作者妳好746Please respect copyright.PENANAlNjAEn9G13
受到妳的邀请746Please respect copyright.PENANAzwp5yZWZ2P
稍微看了下这本佩姬746Please respect copyright.PENANAc5LSWTeYjC
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法746Please respect copyright.PENANAzU8lc0vATL
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西746Please respect copyright.PENANAV7wiRC23lE
现世一堆东西746Please respect copyright.PENANAfdMuJ4E39m
其实就很简单一个道理746Please respect copyright.PENANAC6XxlDAazU
主角想要被爱746Please respect copyright.PENANAhpjayySIAp
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱746Please respect copyright.PENANAFnTCfvnSl9
男主卢克爱746Please respect copyright.PENANApklP6qXPMU
主角就爱回去746Please respect copyright.PENANAkkSxseoACe
女主伊莎爱746Please respect copyright.PENANAgVXjzCRAsS
主角就爱回去746Please respect copyright.PENANALV0J2soeOO
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理746Please respect copyright.PENANAplFBDakMnQ
想要被爱是佩姬的主题746Please respect copyright.PENANAThu48bhkBG
主角性别不是问题746Please respect copyright.PENANAkpaRBX9bRi
内心冲突不是问题746Please respect copyright.PENANAKysmhFIKC3
主角被爱就迎刃而解746Please respect copyright.PENANAdod3EeaaXv
看不懂这点整部书就看不了746Please respect copyright.PENANA6DRj6tZ0q5
妳的书乏人问津是这道理746Please respect copyright.PENANA0P3puW2UL9
作者妳说主角口是心非746Please respect copyright.PENANAcXbPld16wR
欸我说这不对746Please respect copyright.PENANAyQDUjSduL7
这明摆着口非心也非746Please respect copyright.PENANAkpoCnTq2et
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰746Please respect copyright.PENANAAl23e2nAl4
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵746Please respect copyright.PENANAWwe7jwyJC0
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜746Please respect copyright.PENANAqGFANHVL4b
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的746Please respect copyright.PENANAjkJNrWBPSb
为了被爱746Please respect copyright.PENANAEvJnpSKhCY
连原本的性别都不要了746Please respect copyright.PENANALH01I44HMd
这主角疯的傻的746Please respect copyright.PENANApycAg91zO3
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色746Please respect copyright.PENANAVt86w1Jjg2
女主伊莎746Please respect copyright.PENANAcGFUWDORg3
单纯的色鬼746Please respect copyright.PENANA2SF2Tzs5DQ
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性746Please respect copyright.PENANAXL1TT9Fhme
黑化可能
艾德兰746Please respect copyright.PENANAug2elzA6qm
可怜虫阿746Please respect copyright.PENANAfl7MdJUWwG
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了746Please respect copyright.PENANAXJPlTVl9SG
妳说解释不够746Please respect copyright.PENANAeqrg63tqbp
我到觉得清楚746Please respect copyright.PENANA9tN5NFufqk
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够746Please respect copyright.PENANAuOsp8we5G6
他为啥强746Please respect copyright.PENANAGDEAyaumEO
妳啥都没讲746Please respect copyright.PENANAaRFD3CI2Sc
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白746Please respect copyright.PENANA4oAlcvWadb
也是除主角外最明白的角色746Please respect copyright.PENANAgkkJCHga3q
她就拿来爱主角的746Please respect copyright.PENANAnlZXldBwPg
功能性角色
还有其他许多746Please respect copyright.PENANAwjXHJ8eUIK
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多746Please respect copyright.PENANANPwUjx6r4K
可以瞧见妳的苦心746Please respect copyright.PENANAoNOyIDHG6A
我觉得这没必要746Please respect copyright.PENANAEZ46Ibg7T4
好的台词提一次够了746Please respect copyright.PENANArnAF4b1yXA
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨746Please respect copyright.PENANATR1RFVEaBF
我倒嫌设定囉嗦746Please respect copyright.PENANAOiKAMbti40
空白很重要746Please respect copyright.PENANAP0ogF7uAPm
没明白有没明白的好处746Please respect copyright.PENANAqF4sIa0SA9
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说746Please respect copyright.PENANAqgyYoBO8Oc
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书746Please respect copyright.PENANAv2VGQhT7G9
我还会继续看的746Please respect copyright.PENANAPWMNyAcXEM
确实好看746Please respect copyright.PENANAa6N1NysQsC
希望你这能写完746Please respect copyright.PENANAo6RqOGivOJ
能放上起点不746Please respect copyright.PENANAo3KFWriVoS
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
746Please respect copyright.PENANAGV7TroKtQB
作者回應:746Please respect copyright.PENANAlKhYWbuZUN
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,746Please respect copyright.PENANAfaAHNhsSon
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,746Please respect copyright.PENANAnijn7lOTpl
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞746Please respect copyright.PENANAqQclb3fLoe
感謝你的評文746Please respect copyright.PENANA7Dz91wY18I
我會盡量把文章搬上對岸起點的