No Plagiarism!usQ7UwbnhFO0EcStyVqFposted on PＥNAＮＡ 1st- Monos, from the first paragraph you had me hooked. Your story spoke about things that actually have been happening, and a solution that the government might actually try at some point. I was really shocked when the main character stabbed her mother, and ended up being sadistic at the end. Clearly you know what to do in writing a story, keep it up!

2nd- Bobby Coxx, your story reminded me of Shakespeare's question, "To be, or not to be." The emotion you gave to your character, and the fact that he betrayed his friends, like most people would do in that situation, is what at one point in the running for 1st place.8964 copyright protection670ＰＥＮＡＮＡNj5xDnxRih 維尼

3rd- Shnuffeluv, your plot alone held a solid 4th, but with the emotion and a little girl's innocence and lack of fear, is what held a solid 3rd place, keep it up!8964 copyright protection670ＰＥＮＡＮＡrYiwfVDXDX 維尼

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