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筆流暢舒服,看上去與故事匹配,讀得非常舒服。在這個故事塑造這個氛圍裏面,其實都沒有什麼好挑剔的了。579Please respect copyright.PENANASk9je6KiZ0
唯獨有點附加意見就是,既然作者已經非常擅於掌握節奏同寫到好溫馨細膩的感情,建議日後寫愛情小說時,在劇情或者世界觀裏面下點功夫,讓故事看上去「特別」一點。579Please respect copyright.PENANA9SvObD665H
畢竟如今現實純愛的故事已經有點不待見,所以要吸引讀者 / 編輯眼球的話,就可能要在其他方面花點功夫哦。加油!8964 copyright protection575PENANA04r4W6risQ 維尼
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單就此篇而言已是無甚可再挑剔之處。8964 copyright protection575PENANA7gyTUq9Tuc 維尼
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非常好的作品啊,勵志,愛情,熱血都有,很有《爆漫》的感覺。579Please respect copyright.PENANAZDMDK4lLgZ
整篇作品都好完整,沒什麼好挑剔的。579Please respect copyright.PENANAVFuVXE4xCe
唯一可以挑刺就是對於「十年」這點算是較為牽強。如果寫長少少的話,可以是作者想17歲出書但失敗,然後再用十年參賽、投稿,成為一個知名作家,這樣就會扣題扣得好很多了。579Please respect copyright.PENANA5GEkAqOj7V
其實這一篇也可以寫長,變成一部5、6萬的中短篇小說,我覺得也挺有潛質的。8964 copyright protection575PENANArmz5AW5Mb4 維尼
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很不錯的玄幻作品。其實這種參賽作品,更是限制了一萬字內的比賽,要撰寫玄幻或異世界類的作品是困難的。579Please respect copyright.PENANA5Ng5093X43
首先很聰明先用現代及香港作背景,同時以茅山道法這香港人較熟悉的元素,變相不需要花費太多筆墨就能夠寫出玄幻元素。579Please respect copyright.PENANA8V6UUGMOmN
整體從文筆、劇情、橋段等等實屬不俗。579Please respect copyright.PENANAo1zHjsQIbu
期待你的成長。8964 copyright protection575PENANAujUsMA13Vu 維尼
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為了楓成而入寫作坑的人……莫名熱血啊!579Please respect copyright.PENANAzjLlsQOUM8
以有限的字數建構完整的世界觀不容易,我認為作者在這方面是成功的。579Please respect copyright.PENANALjmnx61bBm
不過可以再留意內容的剪裁,精減一些與主線無關的敍述,如三位後人的感情線,可使情節更為緊湊。8964 copyright protection575PENANAh57sQAeGn4 維尼
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優點是世界觀與故事完成度高,打鬥戲精彩。579Please respect copyright.PENANAkj4AmTXyT2
缺點是劇情枝節太多,只是整體瑕不掩瑜,算是海選中其中一篇精品。8964 copyright protection575PENANAnh09BWNhGe 維尼
以下有幾個建議:579Please respect copyright.PENANA4PEW2O2w05
1. 此等短篇字數有限,切忌得隴望蜀。不要野心太大創造過多角色,在一萬以內的短文之中,人多反而容易手腳亂。579Please respect copyright.PENANAFIjZltW3os
2. 對於傳統茅山道術知識的引用需要注意一下,適量拋出會顯得淵博,但過多則會適得其反,有賣弄之感。579Please respect copyright.PENANAno7yoMxwCJ
3. 如第一點所言,三名小主角其實性格同存在感都不算突出,比較流於表面,尤其感情戲其實頗嫌累贅。下次設計劇情時要注意一下。8964 copyright protection575PENANAcAVFUTNdHa 維尼
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我是很想給pass的喇(遙望節目組)8964 copyright protection575PENANADdV3mXL2NW 維尼
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嗯579Please respect copyright.PENANA0tDDHSOI55
這個作者是我認識的人呢579Please respect copyright.PENANAtzavtWgg7u
見證到他的成長也挺欣慰的8964 copyright protection575PENANAKaLLCg30qv 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection575PENANAQyvr29iA6f 維尼
東南老人家模式啟動了8964 copyright protection575PENANACgCUY38fPX 維尼
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想當年出現了⋯⋯8964 copyright protection575PENANARc4l4FUgT3 維尼
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來,579Please respect copyright.PENANAZxpkUR5nLr
東叔,一起來玩⭕️❌吧8964 copyright protection575PENANAjwvwepUxn2 維尼
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(很想給⭕️的⋯⋯)8964 copyright protection575PENANAOUbyRtkLp9 維尼
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恭喜恭喜8964 copyright protection575PENANAOAMo29t1YS 維尼
