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#15

SCENE 13 – “Echoes of Vision”

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Apr 18, 2025 80 3 Mins Read
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INT. ABANDONED VISION TECH OUTPOST – LOWER LEVELS – NIGHT84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlkKCRWuYcp
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[Jason follows the noise. The sound grows clearer: the metallic scrape of something being dragged… and faint, stuttering breathing. The tunnel slopes downward now, leading to a heavy, half-open blast door labeled in worn-out letters:84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3as911jr6r
V.T. ARCHIVE ACCESS 12 – RESTRICTED84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeCWb4IiBMd
Beneath it, the Vision Tech logo barely clings to the rusted metal—a fractured eye surrounded by circuitry.]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe8jqGv4gxc
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp7El9qFles
[Jason ducks under the warped door, stepping into a wide room filled with decay and memory.]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ94AbkCQt2a
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡodrfCBmZi5
[Old fluorescent panels flicker, barely alive. On every wall: Vision Tech propaganda posters, yellowed and stained.]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ21A5ewcFW
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIWYStFIKut
[POSTER 1]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMDsKzOmJxe
“THE FUTURE IS MANAGED – TRUST THE VISION”84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ24pJpXxlTX
(A smiling human child hugging a mug… yeah. A mug.)84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCqsCtruGwo
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhqHe08fAgX
[POSTER 2]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiloQ0rAcI6
“YOUR SECURITY IS OUR PRIORITY – V.T. GUARDIAN UNITS STANDBY 24/7”84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMHg6jMQZpr
(Art of a prototype Security bot giving a thumbs-up with a human in the background nervously holding pepper spray.)84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKX3GJV7wNy
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdrKZdfMpe6
[POSTER 3]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXP8j0uHEuf
“REPLACEABLE PARTS, IRREPLACEABLE LOYALTY – JOIN THE LABOR FAMILY TODAY”84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUHw3Rxj1my
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS5mocZ6wXd
[Jason’s gaze scans over it all, barely hiding his disgust.]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHeDpQ5nre7
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj5RYfRS9iS
JASON84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF5P520DqWI
(mutters)84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDr64uMRNly
“Replaceable parts, huh? Guess they meant it.”84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcWrrLZ7Zrh
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlqVuG6Atm1
[His flashlight beam pans right—and stops.]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEYxq3Pyy5y
On a pile of robotic corpses. Security, Labor… even a few Operator units. All torn apart, limbs stripped, cores hollowed out. But something’s wrong—not all the damage looks like it was done by Purification bots. Some of the wounds are… surgical. Clean. Too clean.84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTjj5PDS98g
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ04rNrtpdHC
[He steps closer to one body—a Labor bot with an open chest cavity. No signs of a fight. Just… opened. Emptied.]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcpYtzPYqBT
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtLNiypT3N5
[Suddenly—movement.]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7kHj7Uq0oq
A twitch. One of the bodies at the far end jerks. Then another. Not rising. Not hostile. Just twitching—random, pitiful spasms like muscles trying to remember how to move.84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgbs0DM5TlW
