感謝各位的投稿!355Please respect copyright.PENANAvQ9TlhmYTj
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!355Please respect copyright.PENANAxFcSEAnMiX
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~355Please respect copyright.PENANA6O9BggrL3s
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法355Please respect copyright.PENANAX9ev9dZVhy
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!355Please respect copyright.PENANAhoblXA8W22
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!355Please respect copyright.PENANATG22DwJmH2
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》355Please respect copyright.PENANAGqjj8WH7fc
(兼人氣獎得主)355Please respect copyright.PENANAYOY1mmFaC6
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD355Please respect copyright.PENANARsPEEegANP
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W355Please respect copyright.PENANAAVkEVZMmDR
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!355Please respect copyright.PENANAqNlEKuwrEw
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」355Please respect copyright.PENANAufTEev8vGx
結果後續結尾意外二連發!355Please respect copyright.PENANAsFghajg4xe
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意355Please respect copyright.PENANAQleYam5RDi
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺355Please respect copyright.PENANA2ErB4tH9Aq
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事355Please respect copyright.PENANAD8y2imty4Q
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》355Please respect copyright.PENANAWtFEPLGead
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD355Please respect copyright.PENANATzXnoL4XYE
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯355Please respect copyright.PENANAVL8gVuxk0F
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣355Please respect copyright.PENANA4L71m9qcmK
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD355Please respect copyright.PENANAjLfniXn7Ra
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~355Please respect copyright.PENANAWjDMorq0E4
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?355Please respect copyright.PENANAMv9jawkbIa
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文355Please respect copyright.PENANA1lsfzQEzWa
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:355Please respect copyright.PENANAVBOKrd1ppE
這個名次是最難抉擇的355Please respect copyright.PENANA6gxszbkdea
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態355Please respect copyright.PENANAxYZ8qBKp7s
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧355Please respect copyright.PENANA1zOsd17FM3
以發佈順序點評:355Please respect copyright.PENANA6f3SmQdphD
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》355Please respect copyright.PENANAg91gfKZ8M7
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底355Please respect copyright.PENANAlCI6Udh28h
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END355Please respect copyright.PENANAtyiyb9wCcz
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺355Please respect copyright.PENANAIcQCP5bYLP
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案355Please respect copyright.PENANAZh5Rt9YIfk
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w355Please respect copyright.PENANASWAhnUUO7J
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖355Please respect copyright.PENANAgJpniTgCWX
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到355Please respect copyright.PENANAbSzHgJjTUH
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》355Please respect copyright.PENANAZM0xihEgei
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!355Please respect copyright.PENANAE4NvCvZzYO
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點355Please respect copyright.PENANAgnnXscXZXB
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD355Please respect copyright.PENANAd2NvCvUv7G
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)355Please respect copyright.PENANA91b7xAD5LT
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒355Please respect copyright.PENANA6WYlufIVRj
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚355Please respect copyright.PENANAFSZiV7BjW9
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失355Please respect copyright.PENANAzY0oerjWBl
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了355Please respect copyright.PENANATqP61pUaXC
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性355Please respect copyright.PENANAxDU70TYJb4
例如:355Please respect copyright.PENANA1KW01rv0dl
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢355Please respect copyright.PENANAsyaXPELuUq
>放學忘記去放乖乖355Please respect copyright.PENANA8ONi9pliCM
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂355Please respect copyright.PENANATyoaRXoj5S
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些355Please respect copyright.PENANAEPHvhbIiom
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性355Please respect copyright.PENANAv2lOHwKUrh
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》355Please respect copyright.PENANAmCSCrF9ERY
宛如聊齋的古風故事355Please respect copyright.PENANAETymU3jUGD
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?355Please respect copyright.PENANALd4BbVPIvU
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋355Please respect copyright.PENANAJjIC8sZlDb
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)355Please respect copyright.PENANAULnVSq6di9
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?355Please respect copyright.PENANAMpBqS26L65
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度355Please respect copyright.PENANACY1aNCdsBV
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD355Please respect copyright.PENANA5MysDeHCOx
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌355Please respect copyright.PENANABT3IuTqBzU
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了355Please respect copyright.PENANAzPV8ZsVDhX
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞355Please respect copyright.PENANAeaNMEi58wJ
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間355Please respect copyright.PENANAkHAbLLtU3G
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠355Please respect copyright.PENANADiaOppOA57
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖355Please respect copyright.PENANAZKTG0GOG5z
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒355Please respect copyright.PENANALddMj8JG71
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說355Please respect copyright.PENANAZGVK69JGwM
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》355Please respect copyright.PENANAoB0DtLa9Al
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞355Please respect copyright.PENANAjTyPKJTZK7
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!