今天至目前寫了4500字左右,已經寫到有點迷茫了。64Please respect copyright.PENANALzdVbh86Ze
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我有記憶的地方,大概是到我為了緩解氣氛而增添了自己喜歡的角色微可愛橋段,後面就是接各種事件的細節和發展。64Please respect copyright.PENANAYUl8ELyvpI
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為了讓那段能顯得煞有介事,我還去查了資料,並且思考怎麼融入故事當中。64Please respect copyright.PENANAadAnO2w09x
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在整部作品當中,總會有種需要認真描述,且這一段是必要、也是故事核心之一,但作者本人會愈寫愈悶的劇情發展。64Please respect copyright.PENANA6bGvR1JJKZ
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當然如果是真的不有趣,後面重新讀的時候還是會整段刪掉重寫,但在寫的當下,判斷標準會逐漸變得曖昧不明。64Please respect copyright.PENANA6n5EKIMTFB
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可能是自己一不小心就用了習慣的寫法,而這種寫法雖然能得到標準分,但如果能增添一點微小橋段潤飾,或者更偏重於描寫哪個地方,甚至嘗試用另一個手法切入,就能變得更加有趣,而作者本人寫起來也會覺得比較輕鬆也說不定。64Please respect copyright.PENANAuvUHLpyG6G
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說起來,後面收尾的部分跟稍微往前一點的過場對話我都已經想好了,我根本就只想寫那邊。64Please respect copyright.PENANA5TlM0ACL0g
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但反過來想,或許正是因為我沒辦法把正經的地方弄到自己覺得超級無敵讚,我才會只想寫比較輕鬆的段落吧。64Please respect copyright.PENANATlRG1UVePL
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對我而言,輕鬆的段落包含角色的互動,有歡樂也有難過,甚至是情緒比較豐沛的地方。64Please respect copyright.PENANAXKMMMLOrx0
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至於那種戰鬥、比賽的細節,過程中的來回會稍微讓我無法塞入自己覺得有意思的部分,嗯,應該說能用邏輯創造出來回與轉折是能辦到,但要怎樣在正經的氛圍,塞入一些讓自己覺得比較柔和的部分,就是一個比較困難的點。64Please respect copyright.PENANAf8G7dbFyUI
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不過當然也有可能在正經的劇情段落,雖然讀者是能順順地看過去,但對於作者來說,寫這段就真的就比較無聊。是可以這麼解釋啦,但或許能有其他方法,或者能用調整比例、運用角色切入來解決之類的。64Please respect copyright.PENANAc6n7wNZlrN
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寫著寫著,忽然想到旭光蠻多這種嚴肅橋段的,如果是角色對角色的那種互動我目前比較熟悉,前面有一段弄得可以接受。64Please respect copyright.PENANAKpVbMJyJWG
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所以接下來應該著重的點是,角色單獨切換視角、也可能是轉換目前小節的構成。當我切換時經常會用一種慣用寫法,這樣雖然比較方便,也比較容易理解,但感覺就缺少了幾分有趣,所以我才會把那段刪掉。64Please respect copyright.PENANA5Qbmg0mXK6
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那是用敘事的回憶構成,所以應該反過來嘗試具有較多演出的回憶構成,加一點有趣的東西塞進去。啊──應該、確實要這樣沒錯。64Please respect copyright.PENANAhxh5bLw3IR
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從那裡塞一點稍微輕鬆但又帶點嚴肅的橋段,就能比常用的依循著慣性帶敘事回憶有趣一點。64Please respect copyright.PENANA38P4qEEkgo
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忽然覺得,應該先玩遊戲,有意識地參考這類型段落會比較好。64Please respect copyright.PENANA4yEnj1Zp2G
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等更能駕馭這種段落之後,寫起來會變得更有趣才對。64Please respect copyright.PENANAOZsgDrRJFJ
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