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No Plagiarism!ROaS0vWC2anb1fj1dxlcposted on PＥNAＮＡ Chapter 1.03: September 20, 20158964 copyright protection1142ＰＥＮＡＮＡbRGUlC2S9r 維尼
"I've finished reading your manuscript."8964 copyright protection1142ＰＥＮＡＮＡiWWv2EhJEy 維尼
"Really? Weren't you going to study for your geophysics test tomorrow?"8964 copyright protection1142ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8EW5VlOAhU 維尼
"I'll be fine."8964 copyright protection1142ＰＥＮＡＮＡZmk3BEyt0b 維尼
"If you say so."8964 copyright protection1142ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3wpCyRXFP4 維尼
"Don't you want to hear what I think of your story?"8964 copyright protection1142ＰＥＮＡＮＡM7IwuguVHL 維尼
"By all means."8964 copyright protection1142ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3RDHmgRAKU 維尼
"I agree with Susy. The writing style is too lighthearted for the actual story. You should darken the tone."8964 copyright protection1142ＰＥＮＡＮＡxdtCQNCJ4S 維尼
"I'll do my best."8964 copyright protection1142ＰＥＮＡＮＡcKX7D5krvM 維尼
"Also—I think her assassin friend's character is a tad underdeveloped. He has so much potential as a character."8964 copyright protection1142ＰＥＮＡＮＡTn1uk9aBRL 維尼
"I'll look into that. Thanks, Eru."8964 copyright protection1142ＰＥＮＡＮＡeBp8LONdw3 維尼
"Anytime, Kenny. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to study for that test tomorrow."8964 copyright protection1142ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3udpRKUOMa 維尼
"I trusted you, and you lied to me."8964 copyright protection1142ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3uYUcRyWMk 維尼
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