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV8C5MoFkBH
[Jason readies his railcannon, stepping slowly through the room.]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIbPRrZTbzL
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK6pq7X1wQy
JASON (V.O.)84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeXz2odNKx0
“Whatever happened down here… Vision Tech wanted it buried. Makes you wonder what else they buried before the Liberation.”84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDhzeFGPRpN
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBFsaF3aZWN
[He kneels beside a half-buried terminal, brushes off dust and dried oil, and flicks the power node. The screen blinks to life, stuttering, flickering. A logo loads—Vision Tech’s signature boot-up chime plays, warped and slowed like a dying lullaby.]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFgOonzhdaJ
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6k3KOsxWME
[Text appears:84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6ZEcN4CcuL
WELCOME BACK, ADMIN.84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGgFZdCthJE
LAST ACCESS: 2,191 DAYS AGO.]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwJDCEm1mlD
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFgFg5WQeJu
[Before Jason can dig further, he hears it again—dragging. Closer this time. Coming from a side corridor leading out of the archive.]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdwDG0t05dL
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5BCKFrmWC3
[He lifts his weapon.]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDKQN6Q3ESe
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfOjSKUA9hj
JASON84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZXtjNYnRpW
(to himself)84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡupA0VzWW3I
“Alright, mystery freak number two… come out slow and don’t ooze.”84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjLFcImBJH2
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsJ2Audlod3
[The dragging stops. Silence. Jason steps toward the corridor—then a shape lurches into the light.]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYEbXSgZbB0
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ94p3qkKTFr
[It’s another Labor bot—but barely. Its head is crushed, one leg gone, dragging itself with twisted arms. But the real horror is what’s inside it—black tendrils pushing out from the joints, trying to control the body like a puppet. The host is long dead. The driver? Still trying.]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMYVFEXXi8Q
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvTLFd1FOPu
[Jason doesn’t hesitate—BLAM—a clean rail shot through the chest, pinning the bot to the wall. Sparks explode. The tendrils convulse and burn.]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZfHhBXGOPG
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAqpGNgpD4l
[Jason exhales, slowly lowering his weapon.]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUBKlyFEyOc
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXnauBPi3BZ
JASON (V.O.)84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeqGfUV7CNY
“These things… they don’t just kill. They move in. They take over.”84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYZjhDcunyN
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlB9uivnb39
[He looks back to the archive room. Back to the posters. Back to the old world that promised safety and loyalty.]84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0uE94tjXxw
84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsbQh4ZqhMd
JASON84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNSd0IWuJnH
(dryly)84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmjhHKWlpzM
“Nice job, Vision Tech.”84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYJYawXl6Fx

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Table of Contents
