作者妳好709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiTxUjz1b4F
受到妳的邀请709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqhiKXNUaT4
稍微看了下这本佩姬709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK1CaFoFJnv
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ03cl3Y7t6Y
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd2fMqrIdP0
现世一堆东西709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnGGC2x6vtI
其实就很简单一个道理709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbW1T82rK5E
主角想要被爱709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLAkvwGdfQq
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwIYTZRpCD0
男主卢克爱709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVYdTZLG2k9
主角就爱回去709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlOO81Ey4Nx
女主伊莎爱709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMSnv7rq0JQ
主角就爱回去709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLpDo0Xh86v
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjJaWGMen7E
想要被爱是佩姬的主题709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8PG75bDeMs
主角性别不是问题709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGQ02kj5pJc
内心冲突不是问题709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMb163moDzd
主角被爱就迎刃而解709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡO70eRqUOmN
看不懂这点整部书就看不了709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFE1z4Pfq9T
妳的书乏人问津是这道理709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZylOdMae0u
作者妳说主角口是心非709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqDbKoQZX4P
欸我说这不对709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡulxjkeDg94
这明摆着口非心也非709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfVHzrp6EYo
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxUPmcdt7kt
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTFtgVgg2Rq
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF8FQ4uW0ua
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkJ96pmPSUQ
为了被爱709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGjf5AHDaNl
连原本的性别都不要了709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5ghrhnhgTd
这主角疯的傻的709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeEy20oECxz
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbsUnaXmybN
女主伊莎709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1UuE63y4bi
单纯的色鬼709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡguxDAvxCxx
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0NWo2qaYsw
黑化可能
艾德兰709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZoryrBBiGC
可怜虫阿709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡagZv9wthUK
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ64IdzarUwV
妳说解释不够709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2GtqFNCNcd
我到觉得清楚709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcfOA7Ktz7P
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡks4qwNIsaF
他为啥强709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2SgBUTsyYM
妳啥都没讲709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRjECwVYc0F
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1l7y2IfHNp
也是除主角外最明白的角色709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxx7LEN9XFn
她就拿来爱主角的709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7dKt8eylL6
功能性角色
还有其他许多709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlAjUTqE7So
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH0xiTvzt5o
可以瞧见妳的苦心709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNonBzc8zJn
我觉得这没必要709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjT8AC4JyI6
好的台词提一次够了709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3N8C8k9N4a
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0rJWdg24Ob
我倒嫌设定囉嗦709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ17lJ8MrR3w
空白很重要709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcLrKF2Oi2b
没明白有没明白的好处709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYHaGwSAnr7
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6VuP7uBR0y
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYeb4ZP8CIm
我还会继续看的709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYCMtCU1PJu
确实好看709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv1CU9yXDhk
希望你这能写完709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2OspFEwYdb
能放上起点不709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvRy0ceT5jz
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdrYutbfZwa
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSy0eH5C4QD
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡutY5MLFG9q
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDBGmB6t9JV
感謝你的評文709Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrdg4cKi7z4
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