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亡魂之筆可以進入候選區囉!8964 copyright protection575PENANAtCLelqmYEF 維尼
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參賽者們的評審階段都完成囉!8964 copyright protection575PENANA7zJRTBgw6t 維尼
進入候選區的分別是8964 copyright protection575PENANA7gJ2BNnWaE 維尼
儀洛羊579Please respect copyright.PENANAFROsx79IGp
郁郁如煙消於天579Please respect copyright.PENANAjSaHFHFDo5
涼靜融579Please respect copyright.PENANAXRvtztRSOj
Blackative579Please respect copyright.PENANAsAAgkSUQLz
日勻579Please respect copyright.PENANAW5Sg4nu3Tu
亡魂之筆579Please respect copyright.PENANA96NCV81K6S
浮游詩墨579Please respect copyright.PENANAyeI6hT66tr
陌情有落8964 copyright protection575PENANAr5yDG6gSZ3 維尼
還有兩位由誠意✊✊打救的參賽者8964 copyright protection575PENANAJpNcZq1MH7 維尼
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文楓8964 copyright protection575PENANA3cDbNbiXNV 維尼
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接下來請三位退場579Please respect copyright.PENANAVwDF5IjiqP
到自己的休息室給8位候選區的參賽者排邀請順序哦!8964 copyright protection575PENANAGXEciKJQZO 維尼
【東南預備室】8964 copyright protection575PENANATaoEUa0blo 維尼
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你有沒有覺得哪個參賽者進不了候選區,很可惜的呢?8964 copyright protection575PENANAAkta2crbwb 維尼
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我覺得下一站天后是很可惜的8964 copyright protection575PENANA8gkS3Hwh74 維尼
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嗯,就是子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億。8964 copyright protection575PENANAV7W9bpdKUi 維尼
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對8964 copyright protection575PENANAxzQUGZin1m 維尼
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你也是打滿高分的。8964 copyright protection575PENANARc24wUt17D 維尼
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嗯8964 copyright protection575PENANAVaiLMDLXjI 維尼
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如果當初沒有用到✊✊的機會579Please respect copyright.PENANAYoQCigIfhk
你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection575PENANA2qWRadSfOZ 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection575PENANAtllr153B0Z 維尼
應該也不會。因為拳拳是直接順序第一名的選項579Please respect copyright.PENANA9HmIxpmQcX
我覺得作者如果入選的話是紀言會比較符合他/她的風格579Please respect copyright.PENANAmKlE2BCVI4
我雖然能給到意見,但要入隊的話我還是想選一些我自覺能幫助更多的同學8964 copyright protection575PENANAicNjekGsFW 維尼
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你有甚麼想跟選你的參賽者說的嗎?8964 copyright protection575PENANA2wI0begq71 維尼
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多謝選擇我。579Please respect copyright.PENANAw4VbTE8YJr
希望我作為導師不會讓你們失望。8964 copyright protection575PENANAXcjlGKJOZl 維尼
我能否一個個說?8964 copyright protection575PENANAqsYVgW4JNb 維尼
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可以的8964 copyright protection575PENANACwyRDCAXEk 維尼
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首先跟日匀 說吧。8964 copyright protection575PENANAMp0ZOFu9ZB 維尼
其實見到你的文章,我感覺見到一個強化版的「當年自己」。579Please respect copyright.PENANAbBVV4Krrgl
你的文字功力甚至比我當年紮實。劇情弱項也跟我當年類同。579Please respect copyright.PENANAT0SbcWz50V
