《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcEearFakvn
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJvLj9Zpyr6
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzF1hX9HXal
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTahsPiQ8Qz
而是是人在食用時能入口即化169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZNN6iF0UB1
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQsboLag1KG
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoTkBYQghZV
使人不會因為時間的洪流169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDxMeKupHxw
失去了炙熱169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4PCVXzjh14
169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡevEFHca5Ql
詩名為《夏，冬眠》169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCWEgsIXsyY
但夏季怎麼會有雪169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3aUFt3m76n
令人加以反思169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqcSUgrtdSS
雪季不該有的畫面169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLGNIxEZIQo
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0sSDHSgIT0
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或許169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjUQiA3vgNr
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ80nmrtvdxr
即便是來年169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXy4PLEVKng
之後的每一年都依然如此
