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這次不用8+6的格式，而是用14行的寫法。當然韻律方面和傳統的西方十四行詩的abab格式有點不同，畢竟是兩種不同語言，所以我就用了aabb bbcc ccdd ee的自創雙行押韻方式，這和詩中所述的自創舞步也有異曲同工之妙吧。610Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWHIWfhosyA
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