作者妳好746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlNjAEn9G13
受到妳的邀请746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzwp5yZWZ2P
稍微看了下这本佩姬746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡc5LSWTeYjC
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzU8lc0vATL
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV7wiRC23lE
现世一堆东西746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfdMuJ4E39m
其实就很简单一个道理746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC6XxlDAazU
主角想要被爱746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhpjayySIAp
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFnTCfvnSl9
男主卢克爱746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpklP6qXPMU
主角就爱回去746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkkSxseoACe
女主伊莎爱746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgVXjzCRAsS
主角就爱回去746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLV0J2soeOO
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡplFBDakMnQ
想要被爱是佩姬的主题746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡThu48bhkBG
主角性别不是问题746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkpaRBX9bRi
内心冲突不是问题746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKysmhFIKC3
主角被爱就迎刃而解746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdod3EeaaXv
看不懂这点整部书就看不了746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6DRj6tZ0q5
妳的书乏人问津是这道理746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0P3puW2UL9
作者妳说主角口是心非746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcXbPld16wR
欸我说这不对746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyQDUjSduL7
这明摆着口非心也非746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkpoCnTq2et
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAl23e2nAl4
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWwe7jwyJC0
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqGFANHVL4b
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjkJNrWBPSb
为了被爱746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEvJnpSKhCY
连原本的性别都不要了746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLH01I44HMd
这主角疯的傻的746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpycAg91zO3
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVt86w1Jjg2
女主伊莎746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcGFUWDORg3
单纯的色鬼746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2SF2Tzs5DQ
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXL1TT9Fhme
黑化可能
艾德兰746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡug2elzA6qm
可怜虫阿746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfl7MdJUWwG
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXJPlTVl9SG
妳说解释不够746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeqrg63tqbp
我到觉得清楚746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9tN5NFufqk
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuOsp8we5G6
他为啥强746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGDEAyaumEO
妳啥都没讲746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaRFD3CI2Sc
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4oAlcvWadb
也是除主角外最明白的角色746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgkkJCHga3q
她就拿来爱主角的746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnlZXldBwPg
功能性角色
还有其他许多746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwjXHJ8eUIK
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNPwUjx6r4K
可以瞧见妳的苦心746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoNOyIDHG6A
我觉得这没必要746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEZ46Ibg7T4
好的台词提一次够了746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrnAF4b1yXA
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTR1RFVEaBF
我倒嫌设定囉嗦746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOiKAMbti40
空白很重要746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡP0ogF7uAPm
没明白有没明白的好处746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqF4sIa0SA9
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqgyYoBO8Oc
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv2VGQhT7G9
我还会继续看的746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPWMNyAcXEM
确实好看746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa6N1NysQsC
希望你这能写完746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo6RqOGivOJ
能放上起点不746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo3KFWriVoS
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlKhYWbuZUN
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfaAHNhsSon
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnijn7lOTpl
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqQclb3fLoe
感謝你的評文746Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7Dz91wY18I
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