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以有限的字數建構完整的世界觀不容易,我認為作者在這方面是成功的。578Please respect copyright.PENANAwExk5gcCcr
不過可以再留意內容的剪裁,精減一些與主線無關的敍述,如三位後人的感情線,可使情節更為緊湊。8964 copyright protection574PENANAkXpIHxgRUX 維尼
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優點是世界觀與故事完成度高,打鬥戲精彩。578Please respect copyright.PENANAEsnF81Cp7A
缺點是劇情枝節太多,只是整體瑕不掩瑜,算是海選中其中一篇精品。8964 copyright protection574PENANAtSi4FNgsKn 維尼
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1. 此等短篇字數有限,切忌得隴望蜀。不要野心太大創造過多角色,在一萬以內的短文之中,人多反而容易手腳亂。578Please respect copyright.PENANAPUuEZoSb1v
2. 對於傳統茅山道術知識的引用需要注意一下,適量拋出會顯得淵博,但過多則會適得其反,有賣弄之感。578Please respect copyright.PENANAtgHvolzLD1
3. 如第一點所言,三名小主角其實性格同存在感都不算突出,比較流於表面,尤其感情戲其實頗嫌累贅。下次設計劇情時要注意一下。8964 copyright protection574PENANAgasjLRlCL1 維尼
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嗯578Please respect copyright.PENANARyo4E7kWLP
這個作者是我認識的人呢578Please respect copyright.PENANAcqcyarYZWx
見證到他的成長也挺欣慰的8964 copyright protection574PENANAz5AWrR6DEW 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection574PENANAaOPK0HCEQj 維尼
東南老人家模式啟動了8964 copyright protection574PENANADbxj8Q2xG0 維尼
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東叔,一起來玩⭕️❌吧8964 copyright protection574PENANAo5Fxk53yXU 維尼
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儀洛羊578Please respect copyright.PENANAZHw12rnRqF
郁郁如煙消於天578Please respect copyright.PENANA17tozlkqsI
涼靜融578Please respect copyright.PENANAhjH9ZWZzFu
Blackative578Please respect copyright.PENANAff8QfVXsKm
日勻578Please respect copyright.PENANACZW7RCdQzt
亡魂之筆578Please respect copyright.PENANAf3VXqmSfsQ
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還有兩位由誠意✊✊打救的參賽者8964 copyright protection574PENANAU5Qhd4n2so 維尼
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文楓8964 copyright protection574PENANA6sNg0W1TM1 維尼
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接下來請三位退場578Please respect copyright.PENANAKmVWOs1tF6
到自己的休息室給8位候選區的參賽者排邀請順序哦!8964 copyright protection574PENANAzhhGes5BMD 維尼
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我覺得下一站天后是很可惜的8964 copyright protection574PENANAeoEn4VWUF3 維尼
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嗯,就是子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億。8964 copyright protection574PENANAvbnMtUY8Se 維尼
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你也是打滿高分的。8964 copyright protection574PENANAPFWFTyDR0l 維尼
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嗯8964 copyright protection574PENANA1TqqSnwgC9 維尼
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如果當初沒有用到✊✊的機會578Please respect copyright.PENANAnc7ZlVnIAr
你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection574PENANAKriIecJW6I 維尼
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應該也不會。因為拳拳是直接順序第一名的選項578Please respect copyright.PENANAc1pGUbx7Am
我覺得作者如果入選的話是紀言會比較符合他/她的風格578Please respect copyright.PENANA9jiyEqZZ1S
我雖然能給到意見,但要入隊的話我還是想選一些我自覺能幫助更多的同學8964 copyright protection574PENANACMu9qkR8YW 維尼
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你有甚麼想跟選你的參賽者說的嗎?8964 copyright protection574PENANAXtmeE2BlFk 維尼
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多謝選擇我。578Please respect copyright.PENANALsHhJngv1W
希望我作為導師不會讓你們失望。8964 copyright protection574PENANAkt94Zbzuvq 維尼
我能否一個個說?8964 copyright protection574PENANAKHRt0qEczD 維尼
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可以的8964 copyright protection574PENANABNDl8722di 維尼
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首先跟日匀 說吧。8964 copyright protection574PENANA9s0eEZavnK 維尼
其實見到你的文章,我感覺見到一個強化版的「當年自己」。578Please respect copyright.PENANA9OZwBki4gA
你的文字功力甚至比我當年紮實。劇情弱項也跟我當年類同。578Please respect copyright.PENANA8wC8QuqUqm
