作品:《魚魚創挑第3期》
類型:短文、新詩
作者:PENANA各路人馬 ▶ ▶ ▶ 連結
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▌篇41 初雪23Please respect copyright.PENANAhHySWc9z1B
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▌作者 冠J
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白雪與白袍,在雪地中同樣透射了冬季的冷之饗宴。23Please respect copyright.PENANAKWPQkfwGjd
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科林趕著車,只為了與路易相會。或許,確實是忙壞了。23Please respect copyright.PENANADlbk43viRD
但他想珍惜兩人的相遇,即便下手術房再累都必須看場關於初雪的約定。23Please respect copyright.PENANAU9jg8DPw9s
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此刻,兩人雙眸間彼此相望,承諾下這份相守的誓約。
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▌篇42 新聞媒體的社會報導23Please respect copyright.PENANAxGtpxcl1Kf
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▌作者 Historia-3
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善惡到頭終有報,隨著時間的推移,惡行將被繩之以法。23Please respect copyright.PENANADxhIQgd51E
或許,出頭的那人將被社會與世人討伐,卻能拯救更多人於水火之中。23Please respect copyright.PENANADTKazPIC0j
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一文當中正如,最近社會頭條「職場性騷擾」的案子層出不窮,而誰又真的敢面對社會不公?23Please respect copyright.PENANAhogMUpUeFT
怕失去了飯碗?23Please respect copyright.PENANAX22hGSulFl
怕丟失了顏面?23Please respect copyright.PENANA6pPqk8WrqR
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以女子的自表,更多地闡述出是這些年來受盡的委屈,與下定決心切斷扭曲的愛。23Please respect copyright.PENANAqhOWs1tX78
小女孩終究會長大,蝴蝶與百合終究會死去和凋零,如兒時情景漸行漸遠。23Please respect copyright.PENANA0XuLoftycN
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文末,我見識到了是勇敢更甚於愛戀,而即便軀體早已殘破,但心魔的糾結卻在這一刻化作了灰燼。23Please respect copyright.PENANAZU1JBC3Yw9
如隱喻的冬,隨之拂袖揮去。
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▌篇43 盼23Please respect copyright.PENANABpQIA2fpPr
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▌作者 Bommie,允瑛
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由幸福轉換成為最為黑暗的一刻,竟是如此人生戲劇般的轉折。23Please respect copyright.PENANAAdLxW6bz2u
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楊宇修最後為了守護她,永別地離她而去,兩人空服員的夢想已成破碎的幻夢,除了悲歌再也無法敲響起冬季戀曲。23Please respect copyright.PENANA32svtcj0AH
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幸福僅有短暫五年,記憶不斷地重播著這逐漸逝去的五年,就像被他的笑饜給偷走了般。23Please respect copyright.PENANAYV47GqJcCG
未來又該如何?如今望著少了他的大藝公園,是如此的冰冷。
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▌篇44 冬雪落下的聲音23Please respect copyright.PENANAGoMlJXNCOj
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▌作者 寒天七舞
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慕容雲以其自身軀殼換取一場南朝的百姓安樂,而同時卻也兌現了成為英雄誓言。23Please respect copyright.PENANAxcldRU0ADI
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「先天下之憂而憂,後天下之樂而樂。」如此以大勢為優先,犧牲小我的精神,早已超脫了兒女情愛,這又有多少人能做到呢?23Please respect copyright.PENANA2WjJOwK5e4
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李瑤瞧望寥寥數行的遺留信封,這片紙是如此重如泰山,而世道便是如此,這世代便是戰火之歌,又豈能兒女私情?23Please respect copyright.PENANABTeRRHcChL
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領兵一千,卻以敢死效尤,完成奇襲的領命,這是多麼地令人尊敬,即便夜半時分李瑤落淚,卻也該為他感到一分開懷。23Please respect copyright.PENANAyQBJ8QSsru
畢竟,他自己內心早已愛慕之人,早就成為了她心目中無法取代的英雄了。
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▌篇45 飛雪23Please respect copyright.PENANAh864L6Xnzc
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▌作者 Andy Lv
▌ 抄襲「異世植物也瘋狂」
▌ 不列入評比
