感謝各位的投稿!340Please respect copyright.PENANAuL86eh6Q7F
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!340Please respect copyright.PENANAKVQfnR3PPO
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~340Please respect copyright.PENANAPhVYGJMSU5
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法340Please respect copyright.PENANAhqOhfGBuIl
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!340Please respect copyright.PENANAkaRAoGywBt
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!340Please respect copyright.PENANAahozRY8SiB
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》340Please respect copyright.PENANA5GRhW89xGC
(兼人氣獎得主)340Please respect copyright.PENANAUvtCnoT9xi
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD340Please respect copyright.PENANAPmDtUYg8TM
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W340Please respect copyright.PENANA4ZqZV7PcRw
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!340Please respect copyright.PENANAYHepzbJ1kf
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」340Please respect copyright.PENANAHTQWW7YgnJ
結果後續結尾意外二連發!340Please respect copyright.PENANAStJ6TkeqWG
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意340Please respect copyright.PENANAEFwxrXmCFY
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺340Please respect copyright.PENANAY6UvJL6bik
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事340Please respect copyright.PENANAj3QLXHBx0n
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》340Please respect copyright.PENANAHpX3FHYXhH
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD340Please respect copyright.PENANAgmoezWMDrl
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯340Please respect copyright.PENANAP9asohU5SF
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣340Please respect copyright.PENANAa8aQKDFaqQ
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD340Please respect copyright.PENANAneukSZaZGG
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~340Please respect copyright.PENANAQRC3nfbKB0
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?340Please respect copyright.PENANAwcB48Kll1B
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文340Please respect copyright.PENANAAQzcqbxvHL
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:340Please respect copyright.PENANAjidkLNWFLH
這個名次是最難抉擇的340Please respect copyright.PENANAqv4SkvGTlY
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態340Please respect copyright.PENANAX49ivY8egF
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧340Please respect copyright.PENANA8KWQvsb3E9
以發佈順序點評:340Please respect copyright.PENANAWAqzqC5prl
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》340Please respect copyright.PENANAdwu6mKYGW8
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底340Please respect copyright.PENANA87nNFLWNS7
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END340Please respect copyright.PENANADCLPzWBixc
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺340Please respect copyright.PENANALNxjZJuT2x
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案340Please respect copyright.PENANA7PiWGVffli
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w340Please respect copyright.PENANAySzw3ajW2E
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖340Please respect copyright.PENANAThwnX7luFs
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到340Please respect copyright.PENANAymzZ7K066G
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》340Please respect copyright.PENANAhXeMYvJ3fK
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!340Please respect copyright.PENANAzU19P3ZunS
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點340Please respect copyright.PENANArePr1fHF2z
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD340Please respect copyright.PENANAugrPoNDIP1
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)340Please respect copyright.PENANAFQnVFgchbz
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒340Please respect copyright.PENANA3B8J6f3ebe
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚340Please respect copyright.PENANAScacb99eBo
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失340Please respect copyright.PENANAGOGnNN4Yty
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了340Please respect copyright.PENANAL9p9S5CtCM
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性340Please respect copyright.PENANAV3cl7RLswC
例如:340Please respect copyright.PENANADbE01uQ4Za
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢340Please respect copyright.PENANASsPxIr56hy
>放學忘記去放乖乖340Please respect copyright.PENANAZmD3wG0atJ
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂340Please respect copyright.PENANAqYxsfSB7vr
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些340Please respect copyright.PENANAHvomlPWsxc
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性340Please respect copyright.PENANAc8djerSEs2
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》340Please respect copyright.PENANAVAq70x1dxk
宛如聊齋的古風故事340Please respect copyright.PENANA4ecGDc9VuF
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?340Please respect copyright.PENANAmPSU7uogBM
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋340Please respect copyright.PENANAn0oXS1hmPr
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)340Please respect copyright.PENANA8EB3N9dTqN
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?340Please respect copyright.PENANAFwFIr2rXGa
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度340Please respect copyright.PENANADxj6tm40m5
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD340Please respect copyright.PENANAKRYJLozsKa
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌340Please respect copyright.PENANAEaPwX6pBUd
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了340Please respect copyright.PENANA0MyJNpNm1K
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞340Please respect copyright.PENANAg4IfYix1cx
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間340Please respect copyright.PENANAwRxIHRMGal
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠340Please respect copyright.PENANAl39peVI5bW
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖340Please respect copyright.PENANAvcZZijimWM
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒340Please respect copyright.PENANAiiHKiK1xH0
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說340Please respect copyright.PENANAEobRjK9M40
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》340Please respect copyright.PENANA60cOoqm0bJ
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞340Please respect copyright.PENANAHBRthzyzLp
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!