所以我很希望能幫助你寫武俠,加油!8964 copyright protection574PENANAPMqKiSrZEJ 維尼
然後到過海巴士的洛羊。578Please respect copyright.PENANAawyLOHuqns
很驚訝你那麼高水準的會選擇我,希望我不會讓你失望!8964 copyright protection574PENANAxdaSJiZZjA 維尼
最後到逆時。578Please respect copyright.PENANArm2IYw1EOy
嗯 ..... 你的文很對我腦波,所以。。。。多謝!!8964 copyright protection574PENANAvjV11v9lsV 維尼
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你會先選那些首選你的參賽者嗎?8964 copyright protection574PENANAKalrdLWTHs 維尼
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其實不會的578Please respect copyright.PENANAyK1QDb5zGZ
但碰巧這次三個都極中我8964 copyright protection574PENANATBwZ1mc5jw 維尼
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明白。578Please respect copyright.PENANAUSL6ZLOmHm
那你邀請順序已經想好了嗎?578Please respect copyright.PENANAyO3ESUgyir
有讓你猶豫的部分?8964 copyright protection574PENANArPWJ9sKR4R 維尼
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想好了8964 copyright protection574PENANAxrSlxeIzv9 維尼
1. #19 過海巴士 儀洛羊578Please respect copyright.PENANAYJ45OTbhck
2. #20 他的故事 日勻8964 copyright protection574PENANAFPKgYrSQue 維尼
其他全棄權讓給另外兩位吧www8964 copyright protection574PENANA4vHl8mni4h 維尼
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竟然這樣!578Please respect copyright.PENANAtA0dAVREmU
你就不怕另外兩位跟你搶嗎?578Please respect copyright.PENANA6zleMkCpsi
這樣你最糟可能只有一人進隊哦!8964 copyright protection574PENANAhinMqLtygO 維尼
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我覺得他們一定不會搶日匀的。578Please respect copyright.PENANAElkOJHd2Sq
另外洛羊他們雖給到很高分,但我覺得他們有另外適合他們的578Please respect copyright.PENANAi874clAScv
應該不會跟我搶的wwwww8964 copyright protection574PENANAupXv4vZboZ 維尼
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好的,一起來看看 東南的Flag……578Please respect copyright.PENANAK5fG8Z7ALM
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wwww578Please respect copyright.PENANAradhTSf4Oy
求不要搶578Please respect copyright.PENANAAECbMTNEmQ
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【楓成預備室】8964 copyright protection574PENANA2txY3UFew4 維尼
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剛才完成了選擇門的部分8964 copyright protection574PENANAYCVVrSyAct 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection574PENANAG9X9djUMvk 維尼
是的578Please respect copyright.PENANAmoWRXiAsze
真是艱難的一部份(汗8964 copyright protection574PENANAliBIHC11k9 維尼
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你有感覺哪位參賽者進不了候選區578Please respect copyright.PENANAlny5kGmz98
很可惜的嗎?8964 copyright protection574PENANA5RWlRuIhYc 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection574PENANAwCqJ2K5cgs 維尼
嗯…578Please respect copyright.PENANA0BvojhKH4z
真要說的話578Please respect copyright.PENANAzAuQQAISXW
子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億是不錯的作品578Please respect copyright.PENANAVaJXi5oD3E
只可惜名額有限8964 copyright protection574PENANAgXHRs9gzvZ 維尼
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那如果✊✊現在還可以用,你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection574PENANA5haWBWn4s0 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection574PENANA7vNyaqTmVO 維尼
也不會,哈哈578Please respect copyright.PENANALaV10ugvEm
因為入選剩下來的選手也很出色8964 copyright protection574PENANAVkhvuuUzRA 維尼
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是的。578Please respect copyright.PENANAagrVIo28PQ
想問一下578Please respect copyright.PENANACNBbXg9Ysz
日勻的作品——他的故事8964 copyright protection574PENANAle3lSvtQl5 維尼
你好像是給他打滿高分的,578Please respect copyright.PENANAQ3EEXmVQeE
但你好似沒有給他舉圈的吧?8964 copyright protection574PENANANZibSdVX0L 維尼
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是的哈哈,大概是圓圈太有限了(眼神死8964 copyright protection574PENANAxRln4kAv1m 維尼
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如果好像文楓落得三叉的下場,你會像紀言那樣出拳嗎?8964 copyright protection574PENANAWODqa9vjGr 維尼
