《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#170 夏祈杳杳
▌類型 樂府詩
▌作者 宅米蟲子
本篇相對於前兩篇樂府詩127Please respect copyright.PENANAPidXiBxk9U
詩意要較為薄弱127Please respect copyright.PENANAYkiqBH9DBx
但仍是一首很棒的古詩127Please respect copyright.PENANAm3Hu8FCOPw
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之所以我認為相對較弱的部分127Please respect copyright.PENANAR6YJGx9bG0
是其意境 與用詞的閱讀感127Please respect copyright.PENANAZWEfn3Vqq7
【兩世笙花】、【殘夏中秋】中皆有一個顯眼的主題,但在【夏祈杳杳】中以花鋪景,望卻天上星闕流露出了一絲孤寂與深沉的感受。127Please respect copyright.PENANACgXZd0EWH0
或許是【兩世笙花】的一抹玄龍劃破淡薄心防,思念太深。127Please respect copyright.PENANAlFD3hsgYco
也許是【殘夏中秋】的細雨紛飛絕情綿綿,景色太美。127Please respect copyright.PENANAYbWMtXT8Ib
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再嗑完了兩份深沉的憂愁後,重回到了【夏祈杳杳】,別有另外一種,希望來年梧桐花開,伊人會再來的期望。127Please respect copyright.PENANAb2odrwfo3n
更多是抱持著,能夠等待,並且那人是可以等得到的感受。127Please respect copyright.PENANAr3N0JyOOjM
故此,以其作為比較下,兩者意境高低立判。127Please respect copyright.PENANAtmjy0PigfR
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當然,宅米的詩無庸置疑放在蕉園上都是罕有敵手,皆為佳作。127Please respect copyright.PENANARzHQpA3Ehk
詩的優缺,僅憑讀者當下的心境去解讀。127Please respect copyright.PENANAHDeyiYXBTP
每個人的角度皆為不同。127Please respect copyright.PENANAyJ80oNWIW1
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有人感受深刻,127Please respect copyright.PENANAAG17m2Qgmx
有人無感,127Please respect copyright.PENANARsuNR2r8ou
各有差異。127Please respect copyright.PENANAnxJ6TQVboU
而我僅是那茫茫人海中,127Please respect copyright.PENANAUlPQeD2GOU
因其而感受到詩中情摯所渲染一名騷客。