《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧170Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvAvUwLKV4W
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍170Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhirTeV4RQC
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）170Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa5zJ9Htr5S
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單170Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3UuXTPrsNB
而是是人在食用時能入口即化170Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXLErnDyTNU
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」170Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ0mQwYv4vf
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久170Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG3rgtILLZK
使人不會因為時間的洪流170Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5Q87bBYiTm
失去了炙熱170Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtPbOLSTfbL
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》170Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWk0GswTb9o
但夏季怎麼會有雪170Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqyxpFugI9t
令人加以反思170Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6AMD5NFMQ0
雪季不該有的畫面170Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡA6kniGXYrb
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏170Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH6yEzzWVDb
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或許170Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsP2YWhYlSt
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣170Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡARSRxUrZFW
即便是來年170Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcNeu2mzUBF
之後的每一年都依然如此
