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#1

3rd

Taking Out the Trash

ItsAmelia

Aug 3, 2022

481

2 Mins Read 328 Words

TW mentions of murder,

This story only has dialogue, taking place inside the MC's head. The inner monologue or voice in their head is depicted with these signs: 'hi'

The MC's inner thoughts are the ones without the symbols

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Great. Taking out the trash. I'm so done with my life.

'Nuh-uh! Only the greats die young!'

Okay...what about Tom Hanks?

'Fair point.'

I hate lugging down 3 garbage bags through the apartment building.

'Eh...whatever, just get over it.'

Of course, if I didn't live alone, I would have someone to help carry the load.

'Well, you wouldn't be so lonely if you would stop being a geek!'

I'm not a geek! I just have...geeky interests.

'Uh-huh.'

Just shut up.

'Aww...you know you love me.'

No, I don't. I'm sick and tired of you telling me what to-

...

'...'

There's a human head in this bag.

'Yep.'

Did you do this?

'Yep.'

Where's the rest of him?

'In the other bags.'

Wh-Why? How? I didn't- Jimmy...

'Well, that's why you're lonely now.'

You-no...I killed him. Why?

'We both did. He found some chick online and we found out.'

But I-I don't remember...how could I have done this?

'Once again, we did. I told you what to do, and you carried through. Jimmy won't be bothering us any longer...'

What am I going to do?

'Just wait here. The cops'll be here any minute now.'

H-how...?

'We called them an hour after Jimmy was taken care of. Told them the area and said we did it.'

No...no, this can't be happening. I can't-

...

'...'

Sirens. How could you do this to me?

'They won't know I exist. Meanwhile, you can do whatever I say in prison.'

No...

'Oh yes, sweetheart, we'll have a long time to plan things in prison...'

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#1 Taking Out the Trash

#2 Early morning

#4 If I were to die young, why not?

#5 Into the Mind of a Villain

#6 Closing Remarks