所以我很希望能幫助你寫武俠,加油!8964 copyright protection575PENANAtDSj39UsrO 維尼
然後到過海巴士的洛羊。579Please respect copyright.PENANAIl6deMVXva
很驚訝你那麼高水準的會選擇我,希望我不會讓你失望!8964 copyright protection575PENANA9SYWfq3MgO 維尼
最後到逆時。579Please respect copyright.PENANAoubmRSpf4D
嗯 ..... 你的文很對我腦波,所以。。。。多謝!!8964 copyright protection575PENANA643Db8gbIo 維尼
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你會先選那些首選你的參賽者嗎?8964 copyright protection575PENANACe7q1vcIhQ 維尼
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其實不會的579Please respect copyright.PENANAFXJ6y40Ove
但碰巧這次三個都極中我8964 copyright protection575PENANAe4YEexERht 維尼
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明白。579Please respect copyright.PENANAvIwdWHJoA4
那你邀請順序已經想好了嗎?579Please respect copyright.PENANAq1pjdSy9CT
有讓你猶豫的部分?8964 copyright protection575PENANANQ6AODHTf9 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection575PENANAhncbi37lpr 維尼
想好了8964 copyright protection575PENANA15TWvOUC2L 維尼
1. #19 過海巴士 儀洛羊579Please respect copyright.PENANAD3aWSmm9C0
2. #20 他的故事 日勻8964 copyright protection575PENANAnnOTuyRFyc 維尼
其他全棄權讓給另外兩位吧www8964 copyright protection575PENANAzUDFP2DQ10 維尼
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竟然這樣!579Please respect copyright.PENANAOU1BjbUB8c
你就不怕另外兩位跟你搶嗎?579Please respect copyright.PENANAjtRKY3LUIT
這樣你最糟可能只有一人進隊哦!8964 copyright protection575PENANAS4KqpnP5x5 維尼
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我覺得他們一定不會搶日匀的。579Please respect copyright.PENANAk7XhdzdPDU
另外洛羊他們雖給到很高分,但我覺得他們有另外適合他們的579Please respect copyright.PENANA6ARRyMDkHt
應該不會跟我搶的wwwww8964 copyright protection575PENANAPq6SUojKCp 維尼
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好的,一起來看看 東南的Flag……579Please respect copyright.PENANA3u0viw3Gnl
www8964 copyright protection575PENANAuWasdVwR14 維尼
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wwww579Please respect copyright.PENANAnorpZvpGfL
求不要搶579Please respect copyright.PENANA9VpvsxYhiX
😂8964 copyright protection575PENANAErENjC4STg 維尼
579Please respect copyright.PENANAm3h14LjzuC
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【楓成預備室】8964 copyright protection575PENANApBrCmOhXgx 維尼
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剛才完成了選擇門的部分8964 copyright protection575PENANAwfUPEJbHfW 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection575PENANAagPGNBN6kw 維尼
是的579Please respect copyright.PENANAfKWe0tsWxL
真是艱難的一部份(汗8964 copyright protection575PENANAcDANlIR7FO 維尼
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你有感覺哪位參賽者進不了候選區579Please respect copyright.PENANA4Cl4k8EIKG
很可惜的嗎?8964 copyright protection575PENANARdLJUuorKD 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection575PENANAaMPh2RfZdM 維尼
嗯…579Please respect copyright.PENANA77BcIM07v3
真要說的話579Please respect copyright.PENANAs1yK06RK9U
子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億是不錯的作品579Please respect copyright.PENANAaXjUe5DKl2
只可惜名額有限8964 copyright protection575PENANAWzo7su3nEV 維尼
