
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』245Please respect copyright.PENANAOu2jRGckRw
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:245Please respect copyright.PENANAUfu9KD93iU
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐245Please respect copyright.PENANAyQX48MAhJR
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆245Please respect copyright.PENANAVitUBPxc9b
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲245Please respect copyright.PENANAWRrvZoVOcx
帶出角色支線245Please respect copyright.PENANAcbDYFZYYPD
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破245Please respect copyright.PENANAi0PUUcKNwa
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫245Please respect copyright.PENANAidVGzPLqlK
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴245Please respect copyright.PENANAPVYyAug0xq
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌245Please respect copyright.PENANAvSgyTq5Wzq
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊245Please respect copyright.PENANAfxBuaQyECe
殺人犯vs富婆245Please respect copyright.PENANAOOmWwb8ohd
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌245Please respect copyright.PENANA96oF006MYe
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴245Please respect copyright.PENANAUj5p6196kR
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕245Please respect copyright.PENANACDWu8dml7Y
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。245Please respect copyright.PENANA3W0S4OFIeH
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。245Please respect copyright.PENANA8XBctjiJVZ
魂之詩245Please respect copyright.PENANAQUe3ag1SAm
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