《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#170 夏祈杳杳
▌類型 樂府詩
▌作者 宅米蟲子
本篇相對於前兩篇樂府詩105Please respect copyright.PENANANg2QUNclCI
詩意要較為薄弱105Please respect copyright.PENANATetI5h9l6M
但仍是一首很棒的古詩105Please respect copyright.PENANAlmSA7jnGMZ
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之所以我認為相對較弱的部分105Please respect copyright.PENANAzRDvutX1x8
是其意境 與用詞的閱讀感105Please respect copyright.PENANAoiZC8jExxk
【兩世笙花】、【殘夏中秋】中皆有一個顯眼的主題,但在【夏祈杳杳】中以花鋪景,望卻天上星闕流露出了一絲孤寂與深沉的感受。105Please respect copyright.PENANA6VyBJVSGf5
或許是【兩世笙花】的一抹玄龍劃破淡薄心防,思念太深。105Please respect copyright.PENANA6cyJV6WnHH
也許是【殘夏中秋】的細雨紛飛絕情綿綿,景色太美。105Please respect copyright.PENANA8oTSb0cpiY
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再嗑完了兩份深沉的憂愁後,重回到了【夏祈杳杳】,別有另外一種,希望來年梧桐花開,伊人會再來的期望。105Please respect copyright.PENANAoVdvlfw4yN
更多是抱持著,能夠等待,並且那人是可以等得到的感受。105Please respect copyright.PENANAhMkCb0VwbU
故此,以其作為比較下,兩者意境高低立判。105Please respect copyright.PENANA6Yao2bwAAf
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當然,宅米的詩無庸置疑放在蕉園上都是罕有敵手,皆為佳作。105Please respect copyright.PENANAP8WmXBvA8S
詩的優缺,僅憑讀者當下的心境去解讀。105Please respect copyright.PENANAoHIYMEvUKA
每個人的角度皆為不同。105Please respect copyright.PENANACOoKopRI8U
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有人感受深刻,105Please respect copyright.PENANA3FRnplE1Z4
有人無感,105Please respect copyright.PENANAHsfLP64iLt
各有差異。105Please respect copyright.PENANAdIcwCwUgsu
而我僅是那茫茫人海中,105Please respect copyright.PENANAN0nqRBxeh1
因其而感受到詩中情摯所渲染一名騷客。