奇。因為心血來潮的靈感放棄一個月的進度也是常有的事。當時亦然,直覺認為劇本尚有不足,我就相信直覺而停筆,重新審視故事。
首先是第十八章的部份,重頭戲是昌因為大小姐毀容而自責,覺得自己能力不足而拖累大小姐,崩潰痛哭,顯示昌柔弱的一面。然而大小姐沒有責備昌,突顯二人的牽絆堅如磐石。324Please respect copyright.PENANAi2o2tAhe2I
舊作『在樹林裡的她』寫過類似的劇情,理應很容易掌握才對,是甚麼在妨礙我呢?324Please respect copyright.PENANAvQZCHTLYnK
昌:「是我。」324Please respect copyright.PENANAF7XlJpcIhn
甚麼!?324Please respect copyright.PENANAX4pj4Bu2va
昌:「是小看我嗎?你這隻軟體生物。我才不會為了此等小事就崩潰。說,我的靈感原型是誰。」
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(羅貝爾特+法夫尼爾)x沃爾特÷2,比起女僕,執事的成份比較高。324Please respect copyright.PENANAKMBNFX9BZS
昌:「這算大小姐變成了他媽哥池,依然面不改容鞠躬盡瘁才是真正的女僕吧。」324Please respect copyright.PENANAYsi55wP3IV
你的執念也太重!不過,這的確符合你的設定啦。324Please respect copyright.PENANA4e2r28eK8B
昌:「知道就馬上把故事重寫,你這隻章魚。」324Please respect copyright.PENANAwQ5tGGZVLi
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可惡的高腳七,一針見血打出大暴擊,令人無法反駁。那麼,將劇本這樣改一改——改到就有鬼啦!完全沒有靈感啊!324Please respect copyright.PENANAZEO6pwWzle
我不寫了!JoJo!324Please respect copyright.PENANAJeE3u2CZGB
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昌:「你不是還有CP要推嗎?」324Please respect copyright.PENANAmuuD5xJibU
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那就,暫時休筆!324Please respect copyright.PENANAcLjlRhOd7q
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24/12/2021
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