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▌篇46 那冬天夜裡按下快門的瞬間,彷彿也對我按下暫停鍵23Please respect copyright.PENANAQjgcpbkHcm
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▌作者 企鵝散步
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這企鵝在這個沒有雪,也沒有冰的夜晚,會不會感覺熱了點?XDD23Please respect copyright.PENANABkcccAejgP
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男孩的快門聲,如雀躍般地閃耀著她的視角。23Please respect copyright.PENANAdg9tPeWQDm
彷如捕捉住的不再只是企鵝,而是兩人之間拉近的距離。23Please respect copyright.PENANAXw33bI709Z
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河畔上,冬季,飄盪著屬於冬的喜悅。
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▌篇47 回憶裡的暖冬23Please respect copyright.PENANAr1WIfzrU6V
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▌作者 陌顏希
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兒時的記憶,總是如此美好,即便倏忽即逝卻長存於腦海深處,每當一個人寂靜的時候,偶然總能想起這些回憶。23Please respect copyright.PENANArbKnnpm7OG
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時過境遷,當時的相印機技術就是那邊的尷尬,短短幾秒的高畫質便是那個年代的一切。23Please respect copyright.PENANA7e8RSbyem3
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但,也因我們無法透過影片、相片,才能使得我們更加珍惜那片刻的美好。
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▌篇48 融雪23Please respect copyright.PENANAfS6BIIfCRF
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▌作者 澄旻
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藉由迎拂而來的冬季寒風,冷咧的瞬間,卻不自覺地意識到春麓尚未前來。23Please respect copyright.PENANAujqFzG2BNP
沒料想,雪水早已濕潤的遍地嶄露,只好將此刻駐足的軌跡,當成這這歲月容顏裡那美麗的錯誤。23Please respect copyright.PENANAuHBere2Bnj
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青春,偶然是道明媚的憂傷。23Please respect copyright.PENANAFr97MbY5sq
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尾段,字句排序漸縮,更能形成視覺上詩意的醞釀。
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▌篇49 冬之戀23Please respect copyright.PENANAZ3drY3kYer
▌類型 短文形式的新詩23Please respect copyright.PENANAI9rAHXs4yC
▌作者 夢飛
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借用短文形式,來醞釀新詩的情緒,也是種不錯的方法。23Please respect copyright.PENANAe89DOP4OIU
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茫茫人海中尋覓不得他,卻又腦中乍現了他,只好嘆道眾里尋他千百度,那人卻在燈火闌珊處,錯身的,不是彼此的目光,而是緣分。23Please respect copyright.PENANAtuutjxWs4k
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再續前緣,卻在一場餐宴上,那躁動的聲浪裡,原來,不安的竟是自己的小鹿亂撞。23Please respect copyright.PENANAydC1XaRdSX
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只到緣盡在那悔恨之時,遠距離終究只能化成戀愛的修羅場。
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▌篇50 不言冬23Please respect copyright.PENANAj6jafUmfG6
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▌作者 胤宸
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六出飛雪如精靈般飄逸著這片冬季的華麗,好似星光點綴美不勝收。23Please respect copyright.PENANA3rS0wlSKp3
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以景物寓情,用凋零枯葉來佈置出另一襯托的梅香肆意,卻為冬之饗宴,好比如沐浴在詩人自賞玩味的冷風中。23Please respect copyright.PENANAdUu3jugpiS
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以七言絕句形式上表達出冬季的感覺,用描述景物的田園詩詞來呈現出冬季。23Please respect copyright.PENANA9cIOxU6Eoi
上段「仄平平平仄平平、平平平平仄仄」以詩行句,魚魚不專業的建議,下句可為略改動「臘梅青竹矗飄飄。」而達到矗與舞同為動作上的呼應,翩翩起舞,與飄飄蕩蕩的青竹隨風搖曳的姿態,雙雙孤芳高雅,而以達成「仄平平平仄平平。」上下句的音韻上的對稱。23Please respect copyright.PENANA41YudEQmPs
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至於下句,我覺得宸大已經詮釋得非常完美,我的詩詞上也不夠程度能給予建議,那讓那夜梅飄香它而去吧。23Please respect copyright.PENANAyAHXpmXfBG
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感謝這番美意的詩,來照亮這片寒冬!
