終完修正完第一章。改動的地方如下:
角色改名637Please respect copyright.PENANAMnUH0sMjio
除了玄牛之外,所有畜牲集團的戰士都重新命名,因為那些陳生、李生、等等的命名,亂來之餘,又不符合作品性格。所以有以下改動:
何大力->南昌一絕637Please respect copyright.PENANApU05HC7w3R
劉元山->海柏637Please respect copyright.PENANAvA7LvMRy1t
陳生->曉尚637Please respect copyright.PENANAT3VFgyh504
李生->曉珀637Please respect copyright.PENANAM4sbpKSgdg
嚴生->迎豐637Please respect copyright.PENANAwuV3U1wALz
史生->富薈637Please respect copyright.PENANAO7m4M4Bh54
林生->傲形637Please respect copyright.PENANAgZj5fjewIC
黃生->利奧637Please respect copyright.PENANA6FETk9rYsT
張生->曉岸
執文法637Please respect copyright.PENANAk9VzAhRcJJ
也許是小弟進步了,現在回看第一章,文法竟是那麼糟糕,是以也大幅修正。637Please respect copyright.PENANAJyKx9Cqw2o