感謝各位的投稿!369Please respect copyright.PENANAlAfCORiPeS
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!369Please respect copyright.PENANA54z61yHd2j
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~369Please respect copyright.PENANA6A19euA17D
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法369Please respect copyright.PENANAiU812Gda04
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!369Please respect copyright.PENANAz8sFc0kxrc
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!369Please respect copyright.PENANAje53ehGdpt
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》369Please respect copyright.PENANAIkmvPfGYSm
(兼人氣獎得主)369Please respect copyright.PENANAHtQtdNmxic
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD369Please respect copyright.PENANA0hEepD993o
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W369Please respect copyright.PENANAaleUVCXKV6
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!369Please respect copyright.PENANAYTRprMv295
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」369Please respect copyright.PENANAQW4nsCWjtn
結果後續結尾意外二連發!369Please respect copyright.PENANAMeSe7rOY5q
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意369Please respect copyright.PENANAnGjgKHYeHU
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺369Please respect copyright.PENANAGAwPbKMUge
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事369Please respect copyright.PENANA9Pq4BYdha0
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》369Please respect copyright.PENANAlWkG6u3wu9
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD369Please respect copyright.PENANAqko28B9RF4
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯369Please respect copyright.PENANAivqCPVDC82
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣369Please respect copyright.PENANAbb5hbRmEL4
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD369Please respect copyright.PENANA7DJXbyUrrg
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~369Please respect copyright.PENANAifzFKqHIE6
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?369Please respect copyright.PENANAB6t39T87gI
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文369Please respect copyright.PENANAxuXPTvnwjb
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:369Please respect copyright.PENANA4ukEwG7gb1
這個名次是最難抉擇的369Please respect copyright.PENANAIaZ1OZZnrQ
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態369Please respect copyright.PENANAdmW1NGOwgj
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧369Please respect copyright.PENANACe6uHt1Zom
以發佈順序點評:369Please respect copyright.PENANAcoEEFVbIC2
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》369Please respect copyright.PENANAOzN3QgLCVK
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底369Please respect copyright.PENANAVse4ToPyIp
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END369Please respect copyright.PENANAh15DRVbCjt
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺369Please respect copyright.PENANASPeX3CUZAE
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案369Please respect copyright.PENANAXFztLiodk4
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w369Please respect copyright.PENANAh0mtuf0vKK
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖369Please respect copyright.PENANAQQqgZvi3wZ
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到369Please respect copyright.PENANA5vxhr9PnE9
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》369Please respect copyright.PENANAUdqj1d21rE
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!369Please respect copyright.PENANAVrCyZv1qrm
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點369Please respect copyright.PENANAv2aLHPZDIZ
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD369Please respect copyright.PENANAF8in4ALC3I
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)369Please respect copyright.PENANArAnibaItcP
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒369Please respect copyright.PENANA71aOsMNvKI
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚369Please respect copyright.PENANAgsIG8ad6pU
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失369Please respect copyright.PENANALKp8zxDDW0
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了369Please respect copyright.PENANAJlfzuL7Tea
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性369Please respect copyright.PENANAYROZGrVxIf
例如:369Please respect copyright.PENANATOVfPP2r9w
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢369Please respect copyright.PENANAilvbFtCEoe
>放學忘記去放乖乖369Please respect copyright.PENANA8S5LxoY4Bh
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂369Please respect copyright.PENANAvA6a5H7FYZ
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些369Please respect copyright.PENANA0W62iL2WOK
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性369Please respect copyright.PENANAviRMAfmDlP
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》369Please respect copyright.PENANAUF5rMg2HaT
宛如聊齋的古風故事369Please respect copyright.PENANAgtAQCwyG07
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?369Please respect copyright.PENANABqjZAxWOoU
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋369Please respect copyright.PENANAwAZTIsotCB
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)369Please respect copyright.PENANAXXBZ2OUp41
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?369Please respect copyright.PENANAqiLckARii7
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度369Please respect copyright.PENANA8lqAVXsqM1
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD369Please respect copyright.PENANAe80f3vUIVk
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌369Please respect copyright.PENANAWINpSIULSC
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了369Please respect copyright.PENANAKQ8WorYx6k
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞369Please respect copyright.PENANAGsVdMv6Ddj
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間369Please respect copyright.PENANA3zNqyJ22qF
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠369Please respect copyright.PENANAh641BT2mNk
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖369Please respect copyright.PENANA4YpjuoIN8n
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒369Please respect copyright.PENANA3EqUnUPtzb
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說369Please respect copyright.PENANAmkgSRWM6HX
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》369Please respect copyright.PENANAA1ILb8stm7
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞369Please respect copyright.PENANAh9tfGkaJRD
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!