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▌篇51 雪融之時—恆久不變的溫柔23Please respect copyright.PENANA60aEzylVeI
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▌作者 AmyS畫樂帳
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在只有黑與白的世界裡,眼底只有你這顆星空閃耀。23Please respect copyright.PENANAp30xs0n7OZ
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黑對於白的情感,至從前便已深深埋藏在內心,而當圍巾被風吹落的當下,可想而知他該有多麼緊張,即便滿是傷痕也不退卻。23Please respect copyright.PENANAghlaArg7Ga
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那個早晨,你溫柔地為我繫上頸上這條圍巾,是如此溫煦如同晌午的艷陽火燙般。23Please respect copyright.PENANA1QGBUHdJdu
透過白熱的誠雙眸,更可凝盼兩人堅定無比的情感。23Please respect copyright.PENANABoWEEMLv3t
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感謝AmyS大百忙之中,再次參與這次的創挑,魚魚深感榮幸能短評你的作品。
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▌篇52 冬季戀愛23Please respect copyright.PENANA5MpOQNXAaf
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▌作者 幻嵐
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女孩的直接投送懷抱,其實還蠻危險的(?23Please respect copyright.PENANAemda6tVJwp
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大叔這兩年來都掛在交友軟體上,是否已成為玩咖這點仍有待商榷,但對於現代人的速食愛情,確實可造福不少單身大眾,這卻是個直白的優點。23Please respect copyright.PENANA7GLKDWvJqg
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而男人最後打趣地在女孩身旁,說出那句撩咩一句,卻以悄悄地流露有種輕浮的感受。
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▌篇53 冬日等待23Please respect copyright.PENANAHuPuHpfyTA
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▌作者 常夏
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霧凇繚繞,而使枝芽披上冰晶組透明外衣,如雪白般的幻境世界,是那樣非常美麗,猶如梨花盛開。23Please respect copyright.PENANACD6hot8zJf
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沆碭是那白氣瀰漫,而獨善其身挺立於此,並非你的原罪,豈能再次掛記。23Please respect copyright.PENANAPsxFUJ9qYr
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即便等待至雪融,只要心堅持至最後一刻,從不改變的堅定,始終如一,世俗卻又能奈你何?
