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No Plagiarism!mX5nhQm2szSL4d2dwfd0posted on PENANA 嘗試下特別挑戰,複習一部很久以前寫的作品,回顧了十話。8964 copyright protection103PENANAF7OGeCaFwk 維尼
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特別挑戰II8964 copyright protection103PENANArfN7FlzlDt 維尼
1.贅字冗詞8964 copyright protection103PENANA79p8ZeDgIE 維尼
- 總結以下幾點:8964 copyright protection103PENANA3iQHK1scD9 維尼
“了”8964 copyright protection103PENANAKaNzH1RjD4 維尼
- “了”字出現的頻率,多到令人髮指,大概每句一至三個“了”,差點以為自己是“了”的孩子。經朋友提醒才發現,原因是無意識下誕生的產物 _(√ ζ ε:)_8964 copyright protection103PENANA3BcWJZPPTY 維尼
- 自那之後,寫文都會注意“了”字,控制使用它的欲望。8964 copyright protection103PENANA3iVDH3Qs9f 維尼
“一”8964 copyright protection103PENANA1dBeB5qgXX 維尼
- “一”字出現不多,原因其一跟WIKI上歐化中文提到的相同,其二非中小學語文老師莫屬XD。記得語文課練習,就是要這樣寫。8964 copyright protection103PENANAPXb94YROvc 維尼
- 看了WIKI歐化中文才發現……改了改了了改了了了。8964 copyright protection103PENANAngn4w4hmcU 維尼
“的”“地”8964 copyright protection103PENANAq2NNixU5nY 維尼
- “的”“地”同樣,學校教授不少「○○+地,●●+的」,不用就扣分XDDD。讀某些小說和報章,每個形容詞、每句都工整得如出一轍。就算讀完會有閱讀障礙,腦子卡死,也覺得一流小說家都這麼寫文XD。(使用次數不比我的“了”字少XD)8964 copyright protection103PENANAQxMkUqcgIO 維尼
- 不再用的原因是,別說讀者,自己寫抑或看,都是折磨。8964 copyright protection103PENANAAOQm47iKts 維尼
- 很久以前買了本國內翻譯的《金閣寺》-三島由紀夫,打開一看裡面全是的,看了半頁就把書燒了。8964 copyright protection103PENANAKdwBQJ0pG4 維尼
“應該”“覺得”“認為”……8964 copyright protection103PENANAH4YkyfQfqB 維尼
- 又是受學校迫害,說寫議論文要用這些詞,不能讓人覺得你不夠客觀,未論述完就肯定假設的論點。8964 copyright protection103PENANA6fy542ubRS 維尼
“然後” “就是”“雖然”“但是”“如果”“現在”……8964 copyright protection103PENANAOWF0ecIFsg 維尼
- 這些就不能怪老師XDD (可惡!(・`ω´・)),算一種生活陋習。平日看到人緊張,就說然後然後、但是但是、雖然雖然,說多就把生活融入寫文,很多但是後面又但是,然後再然後。8964 copyright protection103PENANAX7woOD8O5a 維尼
- 連自己都感到煩,努力改正ing。8964 copyright protection103PENANAHNMavhzQpJ 維尼
語意重疊8964 copyright protection103PENANA8YII3X4nFa 維尼
- 舊作常有的事,例如“我”和“了”在一段中重覆又重覆(表達了我!就別再我我我!)8964 copyright protection103PENANANhyEVss6C1 維尼
- 同一句重覆說兩次,例如:“這棵通天大樹有很多房間,很多房間在通天大樹內。”???(自己都看不懂( •́ὤ•̀)8964 copyright protection103PENANAQlBBKnm6jn 維尼
- 同一個詞在同一句裡出現兩至三次,例如:“這個森林是一個非常危險的森林。”???(我有病 (´ー`)8964 copyright protection103PENANAFxknJ0xebz 維尼
- 語意重疊的問題,找不到確切原因,最大可能是我腦子有問題。8964 copyright protection103PENANAznbucDjVpy 維尼
- 最近語意重疊問題有洞少,努力改正ing。8964 copyright protection103PENANAatBazmSCro 維尼
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2.錯別字8964 copyright protection103PENANA436rgUZIG5 維尼
舊作十篇裡找出的錯別字,相信不會有人錯這些字。錯要認,在下面列出來給大家恥笑(因輸入法問題的錯字不列出來)。前為錯字,後為正字。8964 copyright protection103PENANAyIXcu9GAaD 維尼
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“好捧”“好棒”8964 copyright protection103PENANARqfcw2OqfU 維尼
- 這人好奇怪,捧棒不分……8964 copyright protection103PENANA2azx3gIxye 維尼
“迷”“謎”8964 copyright protection103PENANALkorq1sdLA 維尼
- 你真謎人(శωశ)8964 copyright protection103PENANARPck4KwWEx 維尼
“火炎”“火焰”8964 copyright protection103PENANAbJRVdmA0Ca 維尼
- 焰熱?(‾◡◝ )8964 copyright protection103PENANAtauLtiW5Oq 維尼
