作者妳好803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1cd9DvUj61
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稍微看了下这本佩姬803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPnj1XZYrEs
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrC7AsBGoCv
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBgweDv6BiZ
现世一堆东西803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdHimC3dkpN
其实就很简单一个道理803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGAeD3ShCfi
主角想要被爱803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfMFaa8w5t6
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg55GzdTW11
男主卢克爱803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfTqLZK7SLP
主角就爱回去803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTqOfWTlEhF
女主伊莎爱803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0hvxphUzaR
主角就爱回去803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIhUNynY0FF
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1ASPA3Zhde
想要被爱是佩姬的主题803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSuy1WRigKP
主角性别不是问题803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfCZgoUm8nY
内心冲突不是问题803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBWAJEOj8Gx
主角被爱就迎刃而解803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwZcNwgfOHT
看不懂这点整部书就看不了803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5GVwOnGMWw
妳的书乏人问津是这道理803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSZFtKk9PYD
作者妳说主角口是心非803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOOWc9BdO1i
欸我说这不对803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZoLRzhTNCa
这明摆着口非心也非803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTm4E9WolzD
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIGD5IrLxXK
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXAtlkm4MBs
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDdoCre4yUg
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpbbhfXDZRE
为了被爱803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkuX4RHkvme
连原本的性别都不要了803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡizwlT8YCdF
这主角疯的傻的803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡr9H5sO29VT
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlGdyfptPSn
女主伊莎803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8Dsiv7ZfsM
单纯的色鬼803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTcOf8IB9Yr
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMYob0W1Ajy
黑化可能
艾德兰803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv6jY1ZG30C
可怜虫阿803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5viAKzqPuS
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡP9hlGnPIuS
妳说解释不够803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡt3swFRTk1s
我到觉得清楚803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSq7BnC6fD3
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0F7J15HID7
他为啥强803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzszLgJRXuT
妳啥都没讲803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLn7IE1LQQ8
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl3EEx7qVCQ
也是除主角外最明白的角色803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmOH8pT9lFp
她就拿来爱主角的803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsWIIA11SwT
功能性角色
还有其他许多803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNAITZ62laB
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmCzyDFQyNp
可以瞧见妳的苦心803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD8goxXbLdo
我觉得这没必要803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXtqWjOzOsZ
好的台词提一次够了803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkMXndbmC0K
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOHNi6sAVTO
我倒嫌设定囉嗦803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtPkZBVePVn
空白很重要803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnQpNtwPZQu
没明白有没明白的好处803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuCLEvUbOlQ
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUeSUGC6vLU
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4gnJSz4kXt
我还会继续看的803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAXdWpV2KNA
确实好看803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkT9xEYrc5X
希望你这能写完803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYvQORORv1n
能放上起点不803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrMV3lkxmoU
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuPNZzYTVQZ
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF9yXB6WvlY
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDzmKrsnXBI
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡct89aHKphD
感謝你的評文803Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpTZT7QZVM5
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