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▌篇54 第五季23Please respect copyright.PENANAnDptlIyn5k
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▌作者 喬木
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微春,九十日是初見悸動時刻。23Please respect copyright.PENANAzrCH52txBM
盛夏,九十日是彼此試探性的曖昧。23Please respect copyright.PENANA2aiagUSO1r
秋風,九十日是加速炙熱的磨合轉折。23Please respect copyright.PENANAPFc9QWHb9k
冬雪,九十日是兩人昇華而煞羨旁人的綿密眷侶。23Please respect copyright.PENANAsfh6I7E15o
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春夏秋冬,轉瞬即逝。23Please respect copyright.PENANAbrbH63bdYN
那季節裡的容顏,在你遠去時,我便才懂,原來妳便是獨立於四季之外的季節。23Please respect copyright.PENANAoY2DpYvNeq
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直至最後,春暖花開、秋風寒氣,都比妳不上手邊迴盪的餘溫。
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▌篇55 大約在冬季23Please respect copyright.PENANAiL9wUTJAsU
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▌作者 古云夜
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在冬季,在每個冬季,在日復一日的每個冬季,那個男人會再次出現。23Please respect copyright.PENANAxffweFX6Oc
而如果兩人彼此相戀,又何必嘗試打破彼此的默契。23Please respect copyright.PENANAxu4fqGVXOr
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或許,那個男人終究有一天,會累了,會年老衰弱,會打開心房。23Please respect copyright.PENANAJYbO2u5Kmj
進一步的試探,是不可逾越的界線。23Please respect copyright.PENANA9i61THBdzL
退一步的胸懷,是維持感情的紅線。23Please respect copyright.PENANA0qAREoAyRX
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而如何拿捏,只能且看彼此誰先跨出不可跨越的那條禁忌之門。
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▌篇56 冬天的第一個深夜23Please respect copyright.PENANAB4kHFMwAV4
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▌作者 梳芙李
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一段文字,兩人心思。23Please respect copyright.PENANAxyk2hv7Eug
一場激烈的內心戲場,正不中斷地上演著,日復一日。23Please respect copyright.PENANAav1MHBRmFJ
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捧著妳在我心中的暖暖的容顏,是我無盡的幻想,與那飄逸的髮絲。23Please respect copyright.PENANAAMkVkNfh1L
斜眼喬望著你的燈火下的身形,是我思春的情懷,與那過度的想望。23Please respect copyright.PENANAJjHE1kmfzy
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而明日,讓我繼續期待下去吧。
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▌篇57 身冷,心更冷23Please respect copyright.PENANAHN2AGLH8v6
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▌作者 DT
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冬季,如果能有的在一起的人,那該是多麼溫暖的暖冬阿。23Please respect copyright.PENANA2NxH3M90FF
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而她,卻是茫茫人海中那個得取不到這段幸福的失落之人;幸福有時經不起等待,該是你的就終究會是你的。23Please respect copyright.PENANAHBMuxgWv4L
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這片雪花的墜落,是否會比她心中的理解世界崩解還來的沉重,猶未可知,然而,我們卻知道不值得等待的人,就該早點做切割。23Please respect copyright.PENANAWb8Cba6xn6
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但,畢竟當局者迷,旁觀者清,除了她自己明白了過來,痛過了,否則又怎麼能知道這個道理。
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▌篇58 冬日溫存23Please respect copyright.PENANA72E86Hfsvn
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▌作者 艾斯汀
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前、中、後,三段故事,從平日嬉鬧、甜蜜、永別,三段故事卻能無違的接續轉折,就像是她雪白的髮絲,而同一個美景卻有著不同的心思;如同月圓,每個人的心情都確有不同的體悟。23Please respect copyright.PENANAtvLdBuI2hc
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帶著滿富韻味的魚尾紋,是那步入晚年的歲月容顏,卻依舊不變的是當初的眷戀。23Please respect copyright.PENANANE1HnTyv1f
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好久再次握緊妳的手,但只怕再也沒了機會。這份情感又該如何的真摯呢?