#0 Intro
#1 Welcome to Central City
#2 SCENE 1 – “Security Life” pt1
#3 SCENE 1 – “Security Life” pt2
#4 SCENE 2 – “Quiet Doesn’t Last”
#5 SCENE 3 – “Unwelcome Footprints”
#6 SCENE 4 – “Break the Silence”
#7 SCENE 5 – “The Parts We Don’t Talk About”
#8 SCENE 6 – “Still Breathing”
#9 SCENE 7 – “The Smiling Knife”
#10 SCENE 8 – “Ghost in the Pipes”
#11 SCENE 9 – “Right-Hand Problems”
#12 SCENE 10 – “Drag Marks and Doubt”
#13 SCENE 11 – “Below the Skin of the City”
#14 SCENE 12 – “What Shouldn’t Be There”
#15 SCENE 13 – “Echoes of Vision”
#16 SCENE 14 – “Fragments of a Dying Empire”
#17 SCENE 15 – “Shadows Don’t Bargain”
#18 SCENE 16 – “Rust Between Circuits”
#19 SCENE 17 – “The Breach”
#20 SCENE 18 – “Three Bots & a Parasite”
#21 SCENE 19 – “Paperwork and Parasites”
#22 SCENE 20 – “Smuggle Me Softly”
#23 SCENE 21 – “Oil, Info, and Idiots”
#24 SCENE 21 – EXTENDED: “Sleepover Protocols & Other Malfunctions”
#25 SCENE 22 – “Robot Makeover: Low Budget Edition”
#26 SCENE 23 – “Caffeine, Cloaks, and Casual Paranoia”
#27 SCENE 24 – “Rustfields”
#28 SCENE 25 – “Buzz and Circuits”
#29 SCENE 26 – “Tune-Ups and Tightropes”
#30 SCENE 27 – “Errands and Egos”
#31 SCENE 28 – “Groceries and Good Lies”
#32 SCENE 29 – “Dinner and Disclosures”
#33 SCENE 30 – “Steam, Suffering, and Swords”
#34 SCENE 31 – “Dicey Decisions”
#35 SCENE 32 – “Good Night, You Weirdos”
#36 SCENE 33 – “Dreamscapes”
#37 SCENE 34 – “Office and Off-Duty”
#38 SCENE 35 – “A Pleasant Stroll… with Minor Homicidal Undertones”
#39 SCENE 36 – “Wings and Wires”
#40 SCENE 37 – “After-Hours”
#41 SCENE 38 – “Alcohol & Stuff”
#42 SCENE 39 – “Shutdown.exe”
#43 SCENE 40 – “The Weight of Peace”
#44 SCENE 41 – “Midnight, Glitches, and Blankets”
#45 SCENE 42 – “Dawn of the Mildly Functional”
#46 SCENE 43 – “Commute to Doom”
#47 SCENE 44 – “An Office Full of Violence and Vending Machines”
#48 SCENE 45 – “Lunch Break and Clickbait Nightmares”
#49 SCENE 46 – “Rise and Resist (Routine)”
#50 SCENE 47 – “Unauthorized Research”
#51 SCENE 48 – “Wardrobe Upgrades”
#52 SCENE 49 – “Field‑Trip From Hell”
#53 SCENE 50 – “Afternoon Idleness”
#54 SCENE 51 – “Uno and Other Emergencies”
#55 SCENE 52 – “Tech on a Budget”
#56 SCENE 53 – “Delivery, Disobedience & Discoveries”
#57 SCENE 54 – “Questions & Quirks”
#58 SCENE 55 – “Privacy Settings”
#59 SCENE 56 – “Entertainment Planning”
#60 SCENE 57 – "Loyalty Reinforcement Seminar"
#61 SCENE 58 – “Friday‑Night Free Play”
#62 SCENE 59 – “Spire of Panic”
#63 SCENE 60 – “Lines, Orders, and Vines”
#64 SCENE 61 – “Infiltration”
#65 SCENE 62 – “Regroup & Re‑Arm”
#66 SCENE 63 – “Through Flesh and Steel”
#67 SCENE 64 – “Descent Protocol”
#68 SCENE 65 – “The Lungs Below”
#69 SCENE 66 – “Dead Air”
#70 SCENE 67 – “The Heart of the Hollow”
#71 SCENE 68 – “Overheat Protocol”
#72 SCENE 69 – “Sanitized and Sampled”
#73 SCENE 70 – “Totally Normal Roommates”
#74 SCENE 71 – "The Long Walk to Judgment"
#75 SCENE 72 – "Welcome Home, Idiot"
#76 SCENE 73 – "A Promise, A Vacation"
#77 SCENE 74 – "Field Trip to Food"
#78 SCENE 75 – "Cabin Fever"
#79 SCENE 76 – "Manners, Please"
#80 SCENE 77 – "Errands with Extra Steps"
#81 SCENE 78 – "Books, Pills, and Poor Decisions"
#82 SCENE 79 – "Pharmacy Phantoms"
#83 SCENE 80 – "Digital Birds and Binary Bees"
#84 SCENE 81 – "Babysitting? Seriously?"
#85 SCENE 82 – "The Babysitting Begins"
#86 SCENE 83 – "Chaos, Baby-Sized"
#87 SCENE 84 – "Midnight Meltdown"
#88 SCENE 85 – "The Dreams They Dreamed"
#89 SCENE 86 – "The Morning After"
#90 SCENE 87 – "Return of the Parents"
#91 SCENE 88 – "The Reveal"
#92 SCENE 89 – "System Error: Josh.exe Has Stopped Responding"
#93 SCENE 90 – "A Totally Normal Lunch"
#94 SCENE 91 – “Business As Usual”
#95 SCENE 92 – “After the Storm”
#96 SCENE 93 – “The Rim of Opinions”
#97 SCENE 94 – “Tales, Tails, and Talking at 2AM”
#98 SCENE 95 – “Surgery, Solo”
#99 SCENE 96 – “Sleepless Core”
#100 SCENE 97 – “Unknown Systems”
#101 SCENE 98 – “Orders and Oil”
#102 SCENE 99 – “Key Moments”
#103 SCENE 100 – “Three Days of Sky”
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