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這個,大概南師父不會給叉哈哈,所以我很放心578Please respect copyright.PENANAgXJQqMNS0g
所以應該也不會8964 copyright protection574PENANACvI4YYmkBX 維尼
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你就算好了他們想法是不是ww8964 copyright protection574PENANA5cDDl3Rirx 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection574PENANAiQYupYjzHr 維尼
沒錯!578Please respect copyright.PENANAG1k066m5i4
你看洗版南師父就知道578Please respect copyright.PENANAGX4jKMQuIA
古風武俠,他不會放過!8964 copyright protection574PENANAdvGmlMbJLn 維尼
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那說回來,8位候選區的選手們,你是會怎麼給他們排邀請優先序呢?578Please respect copyright.PENANAZ3dy1uyBKS
因為你不像另外兩位,已經定了第一名邀請的參賽者578Please respect copyright.PENANA9Bbq2M2zWb
你覺得是比較好、自在?578Please respect copyright.PENANApULD46FJcT
還是比較擔心被搶人呢?8964 copyright protection574PENANAGCxcn7eai4 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection574PENANA5JrKUCT2o9 維尼
也不會特別怕啦哈哈8964 copyright protection574PENANA1RNxsj8RJc 維尼
578Please respect copyright.PENANAYn9wrpLyoo
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【紀言預備室】8964 copyright protection574PENANARgM9PQcAzQ 維尼
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剛完成了選擇門的部分578Please respect copyright.PENANA5iyIX3idwo
有甚麼感想的嗎?8964 copyright protection574PENANAJo5G3Ajv1Z 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection574PENANAU50zpchuUm 維尼
真的讓人緊張呢578Please respect copyright.PENANApIpY95Y0Un
其實很多參賽者的實力相差真的不遠578Please respect copyright.PENANAQpVrijJrwx
在抉擇時真的讓人加倍為難8964 copyright protection574PENANAZFfUmem7GK 維尼
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有沒有覺得可惜的參賽者?竟然進不了候選區這樣?8964 copyright protection574PENANAMeio3mo17M 維尼
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其實此去拾年我覺得是寫得不錯的578Please respect copyright.PENANAWpLlA1Mac4
可是類似的作品有點多578Please respect copyright.PENANAxWYJhcHaC0
真的很可惜8964 copyright protection574PENANAq0xCgYzzuX 維尼
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這是你當時沒有給出✊的原因嗎?8964 copyright protection574PENANAhjqsDbscCr 維尼
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此去拾年和十年陽光、董小姐都被我歸到同一類中578Please respect copyright.PENANAGwV8z95thu
嘛,他也寫得很好,但另外兩篇真的是更好8964 copyright protection574PENANAPBLgvpewQs 維尼
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明白。578Please respect copyright.PENANAv4gXTFddlm
那現在進入了給候選區參賽者排邀請順序的環節578Please respect copyright.PENANAINrMtHpgz8
你有甚麼想法嗎?8964 copyright protection574PENANAVNrtZ3Exvh 維尼
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說實在的578Please respect copyright.PENANAEurjOm2H1B
我超級糾結578Please respect copyright.PENANAdFl4hvu0bb
尤其是(竟然)有那麼多參賽者選我,壓力倍增呢8964 copyright protection574PENANASxTXSuRS1y 維尼
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有想好要根據甚麼去排的?8964 copyright protection574PENANAodPgjN6nuD 維尼
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本來是要跟分數排的,可是後來考慮到題材的問題,又再排了一次578Please respect copyright.PENANAwPbP7m1MeX
如上所說,十年陽光和董小姐是在最高分之列578Please respect copyright.PENANA9s1H1luezk
可是他們的題材有點類近578Please respect copyright.PENANA2396qQdKsX
我想讓我的學員們能接觸多一點不同的類型,這樣聊起來才更有趣578Please respect copyright.PENANAiYuVBGPFh0
所以嘛,即使二人都是最高分,我還是只會選一個8964 copyright protection574PENANAwI0P17I9Nl 維尼
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說回來,你是參賽者們的最搶手首選導師,就最多人選你8964 copyright protection574PENANADVMYGyRhSU 維尼
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當初沒想過這麼多人選我的哈哈578Please respect copyright.PENANA7zEvQUuITR
畢竟楓成是penana人氣王578Please respect copyright.PENANAQLnLUg858N
東南也筆耕了十多年578Please respect copyright.PENANAYoOo2OCjGn
說到資歷和寫作的字數,可能我是最少的呢哈哈578Please respect copyright.PENANAPrrtCnLeTc
不過也感謝大家的愛戴8964 copyright protection574PENANAUgisijtiQb 維尼