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▌篇59 冬日的光23Please respect copyright.PENANAwqPchEcVJs
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▌作者 文渣昕
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文字雖短,但內容卻已能感受到一報還以一報的感激之情,即便女孩最後沒能醒來卻把心願填滿了,即便這個冬天好冷,故事卻早把讀者的心都填滿了。23Please respect copyright.PENANA0LTNAeW6Y9
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心臟的移植是個非常危險的手術,一個失誤恐導致滿盤皆輸。男孩堅定的活下去,或許,是為了報答女孩的而存在的。23Please respect copyright.PENANAAGqBJctY7u
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在茫茫的人海中,人與人之間都有著自己的前世因果,而如果愛的表達是無所畏懼的付出生命,那又如何呢?就算只是為了她/他的一個笑顏,失去了世界,也算心滿意足了。
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▌篇60 The First and the Last Christmas - Part I23Please respect copyright.PENANAJjjEvESztX
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▌作者 腥霜
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外表如同常駐青春的男人與那內心細膩的女孩。在這場冬季饗宴裡,留下了一段刻劃銘心的交換禮物,卻如同定情物的交換般地可愛互動。在腥霜筆下能明顯感受到,兩人不但默契十足,更對彼此有著輕鬆卻不緊張的關係,可想而出,兩人這般見怪不怪的吐嘲可以說是一對無話不說的兩人。23Please respect copyright.PENANAXPFf77189p
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另外,恭喜腥霜擁有了一個難以忘懷的平安夜,接續是恭喜有個能一起度過寒冷冬季的好對象。熊貓非常可愛與筆記本上的那個豬頭,非常地微妙微俏。
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▌篇61 冬日裡的暖暖23Please respect copyright.PENANAHSPXN1eX4k
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▌作者 谷映塵(員外)
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在那另一個世界裡面的兩人卻能長久地不分彼此與這麼蜷捲熱戀,卻令人如此羨煞旁人,即便是神仙也得忌妒上一回。23Please respect copyright.PENANAtipqdBFPjk
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(他們或許就是神仙?23Please respect copyright.PENANAme9ZSThyPg
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而簡單幾筆卻把情慾展現地表露無遺,嬉鬧如那熱火般地燙。人法器卻讓我不自禁想著,莫非這已經是部修仙情節,兩人莫非早已踏入靈嬰期,抑或是更高境界。空間法器,那可算上高檔貨了。23Please respect copyright.PENANAUqEHKqXGQB
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而冬季間,不再只是人間的特權,即便在天界都能有這麼大合大開的表現,想必今年的這個冬天應該非常地溫暖了。23Please respect copyright.PENANA7pV1wzORrK
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另外,感謝員外的打賞XDDD
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▌篇62 心臟的餘熱23Please respect copyright.PENANACU8zUpIafB
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▌作者 天上之昨
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標題正以心臟的餘熱溫度而與結尾相互呼應,在故事簡短的敘事上非常的引人注目,並且想要去同情著這名女孩。23Please respect copyright.PENANAbm5t3tFeVw
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然而,真正更讓人感動的卻是故事的主角,以其大愛的精神來施予仍需別人施救的心情。23Please respect copyright.PENANAJfvpNjyg19
我們不去探討醫院面向,心臟究竟適不適合、從山上運送到山下的器官是否來得及轉移等等的面向。23Please respect copyright.PENANAnb40sRY3tM
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而我,只知這份溫度,仍在心頭中持續發熱著。
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▌篇63 雪落下的聲音23Please respect copyright.PENANA93fFIpQUKw
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▌作者 晨宇希
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雪落下時候,我仍想著那巫女的話語。23Please respect copyright.PENANAyAkgL06aih
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雖說,故事是呈現著輪迴的延續故事,但魚魚覺得在三人之間呈現出複雜的關係,一時難以辨識誰是誰的錯覺。23Please respect copyright.PENANAaTZ8gD8k32
就以故事敘事而言,或許在稍作調整會比較好。23Please respect copyright.PENANAfJfWdMnkVv
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當然,輪迴的故事設定性非常新穎,感謝晨宇希能參加這次創挑。
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▌篇64 於眼前的一片雪白23Please respect copyright.PENANAS2j8LVj4Xz
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▌作者 -
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空白的地圖,就好比如人生,我們不斷地在未知的路程找尋著自我。23Please respect copyright.PENANAr2oC4hJ0Bi
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我常在想,如果在這段路上,我與這個某某人不曾相遇過,那麼我還會有著相同的情懷去與另一個人,有著相同的情感嗎?23Please respect copyright.PENANAzZwuk8B1HM
