作者妳好710Please respect copyright.PENANAwGYpacCxfl
受到妳的邀请710Please respect copyright.PENANAzTaZamybfO
稍微看了下这本佩姬710Please respect copyright.PENANAFwEgKpe02E
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法710Please respect copyright.PENANA8DQaF7t1VW
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西710Please respect copyright.PENANAnuibXVR4iO
现世一堆东西710Please respect copyright.PENANATzznK0Metf
其实就很简单一个道理710Please respect copyright.PENANAe6oT2ZXA1Y
主角想要被爱710Please respect copyright.PENANAJeVkx4p68H
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱710Please respect copyright.PENANAcvBqzXTtFH
男主卢克爱710Please respect copyright.PENANAZaZd9VOsKP
主角就爱回去710Please respect copyright.PENANAhdP1ajeUYJ
女主伊莎爱710Please respect copyright.PENANAzwFSk9t3Ky
主角就爱回去710Please respect copyright.PENANAuV0ie7htLH
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理710Please respect copyright.PENANAQdfTrprExF
想要被爱是佩姬的主题710Please respect copyright.PENANAjv3ENUmJEx
主角性别不是问题710Please respect copyright.PENANAidz4rBwoTn
内心冲突不是问题710Please respect copyright.PENANAJMgZOenACL
主角被爱就迎刃而解710Please respect copyright.PENANAqOiJPhk1TY
看不懂这点整部书就看不了710Please respect copyright.PENANAq2lPGQE9At
妳的书乏人问津是这道理710Please respect copyright.PENANA3A1nO7YEvY
作者妳说主角口是心非710Please respect copyright.PENANAi2GOjJAaCj
欸我说这不对710Please respect copyright.PENANA1Jz7IplFdG
这明摆着口非心也非710Please respect copyright.PENANAWdyd4XWCSr
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰710Please respect copyright.PENANApbTrPuYV3u
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵710Please respect copyright.PENANAyyMKcFwgLc
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜710Please respect copyright.PENANAyE6KXAwJ6R
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的710Please respect copyright.PENANAeFWyHM6Ss9
为了被爱710Please respect copyright.PENANAdfdcn7Ud0T
连原本的性别都不要了710Please respect copyright.PENANAqU2ZOo9Ikb
这主角疯的傻的710Please respect copyright.PENANA78oyjRx3Dg
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色710Please respect copyright.PENANAQ0ll7gzSjs
女主伊莎710Please respect copyright.PENANAAN5T0kVLoC
单纯的色鬼710Please respect copyright.PENANA4MAft9WbpF
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性710Please respect copyright.PENANA0QG06c7Rpd
黑化可能
艾德兰710Please respect copyright.PENANAJgj0B2rsAt
可怜虫阿710Please respect copyright.PENANANLfGKgzpyy
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了710Please respect copyright.PENANAGXgiPS16Vb
妳说解释不够710Please respect copyright.PENANAG8cyF3amtD
我到觉得清楚710Please respect copyright.PENANAEVuqhaS9Kw
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够710Please respect copyright.PENANAzYtFwaHeWB
他为啥强710Please respect copyright.PENANAYh1FSPXoyw
妳啥都没讲710Please respect copyright.PENANAgNulRrH8vH
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白710Please respect copyright.PENANA8Y8w1yZ5qg
也是除主角外最明白的角色710Please respect copyright.PENANAyF36NIw2BG
她就拿来爱主角的710Please respect copyright.PENANArbN2Epybcc
功能性角色
还有其他许多710Please respect copyright.PENANAafCunbYz9W
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多710Please respect copyright.PENANAgQeikaWdjQ
可以瞧见妳的苦心710Please respect copyright.PENANAzmK7qpwMP3
我觉得这没必要710Please respect copyright.PENANAkLTSh99puO
好的台词提一次够了710Please respect copyright.PENANA99W5n3AQkW
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨710Please respect copyright.PENANAM2TPfgojCa
我倒嫌设定囉嗦710Please respect copyright.PENANADiTV5wvlRH
空白很重要710Please respect copyright.PENANAmjfjc5SmOm
没明白有没明白的好处710Please respect copyright.PENANAlplC7lEwes
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说710Please respect copyright.PENANAnyMl6P3xAE
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书710Please respect copyright.PENANA69qg829t0Y
我还会继续看的710Please respect copyright.PENANAvTDdSUCcQE
确实好看710Please respect copyright.PENANAPwuKGPO1p6
希望你这能写完710Please respect copyright.PENANAd9ALyYfRKc
能放上起点不710Please respect copyright.PENANAZGNu6exgWd
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
710Please respect copyright.PENANAaVu0FCX22V
作者回應:710Please respect copyright.PENANAHPvVMWptZd
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,710Please respect copyright.PENANAmXDKTNPiz6
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,710Please respect copyright.PENANACqig6v8ga8
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞710Please respect copyright.PENANACioG8UzrXO
感謝你的評文710Please respect copyright.PENANA250cLhbOuf
我會盡量把文章搬上對岸起點的