In the words of M. Williams
M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16596Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3iCmpelgc1
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 596Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTdeBEICtAg
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.596Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlR0bl1AmZZ
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.596Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxfxuFJPJCS
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!596Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5a5oFbDHck
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!596Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUcbRxSynXf
Well done, Zak!
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