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那如果✊✊現在還可以用,你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection575PENANA8wnMeBtKLr 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection575PENANAmBwTgWfaDt 維尼
也不會,哈哈579Please respect copyright.PENANAWfJnFq5Tl4
因為入選剩下來的選手也很出色8964 copyright protection575PENANAP8IyveDIXs 維尼
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是的。579Please respect copyright.PENANAuLrmEirKkq
想問一下579Please respect copyright.PENANAkt9RyMg2iH
日勻的作品——他的故事8964 copyright protection575PENANA3iRjQR1wuT 維尼
你好像是給他打滿高分的,579Please respect copyright.PENANAG9pf8wNE42
但你好似沒有給他舉圈的吧?8964 copyright protection575PENANArJkI8Kppb3 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection575PENANACBJQ24fcMf 維尼
是的哈哈,大概是圓圈太有限了(眼神死8964 copyright protection575PENANAxXGxJ9EdgZ 維尼
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如果好像文楓落得三叉的下場,你會像紀言那樣出拳嗎?8964 copyright protection575PENANAvLH9YZLBOr 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection575PENANAtd1Ha0V6EX 維尼
這個,大概南師父不會給叉哈哈,所以我很放心579Please respect copyright.PENANAZcbKvbOsd7
所以應該也不會8964 copyright protection575PENANARqL0jN8jEL 維尼
零器8964 copyright protection575PENANAOXT9LG2IL6 維尼
你就算好了他們想法是不是ww8964 copyright protection575PENANAFhOZSPDNh5 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection575PENANAYEYFjpYNye 維尼
沒錯!579Please respect copyright.PENANA1YRAckYGGo
你看洗版南師父就知道579Please respect copyright.PENANAZMkQbNtEcs
古風武俠,他不會放過!8964 copyright protection575PENANAF0lJFMJb7C 維尼
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那說回來,8位候選區的選手們,你是會怎麼給他們排邀請優先序呢?579Please respect copyright.PENANAaohpXXufMf
因為你不像另外兩位,已經定了第一名邀請的參賽者579Please respect copyright.PENANA0poxnOvMxJ
你覺得是比較好、自在?579Please respect copyright.PENANAPrheIqtWAY
還是比較擔心被搶人呢?8964 copyright protection575PENANAJCbx5aE25v 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection575PENANAYeoCweCZD3 維尼
也不會特別怕啦哈哈8964 copyright protection575PENANAGwWG8vjL7q 維尼
579Please respect copyright.PENANAvHGlFL12UR
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【紀言預備室】8964 copyright protection575PENANA6puEaNaXqD 維尼
零器8964 copyright protection575PENANATmBjFW7ww1 維尼
剛完成了選擇門的部分579Please respect copyright.PENANAoHvKHJXx4r
有甚麼感想的嗎?8964 copyright protection575PENANADLOh29lVAY 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection575PENANAlbS4gnHCF0 維尼
真的讓人緊張呢579Please respect copyright.PENANA1Kh8ko3EGq
其實很多參賽者的實力相差真的不遠579Please respect copyright.PENANAq4KGZrSWbx
在抉擇時真的讓人加倍為難8964 copyright protection575PENANA3YieLIoYGZ 維尼
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有沒有覺得可惜的參賽者?竟然進不了候選區這樣?8964 copyright protection575PENANAh8rCgPYsXh 維尼
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其實此去拾年我覺得是寫得不錯的579Please respect copyright.PENANAwGcAZyxJzl
可是類似的作品有點多579Please respect copyright.PENANAXtyUZvBFGX
真的很可惜8964 copyright protection575PENANAU9wOA5Oa6C 維尼
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這是你當時沒有給出✊的原因嗎?8964 copyright protection575PENANAgGG0pd9IC4 維尼
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此去拾年和十年陽光、董小姐都被我歸到同一類中579Please respect copyright.PENANAeBUN2HqE2u
嘛,他也寫得很好,但另外兩篇真的是更好8964 copyright protection575PENANAdj6D3BewOh 維尼
