作者妳好710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwGYpacCxfl
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稍微看了下这本佩姬710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFwEgKpe02E
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8DQaF7t1VW
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnuibXVR4iO
现世一堆东西710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTzznK0Metf
其实就很简单一个道理710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe6oT2ZXA1Y
主角想要被爱710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJeVkx4p68H
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcvBqzXTtFH
男主卢克爱710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZaZd9VOsKP
主角就爱回去710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhdP1ajeUYJ
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主角就爱回去710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuV0ie7htLH
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQdfTrprExF
想要被爱是佩姬的主题710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjv3ENUmJEx
主角性别不是问题710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡidz4rBwoTn
内心冲突不是问题710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJMgZOenACL
主角被爱就迎刃而解710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqOiJPhk1TY
看不懂这点整部书就看不了710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq2lPGQE9At
妳的书乏人问津是这道理710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3A1nO7YEvY
作者妳说主角口是心非710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi2GOjJAaCj
欸我说这不对710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1Jz7IplFdG
这明摆着口非心也非710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWdyd4XWCSr
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpbTrPuYV3u
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyyMKcFwgLc
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyE6KXAwJ6R
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeFWyHM6Ss9
为了被爱710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdfdcn7Ud0T
连原本的性别都不要了710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqU2ZOo9Ikb
这主角疯的傻的710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ78oyjRx3Dg
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ0ll7gzSjs
女主伊莎710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAN5T0kVLoC
单纯的色鬼710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4MAft9WbpF
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0QG06c7Rpd
黑化可能
艾德兰710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJgj0B2rsAt
可怜虫阿710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNLfGKgzpyy
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGXgiPS16Vb
妳说解释不够710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG8cyF3amtD
我到觉得清楚710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEVuqhaS9Kw
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzYtFwaHeWB
他为啥强710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYh1FSPXoyw
妳啥都没讲710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgNulRrH8vH
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8Y8w1yZ5qg
也是除主角外最明白的角色710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyF36NIw2BG
她就拿来爱主角的710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrbN2Epybcc
功能性角色
还有其他许多710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡafCunbYz9W
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgQeikaWdjQ
可以瞧见妳的苦心710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzmK7qpwMP3
我觉得这没必要710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkLTSh99puO
好的台词提一次够了710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ99W5n3AQkW
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM2TPfgojCa
我倒嫌设定囉嗦710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDiTV5wvlRH
空白很重要710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmjfjc5SmOm
没明白有没明白的好处710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlplC7lEwes
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnyMl6P3xAE
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ69qg829t0Y
我还会继续看的710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvTDdSUCcQE
确实好看710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPwuKGPO1p6
希望你这能写完710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd9ALyYfRKc
能放上起点不710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZGNu6exgWd
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHPvVMWptZd
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmXDKTNPiz6
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCqig6v8ga8
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCioG8UzrXO
感謝你的評文710Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ250cLhbOuf
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