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正如文中的雪白,白可能是已經填滿的際遇,也可能是仍未展開的人生。23Please respect copyright.PENANAwV2lvFRefL
由我們自己去想像這個我們眼中所看到的這塊白色方塊。23Please respect copyright.PENANA98mbHXvJUk
每個人都有自己的表述。
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▌篇65 早安23Please respect copyright.PENANAtvkrxJIDIT
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▌作者 月言
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每天早晨的例行事項,卻是兩個人之間無言的默契。23Please respect copyright.PENANAHPHZxBlXpQ
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即便小吵小鬧已如家常便飯卻也羨煞旁人,暖暖包與枕頭的攻勢,都不及那對於戀人間的眷戀連發。23Please respect copyright.PENANAHUSynY7MIc
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一段平凡的生活日常,卻滿懷著令人感動的心思。
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▌篇66 寒冬中的睡前故事23Please respect copyright.PENANAZrWtTN0D3W
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▌作者 清夢
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竟一個不小心陷入這段強攻、微弱受的發車情節中,然後還不小心腦中陷入一頓YY意淫的各種腦補(??23Please respect copyright.PENANAt1fHapKxgK
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首先,在第一發的火銃子彈射出後,我沒想到故事的結尾還會有轉折意外的第二發子彈,抑或是,根本沒想過會是獸人番XDD但鉅細靡遺的火爐石床板上的激戰,都令人想反覆雋永,如那夏天的炙熱,但神奇的是故事的背景卻是冬季之間,猶如我們早已陷入了清夢的故事劇情裡,卻仍走不出那迴圈,是如此的美好。23Please respect copyright.PENANAVvXk4Qqdy4
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只盼望,我們可以有天看到里昂反客為主,成為新的頭狼。
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▌篇67 兩團毛球貼貼的故事23Please respect copyright.PENANAq4FwA9mVPw
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▌作者 清夢
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狼人與雪豹的互動蠻曖昧,更多的是那種獸人之間的煽情面。23Please respect copyright.PENANAJ9znnPCrNn
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而針對這篇故事,魚魚仍覺得有些地方敘述不全的部分,分述如下:23Please respect copyright.PENANAXcOjzizFoK
一、老母狼僅出現前段,故事後面不明原因,沒了後續。23Please respect copyright.PENANAOOd9p12cgv
二、寫故事出現「XXX.JPG」太過口語化,不適合應用於文章之中。23Please respect copyright.PENANA5dXi6Ns9ct
三、洗澡的部分,加上了個游泳,有點不明原因。
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▌篇68 最後一個與妳渡過的冬天!23Please respect copyright.PENANAgiPJz5Fqul
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▌作者 Breeze
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獵奇的奇特故事向,雖毛骨悚然卻又想讓人不經意想多去腦補這故事後續的情節。23Please respect copyright.PENANA1CihH5fwnV
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人,本就是種糾結的情感動物。明知這是個禁忌的故事,卻又忍俊不住想要繼續看下去的衝動。23Please respect copyright.PENANAonMBMcO3gg
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(好,抱歉,我說的就是我自己XD23Please respect copyright.PENANAVJmrpexFxY
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或許,男主的心思早已扭曲,人格早已失去常人的想法,但在這個世界觀中卻又出現買家,可想而知,這地方狩獵與被狩獵,是一種私下合法的社會。23Please respect copyright.PENANAO5UhSaJL5f
男主或許是真的想疼惜這名女孩,雖然他的方式,我們無法以常人的角度去理解。23Please respect copyright.PENANAivKklYhOjm
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只能無可奈何地望著那最後一個粉紅緞帶被系上的最後片段。
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▌篇69 藍鬍子的暖冬23Please respect copyright.PENANAohMSn20sss
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▌作者 胤宸
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輪迴幾世也僅只在意著妳,而像這冥冥之中早已注定的事,又會有誰能猜測的到呢。23Please respect copyright.PENANAs2zBiBC4s9
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從優美的場色敘寫到純情、激情、疑惑、恐懼等等,直到故事後段的轉折都帶著令觀眾想打開這潘朵拉盒子的衝動。23Please respect copyright.PENANAsNZ5WRAeNI
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開篇我卻從未能料想到這竟是帶有點令人顫抖害怕的恐怖愛情小說,確實有些被驚嚇到,可再回頭反覆雋永,卻發現藍景墨早已埋下伏筆,《格林童話》裡的《藍鬍子》篇章,便是如同那潘朵拉,經不起誘惑的將不開屬於自己知道的秘密給探索,終究會走入命運的分歧。23Please respect copyright.PENANAoFEkqyWCZq
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但現實而論,又能有多少人能經得起這般誘惑呢?
