作者妳好725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMcAKEzB4r2
受到妳的邀请725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnYDbeIScLL
稍微看了下这本佩姬725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj6MTeVZw4b
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPa2YIuRu5E
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡL8KkgdHWij
现世一堆东西725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVr5tJHBX5k
其实就很简单一个道理725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡb3MzwrTcLE
主角想要被爱725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5AjuiM11Sm
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ8lxHqzWvf
男主卢克爱725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJzH1DeZGYc
主角就爱回去725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE94c4dDUp5
女主伊莎爱725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6TUGOTDn4f
主角就爱回去725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡb2ew5n9wpr
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡigQeo0LTFQ
想要被爱是佩姬的主题725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9AN3qOi61l
主角性别不是问题725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpZnB0hz2rS
内心冲突不是问题725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfQhMWEbhC8
主角被爱就迎刃而解725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHl19Wg7QYu
看不懂这点整部书就看不了725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ732V8cHdOS
妳的书乏人问津是这道理725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9l5CaC8p5o
作者妳说主角口是心非725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqr5NbZIaOd
欸我说这不对725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ33Upk2dUrH
这明摆着口非心也非725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡktcYdOLJ0E
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQAtmKKKj40
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡb3xb9e8emP
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnMwynFEla8
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw41p57PAEW
为了被爱725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJhKiEyYcDP
连原本的性别都不要了725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdsEaeotnLy
这主角疯的傻的725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAzYeOvwfeJ
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZX9fqXP68p
女主伊莎725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbKopXd5gBC
单纯的色鬼725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGs8Xc28s1H
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ17t9LT6ZDZ
黑化可能
艾德兰725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU3NuOpcFsG
可怜虫阿725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpga6lEDyub
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡO9yJBwqgLe
妳说解释不够725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0AdWxq4I5I
我到觉得清楚725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNicI3lON6s
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTZi1rmNrzN
他为啥强725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSJPHn75yP5
妳啥都没讲725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSMK4WQDwco
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDHxNLb5XpG
也是除主角外最明白的角色725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdeUtu3dNlC
她就拿来爱主角的725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpFENvzI1t8
功能性角色
还有其他许多725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg000oKWTQL
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn7ylgXlcXw
可以瞧见妳的苦心725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXQzJQZ0Ayy
我觉得这没必要725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrdmuys9okR
好的台词提一次够了725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGeojVPuofE
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxgoT8oAMI5
我倒嫌设定囉嗦725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmQPiArj6wA
空白很重要725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmoc7mdtOCr
没明白有没明白的好处725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmv2wfeNsfh
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE9UVPBZwqS
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOy3ObdSRSk
我还会继续看的725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIAwBMiEalv
确实好看725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmpxf4bUWld
希望你这能写完725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcv8aKJyTqt
能放上起点不725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtxfRS34N0j
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqq0l3T35Oo
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡebopzEghiD
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHRw5cT8Gpd
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6jx1LlL3Jt
感謝你的評文725Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHyNIeOE27Z
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