《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧136Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxic9yz9Ior
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍136Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbdsP64lt9b
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）136Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLjujwtBlr4
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單136Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbVSR536r2K
而是是人在食用時能入口即化136Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn86m2u6ga2
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」136Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAWTo2j7Nya
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久136Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzPfEE3AwRz
使人不會因為時間的洪流136Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYGAsXSeidZ
失去了炙熱136Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡywoximnidc
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》136Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdX9hkPZFMO
但夏季怎麼會有雪136Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRdkBPeM0E3
令人加以反思136Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtaTxls2E7D
雪季不該有的畫面136Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ62QVWgQSVf
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏136Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3W4KJmhm4H
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或許136Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxYHZSkEmBw
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣136Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXQ98wXjGG1
即便是來年136Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8PsvyH62M9
之後的每一年都依然如此
