作者妳好721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmDSnb5RIY3
受到妳的邀请721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7wdli4baVH
稍微看了下这本佩姬721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGg5BHDCHl6
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGD2W7d116x
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjaAwbrZYx4
现世一堆东西721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡipe9h68P9b
其实就很简单一个道理721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGS7NouXCMN
主角想要被爱721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsSWqQz6Vy6
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiCdtmDJNHm
男主卢克爱721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk07YAu65He
主角就爱回去721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4TzOKSRObd
女主伊莎爱721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0CoaOn8b2o
主角就爱回去721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6tZj3QGePO
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmljs7DRlAC
想要被爱是佩姬的主题721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9Wc6dBCx8B
主角性别不是问题721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6MbqkIZzqw
内心冲突不是问题721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyeGqTPiPV1
主角被爱就迎刃而解721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBHtYvnuxKj
看不懂这点整部书就看不了721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0dcXmg1ODS
妳的书乏人问津是这道理721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq3MyrTzQ9q
作者妳说主角口是心非721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRmScsudlp7
欸我说这不对721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB2fvMsWqCl
这明摆着口非心也非721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8Ax59gmg5t
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEI2WOBtcoA
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfIIz5YkDvM
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCLSmZkXRJB
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzYlUeIM7OR
为了被爱721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv6i4SZFE4w
连原本的性别都不要了721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmsZ0pMpEE8
这主角疯的傻的721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡawlStHSG1b
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZy2kx2Pq0Q
女主伊莎721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpEoHq2FwKz
单纯的色鬼721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxWMi8VPm78
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡez3gjrn7yJ
黑化可能
艾德兰721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw8UCTLoldY
可怜虫阿721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMnTIFXZhFH
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ13MFIEIel3
妳说解释不够721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGL7sNYefxN
我到觉得清楚721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡt5MJBcjY72
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNoQDATrpkP
他为啥强721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaXP98EXlBS
妳啥都没讲721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpM5SS62IE8
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGIV07F58LP
也是除主角外最明白的角色721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSiKbX6NUz5
她就拿来爱主角的721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3onSO4v5D3
功能性角色
还有其他许多721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡveCLqbR1KU
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiqc0Gt1mqg
可以瞧见妳的苦心721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrEVsqFXqeh
我觉得这没必要721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhmaELJtGAc
好的台词提一次够了721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFed9hMGWrk
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkEmPAdLd8J
我倒嫌设定囉嗦721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOJLZdZ5uuI
空白很重要721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1USpJJMzZI
没明白有没明白的好处721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcl9OHghgJK
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbCG2JaYtt2
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0f8pa2nvYZ
我还会继续看的721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN5Rfi1B17C
确实好看721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl3poTzpRbF
希望你这能写完721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiJdB0J1IaM
能放上起点不721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6rOjYOmoYf
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqEuZFEJRDC
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4eXYI4IiJJ
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoMPmCTG6EE
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd05wyjtjYM
感謝你的評文721Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDPERRWbDRw
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