《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡW11TZYP9OG
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9sEk3UZtlV
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsaYOyNkojR
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvccQhj42S4
而是是人在食用時能入口即化166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1HC7BrQz5d
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVrg1IyJ2Fd
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5BD0ptqjre
使人不會因為時間的洪流166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZeA6EEJfYO
失去了炙熱166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡayruRGKEU3
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1j9LiDDGkz
但夏季怎麼會有雪166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡklJfC99nZZ
令人加以反思166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxpdoPrcuuB
雪季不該有的畫面166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnBCRw9oiFZ
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi1ZvX8jxkJ
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或許166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡacQ4n2Hxp2
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxneP2qGwTW
即便是來年166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLoxNY0Kqk9
之後的每一年都依然如此