“檔住”“擋住”8964 copyright protection103PENANAykLgNDXrLw 維尼
- 部首不分……( ˘•ω•˘ )◞⁽˙³˙⁾8964 copyright protection103PENANAmHSEfxJlzY 維尼
“帶”“戴”8964 copyright protection103PENANALkIbJIaMV5 維尼
- 記得以前我字典裡沒有戴這個字,全都用帶。8964 copyright protection103PENANA7nC8v2R3kx 維尼
“份”“分”8964 copyright protection103PENANAOhYIOkofOU 維尼
不必說了……8964 copyright protection103PENANAtZGGRfAHcT 維尼
“發漲”“發脹”8964 copyright protection103PENANAA6SY4UuJeE 維尼
漲薪水、股票嗎?沒有!膨脹的只有身材。8964 copyright protection103PENANAyWCCqYjtHg 維尼
“空擴”“空曠”8964 copyright protection103PENANAmlI3U4HGD7 維尼
想擴哪個洞……??8964 copyright protection103PENANAtXpptUj8BG 維尼
“籍口”“藉口、借口”8964 copyright protection103PENANAjF7TOV16cB 維尼
想要戶籍嗎?8964 copyright protection103PENANAYeWCIXcBVh 維尼
“低下”“底下”8964 copyright protection103PENANApt4xasPgJ1 維尼
別低聲下氣!8964 copyright protection103PENANAMyfTtVcNCM 維尼
“辦工”“辦公”8964 copyright protection103PENANA71ujEskSL1 維尼
辦工??8964 copyright protection103PENANADROsNU8u9W 維尼
“隊手”“對手”8964 copyright protection103PENANA3ZIsE1qC4N 維尼
對手:別打!我是你隊友!!!8964 copyright protection103PENANAF61FxRVhj4 維尼
“遇…遇…”“越…越…”8964 copyright protection103PENANAH4MVAT5BxI 維尼
????8964 copyright protection103PENANAilD9FPBlnN 維尼
“無可耐何”“無可奈何”8964 copyright protection103PENANArDF29IgU4a 維尼
男人:試試我的耐力,如何?(っ●ω●)っ8964 copyright protection103PENANA2OGHICYANf 維尼
“不詳之兆”“不祥之兆”8964 copyright protection103PENANAZp0MZvDyDs 維尼
好像可以XDD8964 copyright protection103PENANAm3JSUfDevA 維尼
“眼框”“眼眶”8964 copyright protection103PENANAygWUSWJcL6 維尼
你眼睛是戴上去的(΄◞ิ౪◟ิ‵)?8964 copyright protection103PENANAl8HiCMD8ne 維尼
“與期”“與其”8964 copyright protection103PENANA3bwAjxb9x5 維尼
預先期待?8964 copyright protection103PENANADJH9hOrQna 維尼
“哪”<->“那”8964 copyright protection103PENANAGXadk0Ldjq 維尼
以前全都用那,為表達清楚,現在會用分開用。8964 copyright protection103PENANAZ4f4TudVq8 維尼
好像說“哪”是近代造字,有大神說說嗎?8964 copyright protection103PENANA1zoGjhNDZd 維尼
107Please respect copyright.PENANAuJvKIEHh5Q
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- 以下是我很懶,想改又不想改。互通的字:8964 copyright protection103PENANAW7ACM97OoY 維尼
“什麼” <-> “甚麼”8964 copyright protection103PENANAiHV3gUUQr6 維尼
“裡” <-> “裏”8964 copyright protection103PENANAXznmemABzn 維尼
“着” <-> “著”8964 copyright protection103PENANAoGgvaj6rq0 維尼
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- 以前寫完不會核對,造成錯字不斷,重寫後,發現錯字多到離譜,會用檢查工具XD。錯字檢測會用兩個檢測工具8964 copyright protection103PENANA2dwWZqSDJR 維尼
- 一個是大陸的網絡小說網頁「書旗小說」(好像要實名):https://www.shuqi.com/8964 copyright protection103PENANArIzpp1CiMx 維尼
- 主要測錯字和少許贅語。我試過「的地得再在」混淆的也能測,用來快速判別錯字堪用。8964 copyright protection103PENANAcg7R8QSmPL 維尼
- 另一個是繁簡轉換:https://www.ifreesite.com/gbk-big5-gb2312-utf8.htm8964 copyright protection103PENANAHE1iqqV7Qg 維尼
- 繁簡轉換後有機會誤判。8964 copyright protection103PENANAPU6KVdozQ1 維尼
107Please respect copyright.PENANA7O8IucvSAK
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3.代名詞8964 copyright protection103PENANAaaopoP5sLR 維尼
