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我認識夏夏不算太久,所以夏夏第一個報名要心得,我是蠻訝異也蠻感動的。原來,還是有人願意要我的心得。不管夏夏的初衷是什麼,我都想說——謝謝。8964 copyright protection197PENANAj6sJ5VcCQL 維尼
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這本書是夏夏三部置頂中最少觀賞數的一部,我想,會置頂的應該都是主推,它的觀看次數又少,應該會比較缺心得?8964 copyright protection197PENANAiUI28lPwbd 維尼
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好了,來看書了。我一樣是邊看邊寫,所以有時候會自打嘴巴。8964 copyright protection197PENANAFQYlj59jR1 維尼
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《讀心術牽起我倆的紅線》——夏夏(#33)8964 copyright protection197PENANANmq7ywGnQG 維尼
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33篇啊~不算多,+心得可以一兩天搞定吧?8964 copyright protection197PENANANuTJEOGQWu 維尼
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簡介:挺有趣的,很逗趣。8964 copyright protection197PENANAR2UfWl6zec 維尼
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#1的第一段(?)還沒看完我就有疑問了,對話已經寫了是誰說的,後面的介紹不就重複了?8964 copyright protection197PENANAq5QSJybmHh 維尼
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回變化?少字了嗎?8964 copyright protection197PENANAOIlN4qZmmR 維尼
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#3,“雪晴辦好出院手續”,為什麼不是家人辦?作者後面有說“擔心這麼多天”,那有家人比較合理吧?另外,看到“失血過多”的人,即使知道對方沒事,也會叫對方去休息吧?8964 copyright protection197PENANAa3FPm8Vbq5 維尼
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#1~#4的感想:目前來說不會看不下去,先給個普普的三星。8964 copyright protection197PENANADRMET7ZLsH 維尼
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中秋特輯:感覺整篇劇情好像快了點……?然後,我看到錯字了……好想糾正……8964 copyright protection197PENANA2oxRWSeZjU 維尼
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#6,個子只到腰!?如果我們算高中男生170,腰大概身體一半,也就是85左右,就算是100好了,我女兒小三的時候都過100了,作者想她幾歲?(我查了一下,小二-九歲:122~139之間)8964 copyright protection197PENANAXDbbJHr1x1 維尼
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#8的微婉是委婉的錯字嗎?8964 copyright protection197PENANA1eQMzLITzg 維尼
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#6~#11:雖然有一些錯字,但是頻率不高。所以,還是三星。8964 copyright protection197PENANAGjwQwNlWGn 維尼
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#12:這是公告……這東西不需要感想……8964 copyright protection197PENANA8o36TBWeot 維尼
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#13,是“唯唯諾諾”嗎?我記得……這是膽小懦弱不敢說話的樣子?(順從而無所違逆——這是教育部重修辭典的解釋。)8964 copyright protection197PENANAM0BhuMICSc 維尼
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#14……閨蜜吧?我看到“潤密”當場笑出來,這是什麼啦!8964 copyright protection197PENANAcqpE1iItaI 維尼
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#15:親老師你終於走了……8964 copyright protection197PENANAthKmjJOysa 維尼
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#16:感覺“不動聲色”放那裡怪怪的,可是看意思沒有不對……我真的不是在上國文課嗎……?8964 copyright protection197PENANATNsu489sUH 維尼
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#17:突然換視角?8964 copyright protection197PENANAyk88OhTpPM 維尼
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#18:說真的,我被“上回回顧”跟“角色回憶”嚇到……8964 copyright protection197PENANAQwPI4x3v8k 維尼
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#19:一開場就有錯字。然後,作者是要打“竟然”還是“既然”?8964 copyright protection197PENANAwJPHniD58l 維尼
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#21:我第一次看不出來群組裡面誰是誰……8964 copyright protection197PENANAotYaItIjZ5 維尼
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#22:精準……我真的不是上國文課嗎……8964 copyright protection197PENANAqowl8MeN0h 維尼
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#23:驚魂未定……不是靈魂未定。我是來改錯還是寫心得的啊?8964 copyright protection197PENANAIczqxAadSo 維尼
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#25:看完“墳場回憶錄”我才發現……我對兩位主角的面貌、特色都很模糊……8964 copyright protection197PENANA76Q3MX3Xqt 維尼
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#27:錯字變多了,是作者疏忽了嗎?8964 copyright protection197PENANAwuN1Qyc7ax 維尼
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#29:雪晴好像怪怪的,有點時間迴圈的感覺。8964 copyright protection197PENANAlzsCvPJBdT 維尼
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#33:肉文……看到錯字……8964 copyright protection197PENANA0LGGVhCXSD 維尼
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夏夏目前寫道#33,我都看完了。說一下想法,首先劇情的部份感覺沒什麼問題,不過攻有女友啊~他對受喜歡他這件事好像接受的很快?受喜歡上攻的好像也過於突兀?感覺這部分連作者都沒考慮好。8964 copyright protection197PENANAabeUrrkYD2 維尼
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然後,整個故事裡全形半形交錯還有錯字跟不知道是不是錯字的詞。對我來說,這些東西比劇情、角色等等更吸引我的注意力。8964 copyright protection197PENANARHq2mGe32O 維尼
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最後……雖然很對不起作者,但是我整個故事印象最深的是雪晴的金髮跟×月的超齡,還有“子函”兩個字。8964 copyright protection197PENANAALe6z8hvzm 維尼
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所以我覺得這是一篇普普的三星故事……8964 copyright protection197PENANAhEZGb3pvMX 維尼
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