《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaszho1YU5m
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0HYnJNaRQN
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCIUQgHzwRg
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz3Ta9YnG6G
而是是人在食用時能入口即化128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7OnqgwNRTZ
128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5yIo7Tp7Xi
「嘗試把心臟調慢」128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwQGttjB2Y2
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5y2U8Yyb1Y
使人不會因為時間的洪流128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6EAC5n24cA
失去了炙熱128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhcuZHzXDFN
128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM2aOFd9KR5
詩名為《夏，冬眠》128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfQXG3VVK22
但夏季怎麼會有雪128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHldUHZ0Ero
令人加以反思128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC0i1CJxUPg
雪季不該有的畫面128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFkNbZRNfAA
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKazJvqFgcC
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或許128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ4jJS7pc55
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUl7tubINPk
即便是來年128Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrar5SA1W32
之後的每一年都依然如此