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明白。579Please respect copyright.PENANAbRz5JEnJIP
那現在進入了給候選區參賽者排邀請順序的環節579Please respect copyright.PENANAbQ3QvczBv0
你有甚麼想法嗎?8964 copyright protection575PENANAozDZUO9RnU 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection575PENANAxspD26IJ2d 維尼
說實在的579Please respect copyright.PENANAUoaHT5oSWk
我超級糾結579Please respect copyright.PENANAqr05GOgRq6
尤其是(竟然)有那麼多參賽者選我,壓力倍增呢8964 copyright protection575PENANA0sJ1gEqJOz 維尼
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有想好要根據甚麼去排的?8964 copyright protection575PENANA7RrOqlq1Vh 維尼
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本來是要跟分數排的,可是後來考慮到題材的問題,又再排了一次579Please respect copyright.PENANARyh9OU0f7E
如上所說,十年陽光和董小姐是在最高分之列579Please respect copyright.PENANAR6tTiOg4hy
可是他們的題材有點類近579Please respect copyright.PENANAe5F6vpqBuc
我想讓我的學員們能接觸多一點不同的類型,這樣聊起來才更有趣579Please respect copyright.PENANAuDJQfipIvj
所以嘛,即使二人都是最高分,我還是只會選一個8964 copyright protection575PENANAx915kWXqxS 維尼
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說回來,你是參賽者們的最搶手首選導師,就最多人選你8964 copyright protection575PENANAHzfuxcjsvU 維尼
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當初沒想過這麼多人選我的哈哈579Please respect copyright.PENANATmjWnGZe6x
畢竟楓成是penana人氣王579Please respect copyright.PENANARuQcnnknzt
東南也筆耕了十多年579Please respect copyright.PENANABaLKh7iwvP
說到資歷和寫作的字數,可能我是最少的呢哈哈579Please respect copyright.PENANAWa5ETCr3Kc
不過也感謝大家的愛戴8964 copyright protection575PENANAm88fW9YAFZ 維尼
我先說我的首選好了579Please respect copyright.PENANAm9E1n97qjE
(是甚麼呢???????)(自帶效果!)8964 copyright protection575PENANA7Z7rKua3oL 維尼
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不是你說要早點睡的嗎!www8964 copyright protection575PENANAMdnYdoZvBO 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection575PENANASg6QU21kA9 維尼
好了喇579Please respect copyright.PENANAv3cJN5X1GA
第一位是十年陽光喇579Please respect copyright.PENANAmIcWN8jy0I
我要分享一下我的心路歷程XPXP8964 copyright protection575PENANAOoSBlhJpUf 維尼
零器8964 copyright protection575PENANAZfiWrsmx9t 維尼
可以的~8964 copyright protection575PENANAaXj5Ib5Lfr 維尼
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第二位就是成功獲得我一拳的獵巫!579Please respect copyright.PENANABzx7H8H6z2
第三位其實糾結了超~~~~~~~~~~~久579Please respect copyright.PENANAHCfSd6Jydt
是在輪候者和天使的惡作劇之間掙扎了好久8964 copyright protection575PENANAA3IbZ6OJhb 維尼
零器8964 copyright protection575PENANAiCEHXC9Tg3 維尼
但輪候者的Blackative 很厲害,寫了兩篇不一樣的作品~8964 copyright protection575PENANAYi09DScePR 維尼
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輪候者是非常成熟的作品,風格也已經定形了579Please respect copyright.PENANA5JqqVYxnsb
時限內能寫兩篇也真的很厲害579Please respect copyright.PENANAAD46SsU9y0
不過時間小偷的話我就稍嫌有點負面了579Please respect copyright.PENANAOtmp46rA5T
寫作作為興趣,應該是先令自己開心,然後再看看其他的可能的579Please respect copyright.PENANA6n30tKsUxA
至於天使的惡作劇,雖然分數上不及輪候者,但是他的文風很對我的腦波,我也覺得他有潛力579Please respect copyright.PENANASfCRjw1eJU
所以第三位一直在他們之間糾結8964 copyright protection575PENANA7EynkbEWkX 維尼
零器8964 copyright protection575PENANANoDdHRsj4S 維尼
最後,你的選擇是……8964 copyright protection575PENANAeamHpSgYHj 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection575PENANAuNXeiPcXpx 維尼
