感謝各位的投稿!378Please respect copyright.PENANAEKhnWsbvgY
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!378Please respect copyright.PENANArJzbpKARYp
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~378Please respect copyright.PENANA3sgDWCzdWl
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法378Please respect copyright.PENANA0ZsLsHixY4
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!378Please respect copyright.PENANAuqH2yXsJIT
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!378Please respect copyright.PENANAB95UuZO5nI
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》378Please respect copyright.PENANAh9qwkTqN1D
(兼人氣獎得主)378Please respect copyright.PENANAHgBAGaUOvB
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD378Please respect copyright.PENANAMdFioEX0Ya
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W378Please respect copyright.PENANA6QWykE05lY
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!378Please respect copyright.PENANACllgV9qluB
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」378Please respect copyright.PENANANo1qReq5sc
結果後續結尾意外二連發!378Please respect copyright.PENANABPmcxYL2Ny
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意378Please respect copyright.PENANA3y3vqqML3Z
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺378Please respect copyright.PENANAP2znzrbqiq
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事378Please respect copyright.PENANAkTybJo5LY2
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》378Please respect copyright.PENANApu2NAL4JeL
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD378Please respect copyright.PENANAW8d4EDtto1
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯378Please respect copyright.PENANAxCRWM0Bud6
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣378Please respect copyright.PENANAouz0LfmEqW
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD378Please respect copyright.PENANArEabeOl0vl
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~378Please respect copyright.PENANAseQldMTshL
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?378Please respect copyright.PENANAJbcXZ6cuKC
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文378Please respect copyright.PENANAtgWc5Xjvne
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:378Please respect copyright.PENANA8ikzI0xkrq
這個名次是最難抉擇的378Please respect copyright.PENANAnLAZn27JP0
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態378Please respect copyright.PENANAu4tvvvr548
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧378Please respect copyright.PENANAf58fmoYOJE
以發佈順序點評:378Please respect copyright.PENANAHnD0zPvnuP
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》378Please respect copyright.PENANAEz3EzxdxgL
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底378Please respect copyright.PENANAwEXnkeQbkN
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END378Please respect copyright.PENANAKFJxFCZwj2
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺378Please respect copyright.PENANAuElzp55GIA
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案378Please respect copyright.PENANAmsAvhJHm8q
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w378Please respect copyright.PENANA3F2WtlvTeO
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖378Please respect copyright.PENANAlNwiLjpEVR
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到378Please respect copyright.PENANAWPqn5BKoGU
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》378Please respect copyright.PENANAMyTsGYyh3w
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!378Please respect copyright.PENANA6KapV8RdSV
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點378Please respect copyright.PENANA7ZP7Ehthzh
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD378Please respect copyright.PENANABiDh88JG7E
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)378Please respect copyright.PENANADfCquPk3ME
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒378Please respect copyright.PENANASxn51RbfG6
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚378Please respect copyright.PENANAUzPXwCV8WV
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失378Please respect copyright.PENANAijJt3uqJqF
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了378Please respect copyright.PENANAWpbgGmwLPb
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性378Please respect copyright.PENANABJ5MnOwAvF
例如:378Please respect copyright.PENANAd4EdntgNTn
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢378Please respect copyright.PENANAg5VCA6la1X
>放學忘記去放乖乖378Please respect copyright.PENANA6SsSn195Qu
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂378Please respect copyright.PENANAG27V1C0zFi
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些378Please respect copyright.PENANAPyOrF2575B
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性378Please respect copyright.PENANAZnLn0tSpB1
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》378Please respect copyright.PENANAB0KKVFwKbP
宛如聊齋的古風故事378Please respect copyright.PENANAnSKcHqPrDC
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?378Please respect copyright.PENANADwyQ9GzWkv
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋378Please respect copyright.PENANAzOUYqRHRuD
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)378Please respect copyright.PENANARQOHLrhkqy
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?378Please respect copyright.PENANAN7HQ9ZbvPs
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度378Please respect copyright.PENANAzTVSKik6rI
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD378Please respect copyright.PENANAc37fcK9Ftc
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌378Please respect copyright.PENANASv39mQEalz
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了378Please respect copyright.PENANAeSinzjlWks
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞378Please respect copyright.PENANA5bdorEplvW
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間378Please respect copyright.PENANAZKlxfJ1ugO
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠378Please respect copyright.PENANAWqsAb6L91O
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖378Please respect copyright.PENANAVZ2ggEI41f
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒378Please respect copyright.PENANApE3xAVhvri
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說378Please respect copyright.PENANAiL7SfiPSC6
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》378Please respect copyright.PENANArVZB51RH7V
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞378Please respect copyright.PENANA5h1NGuF4a2
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!