我先說我的首選好了578Please respect copyright.PENANAok2TsfJekw
(是甚麼呢???????)(自帶效果!)8964 copyright protection574PENANASjmZw7C6kT 維尼
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不是你說要早點睡的嗎!www8964 copyright protection574PENANAzmM0W4OrC9 維尼
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好了喇578Please respect copyright.PENANAPgVzyfJ4qp
第一位是十年陽光喇578Please respect copyright.PENANAKH9azSe1Ba
我要分享一下我的心路歷程XPXP8964 copyright protection574PENANAJGxaom9okT 維尼
零器8964 copyright protection574PENANAfECWLyuJOQ 維尼
可以的~8964 copyright protection574PENANAEeP1rUUmkV 維尼
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第二位就是成功獲得我一拳的獵巫!578Please respect copyright.PENANAA6etPekuwe
第三位其實糾結了超~~~~~~~~~~~久578Please respect copyright.PENANA9witqsbLE5
是在輪候者和天使的惡作劇之間掙扎了好久8964 copyright protection574PENANA1NUBdZ83YN 維尼
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但輪候者的Blackative 很厲害,寫了兩篇不一樣的作品~8964 copyright protection574PENANAuBa0TnsKKl 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection574PENANAUIaSXRmenR 維尼
輪候者是非常成熟的作品,風格也已經定形了578Please respect copyright.PENANAPQ3TGJocNf
時限內能寫兩篇也真的很厲害578Please respect copyright.PENANAmXaTdzmDVE
不過時間小偷的話我就稍嫌有點負面了578Please respect copyright.PENANAof56oX7HOM
寫作作為興趣,應該是先令自己開心,然後再看看其他的可能的578Please respect copyright.PENANAOVvyA2NWlx
至於天使的惡作劇,雖然分數上不及輪候者,但是他的文風很對我的腦波,我也覺得他有潛力578Please respect copyright.PENANAodSFar0JIE
所以第三位一直在他們之間糾結8964 copyright protection574PENANAsdYoTCKiuG 維尼
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最後,你的選擇是……8964 copyright protection574PENANAr6EmuRete4 維尼
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就是⋯⋯578Please respect copyright.PENANAbHhWbLM05c
天使的惡作劇!578Please respect copyright.PENANAKQKXo3SX8e
我希望Blackative能被其他導師收入戰隊578Please respect copyright.PENANAw5EQTJjI0z
他的實力是值得的578Please respect copyright.PENANAC7N3wQL64q
奈何只有三個位置578Please respect copyright.PENANAYpumHOagP2
(嘛,規則也是我們三人定的,也沒辦法喇)8964 copyright protection574PENANAnm3qvp7SfC 維尼
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好了……我們就先聽紀言的頭三順序,不然要天亮了8964 copyright protection574PENANAwlHnA9eeXK 維尼
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嘮嘮叨叨了一大堆呢哈哈8964 copyright protection574PENANA20J3wtsZpB 維尼
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謝謝紀言😂8964 copyright protection574PENANA7ZaWrDzeZe 維尼
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(邀請順序收集中……)8964 copyright protection574PENANAD7nYRMaKk9 維尼
(節目組整理中……)8964 copyright protection574PENANAOmaA8Ijmtr 維尼
開始送出組隊邀請!8964 copyright protection574PENANANpuLS97R36 維尼
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【參賽者預備室】8964 copyright protection574PENANAf7aB4wr8E4 維尼
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有些參賽者和導師們是兩情相悅的,578Please respect copyright.PENANA00pGlrZuy1
最終修成正果,可喜可賀!8964 copyright protection574PENANA8YF9dTmx96 維尼
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恭喜你,成功加入東南/ 紀言 / 楓成戰隊!8964 copyright protection574PENANAEiSfqzzD86 維尼
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:O 我以為係21號先有結果😂 btw thx8964 copyright protection574PENANA4UoZCf3Jsx 維尼
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哇!真架?🥰8964 copyright protection574PENANAqyBjoqg1wi 維尼
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收到了,感謝你這麼晚了還要通知我們這群選手8964 copyright protection574PENANAGgth8hdAxQ 維尼
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感激涕零!🥺🥺8964 copyright protection574PENANAZrPdsU0JQ2 維尼
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我入圍了?8964 copyright protection574PENANAzSTIj3Boi4 維尼
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多謝你8964 copyright protection574PENANAkENLs5qoVJ 維尼
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終於等到消息😭😭8964 copyright protection574PENANAqqwPVrniIt 維尼