就是⋯⋯579Please respect copyright.PENANAuqTDaaVYXN
天使的惡作劇!579Please respect copyright.PENANAUNLNP0f0Zj
我希望Blackative能被其他導師收入戰隊579Please respect copyright.PENANAnaqtFebP8Y
他的實力是值得的579Please respect copyright.PENANAec4QEPqLZY
奈何只有三個位置579Please respect copyright.PENANA4P8E1ZMUcH
(嘛,規則也是我們三人定的,也沒辦法喇)8964 copyright protection575PENANAuvksKYZejq 維尼
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好了……我們就先聽紀言的頭三順序,不然要天亮了8964 copyright protection575PENANALc5nmTdBdu 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection575PENANAbMKkiTRki1 維尼
嘮嘮叨叨了一大堆呢哈哈8964 copyright protection575PENANAk3ihndAsKF 維尼
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謝謝紀言😂8964 copyright protection575PENANAvct54XSoLc 維尼
579Please respect copyright.PENANA7F5P9aV6Ys
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579Please respect copyright.PENANAGm5LC90gHR
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(邀請順序收集中……)8964 copyright protection575PENANADHRr3Pg9Om 維尼
(節目組整理中……)8964 copyright protection575PENANAQbrf4bzoNq 維尼
開始送出組隊邀請!8964 copyright protection575PENANAiJCbUjxIr7 維尼
579Please respect copyright.PENANA2YHt94Rr35
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【參賽者預備室】8964 copyright protection575PENANAHqsdyJVdq0 維尼
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有些參賽者和導師們是兩情相悅的,579Please respect copyright.PENANAZzoluVhJvW
最終修成正果,可喜可賀!8964 copyright protection575PENANARithfGFoFw 維尼
579Please respect copyright.PENANA7gJOsoZKfH
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恭喜你,成功加入東南/ 紀言 / 楓成戰隊!8964 copyright protection575PENANAL7HfeYM2iU 維尼
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:O 我以為係21號先有結果😂 btw thx8964 copyright protection575PENANAvBHY4uO9w2 維尼
參賽者B8964 copyright protection575PENANArFE9hmClUZ 維尼
哇!真架?🥰8964 copyright protection575PENANA9LIs7IAUai 維尼
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收到了,感謝你這麼晚了還要通知我們這群選手8964 copyright protection575PENANANalQpf4vbS 維尼
參賽者D8964 copyright protection575PENANAsVF5UCvjjm 維尼
感激涕零!🥺🥺8964 copyright protection575PENANAlJiFOdy1Pg 維尼
參賽者E8964 copyright protection575PENANAxucUIwqDJm 維尼
我入圍了?8964 copyright protection575PENANAqIBW7hqX1g 維尼
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多謝你8964 copyright protection575PENANALSzag0555z 維尼
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終於等到消息😭😭8964 copyright protection575PENANANfdyqIqDEQ 維尼
579Please respect copyright.PENANADYaw0h9cxE
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而有些參賽者就要陷入天人交戰的選擇!579Please respect copyright.PENANAS6R6iKtRuz
面對非首選導師的邀請,是要接受,還是……8964 copyright protection575PENANAufC2n22feO 維尼
579Please respect copyright.PENANAwCMHgUFtlX
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導師A誠邀你進入他的戰隊,請問你願意接受嗎?579Please respect copyright.PENANAbraEUoBiCe
提提你,你首選係導師B8964 copyright protection575PENANAcP2TODet9K 維尼
參賽者H8964 copyright protection575PENANAitZBpeto4R 維尼
雖然冇被導師B選中有啲可惜,但我其實唔介意被分到邊一隊(搔頭8964 copyright protection575PENANAOES8bIEtuk 維尼
