感謝各位的投稿!230Please respect copyright.PENANAq0sYJHtt7P
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!230Please respect copyright.PENANATAVbaQ9Qih
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~230Please respect copyright.PENANAZKUGUqklcV
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法230Please respect copyright.PENANAocbyASTieF
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!230Please respect copyright.PENANAh6WkwveRTj
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!230Please respect copyright.PENANAPPT23aJQ0X
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》230Please respect copyright.PENANA14ajrZoXZM
(兼人氣獎得主)230Please respect copyright.PENANANU7LtvAYri
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD230Please respect copyright.PENANAw5rXk7mcpW
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W230Please respect copyright.PENANAwbT3AXZGyG
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!230Please respect copyright.PENANASVOAiSX3Yi
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」230Please respect copyright.PENANAoLdL7mE6sG
結果後續結尾意外二連發!230Please respect copyright.PENANANyHQUmhCUb
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意230Please respect copyright.PENANA8f8ClUUOZS
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺230Please respect copyright.PENANAXPPfgESFoN
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事230Please respect copyright.PENANAq0ya8BohPC
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》230Please respect copyright.PENANAxSo1Wude2L
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD230Please respect copyright.PENANAaaF2fstgql
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯230Please respect copyright.PENANAmrxncf9cji
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣230Please respect copyright.PENANAGSCm6hPjoO
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD230Please respect copyright.PENANAbK5gPNCml6
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~230Please respect copyright.PENANA74ChRbYJoW
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?230Please respect copyright.PENANAvQXS5eAyen
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文230Please respect copyright.PENANATtt9NnTY7v
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:230Please respect copyright.PENANAm6Oq4qcA1q
這個名次是最難抉擇的230Please respect copyright.PENANAGokojsk9qm
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態230Please respect copyright.PENANAfqseFdEO4u
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧230Please respect copyright.PENANAU8a43513Hd
以發佈順序點評:230Please respect copyright.PENANAyRpfyPX5yP
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》230Please respect copyright.PENANA3LqAkeg5kn
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底230Please respect copyright.PENANAgQWVGPFXVN
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END230Please respect copyright.PENANAWqPEfy1gY6
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺230Please respect copyright.PENANAaqhxdGPu1H
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案230Please respect copyright.PENANAT7CX4EpO2K
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w230Please respect copyright.PENANADL2iF4ilNO
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖230Please respect copyright.PENANAN3khhuBkTd
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到230Please respect copyright.PENANAcTvZOWxMEq
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》230Please respect copyright.PENANA3umeyu3jt3
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!230Please respect copyright.PENANAyX4qKaTDgL
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點230Please respect copyright.PENANA6mSnsXN6mQ
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD230Please respect copyright.PENANAefyem3v23P
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)230Please respect copyright.PENANAfFeUGIumb9
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒230Please respect copyright.PENANAArxjfqMjH4
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚230Please respect copyright.PENANAGUHohpvtUF
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失230Please respect copyright.PENANAKynwNWaaJ5
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了230Please respect copyright.PENANAensare8cXW
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性230Please respect copyright.PENANAgQQJnETweN
例如:230Please respect copyright.PENANAVYr6Ma4FPB
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢230Please respect copyright.PENANADWB6uDmraD
>放學忘記去放乖乖230Please respect copyright.PENANA6ob83pglQr
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂230Please respect copyright.PENANA0Sku2bF1hT
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些230Please respect copyright.PENANAq8CReLOH4E
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性230Please respect copyright.PENANA4tGiQY5eRE
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》230Please respect copyright.PENANAGLmm73Bk4o
宛如聊齋的古風故事230Please respect copyright.PENANAJwncYdVHx2
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?230Please respect copyright.PENANACtMH3VwrXA
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋230Please respect copyright.PENANAQEiBogNeH0
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)230Please respect copyright.PENANAp70gk5MyjD
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?230Please respect copyright.PENANAFPspkpFojN
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度230Please respect copyright.PENANAIlRfsPB7pI
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD230Please respect copyright.PENANAmZUIkUqPKg
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌230Please respect copyright.PENANAOn03w3woQC
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了230Please respect copyright.PENANAl9Hq8Oslct
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞230Please respect copyright.PENANAmJFCbXwk1h
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間230Please respect copyright.PENANA1EidbLOU6k
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠230Please respect copyright.PENANAhlKEHQ7OJP
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖230Please respect copyright.PENANAJn3gaKw2DK
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒230Please respect copyright.PENANAEYnhYgLI6w
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說230Please respect copyright.PENANAc1zHUqDEFb
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》230Please respect copyright.PENANAe72ON6NjB1
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞230Please respect copyright.PENANA9FjAFXWvkx
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!