
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』264Please respect copyright.PENANAdIGYPZpRJm
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:264Please respect copyright.PENANABaneTjZHwc
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐264Please respect copyright.PENANAMcy2jzhdVr
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆264Please respect copyright.PENANAYEGWtGfdVB
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲264Please respect copyright.PENANAPzqYis53Kf
帶出角色支線264Please respect copyright.PENANA4RBonBa4fI
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破264Please respect copyright.PENANAjESXwoOPLa
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫264Please respect copyright.PENANAGxRBRyKMfE
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴264Please respect copyright.PENANAZyQWJ21bWj
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌264Please respect copyright.PENANAU7lUl1RxxF
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊264Please respect copyright.PENANA4iNAFT4Jo8
殺人犯vs富婆264Please respect copyright.PENANAyfz5uuyWxD
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌264Please respect copyright.PENANA2FzlssEjsL
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴264Please respect copyright.PENANAUxemoQXIjg
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕264Please respect copyright.PENANAZH6pxMEWny
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。264Please respect copyright.PENANATI7emowHtH
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。264Please respect copyright.PENANA65OW55MnMI
魂之詩264Please respect copyright.PENANAHXnE9kQKfW
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