參賽者I8964 copyright protection575PENANAwt6bygImhk 維尼
但導師B有冇講咩?8964 copyright protection575PENANAFZXe6LZZNy 維尼
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或者我解釋下先,個情況係:579Please respect copyright.PENANARaMvcLUlsp
導師A對你嘅邀請順序高過導師B。579Please respect copyright.PENANAGYzqGMMqXL
如果你拒絕咗,有可能會收到導師B嘅邀請,579Please respect copyright.PENANAYADCFHR19A
但前提係:當時導師B戰隊未滿人。579Please respect copyright.PENANA3gdQJaUwU9
如果導師B戰隊已經滿人,但你又拒絕咗導師A,579Please respect copyright.PENANASXrrUK5jhQ
你就只可以參與復活賽,睇下仲有冇機會入導師B戰隊。8964 copyright protection575PENANA5FzbNq1Q7y 維尼
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咁複雜既ODO?!579Please respect copyright.PENANAZcS3y7T6Pj
喊出嚟,都好賭博喎(つД`)8964 copyright protection575PENANAD806e86p6N 維尼
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依個我最遲可以幾時答你?8964 copyright protection575PENANAJWsqEWEK6A 維尼
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可能……盡快?8964 copyright protection575PENANApTmTiaqpZO 維尼
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我今晚墊高枕頭諗諗,聽日覆你唔好意思(つД`)8964 copyright protection575PENANAbly7qqavhr 維尼
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咁就加入導師A嘅戰隊579Please respect copyright.PENANABRVAb8pl0B
我估,咁姐係佢幾欣賞我579Please respect copyright.PENANASGhr2pi0d0
掛8964 copyright protection575PENANAxHsCHvAYZA 維尼
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我決定好了(超快579Please respect copyright.PENANAkLvVMuw0K7
我都係入導師A隊579Please respect copyright.PENANAZmYnNONR4I
唔太敢賭(つД`)8964 copyright protection575PENANAwPoE8O0NmP 維尼
579Please respect copyright.PENANAYyyIGVtdYz
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【鏡頭關上後】8964 copyright protection575PENANAtm4wrWVP6i 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection575PENANAaSY3XXAmWI 維尼
我有少少寄語卑Blackative,我不如Pm你?8964 copyright protection575PENANAiDX60W8H8X 維尼
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好8964 copyright protection575PENANAqGSo7iId9F 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection575PENANAf6LyUea0o7 維尼
首先要講一句好遺憾你入唔到戰隊賽。579Please respect copyright.PENANA7IHxXcsIpY
你兩篇文喺我眼中都係本次比賽裏面的精品,但我選擇戰隊成員時,實力雖然係其中一個考慮因素,但另外更多係會考慮成員風格同自己夾唔夾,同埋每位成員的潛力等等因素。579Please respect copyright.PENANATyuh4A9MKg
你卑我感覺係一個已經相當成熟,好有自己一套嘅作者,無論係時間小偷定係豬果篇我覺得都發揮得唔錯,我讀時都頗有眼前一亮的感覺。579Please respect copyright.PENANATV09jyfCvN
但奈何戰隊賽名額有限,我揀的三位亦係我認為最適合我戰隊的成員,所以就只能忍痛無向你拋出橄欖枝,我相信其餘兩位導師應該都同我一樣,對你落選係感到遺憾的。579Please respect copyright.PENANAHG9iZSEGuU
我希望你唔好因為呢個結果就感到氣餒,希望你能夠堅持同繼續寫落去。如果你參加復活賽的話,我亦會非常期待你復活賽的表現,加油!8964 copyright protection575PENANAFxpEqkaQkJ 維尼
【海選選秀環節】完!8964 copyright protection575PENANARMDx73Af2c 維尼
多謝收看!8964 copyright protection575PENANAMomfZcP4Cc 維尼
請繼續關注:8964 copyright protection575PENANAW4NEvFDZfn 維尼
【第二階段:戰隊/復活賽】「太歲兵團 X 萌動學生小說集2021」寫作營8964 copyright protection575PENANA7BnznF1pZX 維尼
之後還會有很多寫作分享跟幕後花絮讓你看,不要錯過囉!8964 copyright protection575PENANAANA5rotSQ7 維尼
參賽者們,8964 copyright protection575PENANASLdzkFzFn2 維尼
第二階段還有三十二天就要結束了!8964 copyright protection575PENANAOQTFDXfVDe 維尼
注意時間哦!8964 copyright protection575PENANAY6zkCprJys 維尼
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