感謝各位的投稿!374Please respect copyright.PENANAUCZeYxlSx7
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!374Please respect copyright.PENANAXSbE23gAeh
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~374Please respect copyright.PENANAwT8gILVPy0
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法374Please respect copyright.PENANAgJ7EuAgJOZ
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!374Please respect copyright.PENANA8vKGPi3x1z
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!374Please respect copyright.PENANAPMbEHbUHdw
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》374Please respect copyright.PENANAGzcCCHemWr
(兼人氣獎得主)374Please respect copyright.PENANAb5yG5ziIGY
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD374Please respect copyright.PENANArLnfeVj5YZ
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W374Please respect copyright.PENANAFmTxLAJRj3
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!374Please respect copyright.PENANAu3y3tLDNJ7
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」374Please respect copyright.PENANAxW6gASlTyH
結果後續結尾意外二連發!374Please respect copyright.PENANAlFd4jkHYli
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意374Please respect copyright.PENANA2Ru3GJ62wZ
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺374Please respect copyright.PENANAhwJdHPgWWF
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事374Please respect copyright.PENANAa0T7TAdbcz
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》374Please respect copyright.PENANAkZ8sZoqDO7
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD374Please respect copyright.PENANAf8c4KgNfuN
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯374Please respect copyright.PENANA1uFlgkJGoC
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣374Please respect copyright.PENANAVWfd9rejqj
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD374Please respect copyright.PENANArZ1W7BItK6
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~374Please respect copyright.PENANAM9BjiyBDVM
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?374Please respect copyright.PENANAi6PiPd3BtX
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文374Please respect copyright.PENANAO5a3TcgcLp
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:374Please respect copyright.PENANAufiF1Cird9
這個名次是最難抉擇的374Please respect copyright.PENANA1VkAB1nVki
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態374Please respect copyright.PENANAlgsOtFVBe2
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧374Please respect copyright.PENANAgayNMtm6Hr
以發佈順序點評:374Please respect copyright.PENANAsCtmZzo09e
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》374Please respect copyright.PENANAUnLqJ3xGG3
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底374Please respect copyright.PENANAyKCvUfGPtT
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END374Please respect copyright.PENANAHsO7Om2R6e
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺374Please respect copyright.PENANA1XEz1hdHMS
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案374Please respect copyright.PENANA0Bt0PcvCah
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w374Please respect copyright.PENANAwFPKYIvIDA
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖374Please respect copyright.PENANANq7Qz8ZU3b
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到374Please respect copyright.PENANAmYN9HHrc2C
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》374Please respect copyright.PENANAB1j3iYWyVh
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!374Please respect copyright.PENANAhaerF8Tvxl
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點374Please respect copyright.PENANAKsnILJr2aM
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD374Please respect copyright.PENANAPKPtpaIX2d
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)374Please respect copyright.PENANAGA7KjEq4pW
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒374Please respect copyright.PENANA65nvRmqici
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚374Please respect copyright.PENANAHRaUdDinZu
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失374Please respect copyright.PENANA2vQJ0qkZNl
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了374Please respect copyright.PENANAAGvg3tyKmj
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性374Please respect copyright.PENANAE2lPyMuUef
例如:374Please respect copyright.PENANAAQ05RnYqOY
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢374Please respect copyright.PENANAgfFgR7B5sk
>放學忘記去放乖乖374Please respect copyright.PENANAj872DprfIm
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂374Please respect copyright.PENANAj7yi4GGrLq
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些374Please respect copyright.PENANAkok1hdrjxS
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性374Please respect copyright.PENANAgiuGzz62eo
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》374Please respect copyright.PENANAO572hbxGMQ
宛如聊齋的古風故事374Please respect copyright.PENANAWOk4fANLxK
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?374Please respect copyright.PENANAQCqYAYuGk9
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋374Please respect copyright.PENANAO0rKuu9Zgh
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)374Please respect copyright.PENANAFHOKypYAVE
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?374Please respect copyright.PENANAT0pnXYiLZS
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度374Please respect copyright.PENANA8wVyByYHZc
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD374Please respect copyright.PENANAJ3gfx9Puf1
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌374Please respect copyright.PENANA8zEiaziIRt
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了374Please respect copyright.PENANAaOX2E9Etci
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞374Please respect copyright.PENANAI8cmSA9NIQ
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間374Please respect copyright.PENANAOIX1d2UxHF
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠374Please respect copyright.PENANAb3UmvnI1H4
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖374Please respect copyright.PENANAouVyoZwShC
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒374Please respect copyright.PENANAkiiBOGB35M
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說374Please respect copyright.PENANAcVQIxJBFHs
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》374Please respect copyright.PENANAFZfjcDRMEI
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞374Please respect copyright.PENANACc43dShN0u
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!