- 我不懂主謂賓定狀補(考試偷看隔壁)……請放過我(´◓q◔`),我下去督督好了。8964 copyright protection103PENANAqo2zIY0J0T 維尼
107Please respect copyright.PENANALIXqhHGjdX
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督督8964 copyright protection103PENANAHSGQyvOzQX 維尼
1. 創作:8964 copyright protection103PENANAonNvXGHhuV 維尼
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- 繼續寫《鹿尼克晨的晨曦》8964 copyright protection103PENANAX7tO96fVnO 維尼
- 其他文沒有進展。8964 copyright protection103PENANASJ5bCTSYtL 維尼
- 正在練一幅畫,看看下星期能不能開始上色。8964 copyright protection103PENANAyN9YTvAD4q 維尼
107Please respect copyright.PENANA5QsQ6Cy0v8
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1.28964 copyright protection103PENANAc3nX9BBykc 維尼
- 寫了兩萬左右,改了幾千字。8964 copyright protection103PENANAMe0e3DQJpi 維尼
107Please respect copyright.PENANA8gVqbPRZ96
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- 《鹿尼克森》篇章「蘿莉控之丘」完結,本週進入「七色欠片篇」,完結後回歸日常。8964 copyright protection103PENANAb5UKM1S061 維尼
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- 練畫練到畫板會當機XD。8964 copyright protection103PENANABP8n72olfw 維尼
107Please respect copyright.PENANAJigvDAZ0Uw
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- 找了些墓碑做參考。8964 copyright protection103PENANAXfT00sGTHt 維尼
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- 今週暫無8964 copyright protection103PENANAgD9SB7nbFa 維尼
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2.經營8964 copyright protection103PENANA0lVex9vvYS 維尼
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- 目前在ig,t什麼的放些畫畫練習。8964 copyright protection103PENANA03ATQ88WDC 維尼
- 繼續在原創星球推推和留奇怪的言。8964 copyright protection103PENANAj1ZB13Rduy 維尼
- 不考慮youtube,目前會選擇在B站。拍片十月再算。8964 copyright protection103PENANAUsPkkfCIlj 維尼
107Please respect copyright.PENANA5biDePleqa
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- 經營慘況:突破三位數追蹤,雙數讚和回應 (っ´ω`c)8964 copyright protection103PENANApFEU5SfN1I 維尼
107Please respect copyright.PENANAjlCKFICwGC
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3.生存8964 copyright protection103PENANAKWFGLsVgmH 維尼
3.18964 copyright protection103PENANAZphGjgPwnb 維尼
- 聽雨聲,睡眠品質有改善(≖ᴗ≖๑)8964 copyright protection103PENANAIDZakxb9yK 維尼
- 手老樣子,繼續物理治療,眼睛沒問題。8964 copyright protection103PENANAYrAUDVupce 維尼
107Please respect copyright.PENANAs39j5yhqJy
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- 這週工作有點多,尚能應付,因為下週更多。8964 copyright protection103PENANASktAkTbZiX 維尼
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- 暫無。8964 copyright protection103PENANAGx9P5ZuZil 維尼
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- 我沒朋友 XD8964 copyright protection103PENANAOssshPd4Is 維尼
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希望每周都報一下,督督自己٩(◦`꒳´◦)۶8964 copyright protection103PENANAS4sEnmVzqH 維尼
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