《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrUyvhJfyMo
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy45ioPyNts
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDLFU3YMrjV
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSUHoUYiokS
而是是人在食用時能入口即化162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdi2NCFQ1Cq
162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo1RxhBokXi
「嘗試把心臟調慢」162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa92gJ9aC40
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGdSkbRSzuH
使人不會因為時間的洪流162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUuocLROZFc
失去了炙熱162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaRi8dpqfsZ
162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU5aL412Tjz
詩名為《夏，冬眠》162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKdWcCfNic4
但夏季怎麼會有雪162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4fpaNOTfCg
令人加以反思162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡivfoYDSXFd
雪季不該有的畫面162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7bZpAVkpFJ
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCqCBgei7M3
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或許162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeZAYMwZ5h3
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1CFCVZU33t
即便是來年162Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuqZ6rtn6A8
之後的每一年都依然如此