578Please respect copyright.PENANAVBpjSrLqde
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而有些參賽者就要陷入天人交戰的選擇!578Please respect copyright.PENANABnVVWIs4dc
面對非首選導師的邀請,是要接受,還是……8964 copyright protection574PENANAWpL9UEFIjb 維尼
578Please respect copyright.PENANAZlQ6m1u2WC
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導師A誠邀你進入他的戰隊,請問你願意接受嗎?578Please respect copyright.PENANAF3yXMPhX6V
提提你,你首選係導師B8964 copyright protection574PENANAV3bDj0IP6q 維尼
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雖然冇被導師B選中有啲可惜,但我其實唔介意被分到邊一隊(搔頭8964 copyright protection574PENANAnD2fS0I7nj 維尼
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但導師B有冇講咩?8964 copyright protection574PENANAJH5MKMyAb4 維尼
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或者我解釋下先,個情況係:578Please respect copyright.PENANATrRAcCZE9x
導師A對你嘅邀請順序高過導師B。578Please respect copyright.PENANA74Pw6vYdFB
如果你拒絕咗,有可能會收到導師B嘅邀請,578Please respect copyright.PENANAno4VzajM5K
但前提係:當時導師B戰隊未滿人。578Please respect copyright.PENANA3UzWkmCHCE
如果導師B戰隊已經滿人,但你又拒絕咗導師A,578Please respect copyright.PENANAG5rVMFVVVq
你就只可以參與復活賽,睇下仲有冇機會入導師B戰隊。8964 copyright protection574PENANAnLZ5EqtJG1 維尼
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咁複雜既ODO?!578Please respect copyright.PENANAIOVH1WR9yJ
喊出嚟,都好賭博喎(つД`)8964 copyright protection574PENANAoPLyietDyR 維尼
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依個我最遲可以幾時答你?8964 copyright protection574PENANAUgFdHvXwli 維尼
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可能……盡快?8964 copyright protection574PENANAXTbEsxTs2F 維尼
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我今晚墊高枕頭諗諗,聽日覆你唔好意思(つД`)8964 copyright protection574PENANAcwpOuZ3wGe 維尼
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咁就加入導師A嘅戰隊578Please respect copyright.PENANA7FRtmohc2H
我估,咁姐係佢幾欣賞我578Please respect copyright.PENANA3WXq7x6e7B
掛8964 copyright protection574PENANA5pDKHTSs6w 維尼
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我決定好了(超快578Please respect copyright.PENANAy20Db7FWcj
我都係入導師A隊578Please respect copyright.PENANAKb6AlStpzM
唔太敢賭(つД`)8964 copyright protection574PENANAFP2CY6jWdW 維尼
578Please respect copyright.PENANAIySpEM78Jr
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【鏡頭關上後】8964 copyright protection574PENANArmd9waIIK4 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection574PENANADg4epsNQhq 維尼
我有少少寄語卑Blackative,我不如Pm你?8964 copyright protection574PENANAGd2QoLonM3 維尼
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好8964 copyright protection574PENANARaQ05ek8kl 維尼
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首先要講一句好遺憾你入唔到戰隊賽。578Please respect copyright.PENANAQYOhxU5hTq
你兩篇文喺我眼中都係本次比賽裏面的精品,但我選擇戰隊成員時,實力雖然係其中一個考慮因素,但另外更多係會考慮成員風格同自己夾唔夾,同埋每位成員的潛力等等因素。578Please respect copyright.PENANA1BBOdzgmCa
你卑我感覺係一個已經相當成熟,好有自己一套嘅作者,無論係時間小偷定係豬果篇我覺得都發揮得唔錯,我讀時都頗有眼前一亮的感覺。578Please respect copyright.PENANAmvYiKkKOd0
但奈何戰隊賽名額有限,我揀的三位亦係我認為最適合我戰隊的成員,所以就只能忍痛無向你拋出橄欖枝,我相信其餘兩位導師應該都同我一樣,對你落選係感到遺憾的。578Please respect copyright.PENANAXAoilJqKkz
我希望你唔好因為呢個結果就感到氣餒,希望你能夠堅持同繼續寫落去。如果你參加復活賽的話,我亦會非常期待你復活賽的表現,加油!8964 copyright protection574PENANAaouZJWOD49 維尼
【海選選秀環節】完!8964 copyright protection574PENANAN9uSqDXpKE 維尼
多謝收看!8964 copyright protection574PENANAcKtepIMpjS 維尼
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【第二階段:戰隊/復活賽】「太歲兵團 X 萌動學生小說集2021」寫作營8964 copyright protection574PENANAIm140xGtci 維尼
之後還會有很多寫作分享跟幕後花絮讓你看,不要錯過囉!8964 copyright protection574PENANAhIkS8w6tf5 維尼
參賽者們,8964 copyright protection574PENANAFWTMjkY6EP 維尼
第二階段還有三十二天就要結束了!8964 copyright protection574PENANAW5D4AJSHeA 維尼
注意時間哦!8964 copyright protection574PENANAeC3Udr7u0o 維尼
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