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▌篇70 秋天過後23Please respect copyright.PENANAC1TeFUSAEF
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▌作者 沙發王的故事
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藉由靈魂暗喻來暗示性的試探,卻意料之外的磕碰了一面厚重的牆。23Please respect copyright.PENANAOa0tXaQ9B8
差點把自己撞得稀巴爛了。23Please respect copyright.PENANAzpMkz5twEq
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有時候,在對方雷達沒有打開的狀態下,這種試探就是個危險的風險性突破,而想必這次過後,兩人或許將要陷入更加尷尬的關係了吧。23Please respect copyright.PENANAuxlQ4agZQ5
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但,林明成彷如無心的化解尷尬,或許,也是要拯救兩人仍舊可以維持下去的友誼也不然。
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▌篇71 冬季幽禁23Please respect copyright.PENANAMu5iqB35A1
▌類型 新詩23Please respect copyright.PENANAjg9US61grp
▌作者 九方思想貓
或許,他將以禁錮了自己的情感作為戀愛的曲目。23Please respect copyright.PENANA9YqBqECd0o
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孤獨的苦痛泛起了這片幽恨漣漪,而他似乎迷失了過往自己生活過的歲月。23Please respect copyright.PENANAJLInCo5cZh
透過仍獨留在居室裡,她曾經使用過的物品,穿過的衣物,重複地撥放了兩人曾經誓言的跑馬燈。23Please respect copyright.PENANAVkU8Th11N1
此刻的他,打算將自己埋進了冬季的雪地裡不再走下去,而以此冬眠。23Please respect copyright.PENANAITdO7kht2v
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「春季再叫我吧。」內心有道聲響悄悄地響起,可他卻已然不在意了。23Please respect copyright.PENANAx6yGCAmNHy
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靜瑟的金風,冷冽刺骨的要他品償 / 品嘗何為感情。
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▌篇72 在這不會下雪的城市裏23Please respect copyright.PENANAhsdHpTv2p1
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▌作者 沒名
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冬季的戀情悄悄地透過一杯熱巧克力傳遞了過來,是屬於青鳥的祝福。23Please respect copyright.PENANAHTYCxb2TxD
這不是偶然,而是男孩長年持之以恆的努力,與女孩的低潮,碰使他們今天的相遇。23Please respect copyright.PENANAF9gw0CLoCj
吉他聲響,仍舊迴盪在讀者的腦海中,但絃聲卻不在飄盪孤寂的味道。
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▌篇73 冬日戀歌 23Please respect copyright.PENANAsZVF3hJ3f1
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▌作者 邱樂映
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生命中來來去去的過客,是我們不願回首的過往。23Please respect copyright.PENANAgVwR8Nm7MZ
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直至,對的時間、對的人出現。23Please respect copyright.PENANAfm33ODo6Rw
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牽起了這緣分,才知冬季戀歌又再次響徹。
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▌篇74 雪夜下的陪伴23Please respect copyright.PENANA2H5nHpI7VV
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▌作者 月游影
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冰雪中男主難得透露出的一抹淺笑,刻印了冬季的一絲悸動。兩年時光,命運輪迴。23Please respect copyright.PENANAwJ0nc20lbF
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她與他立場頓時相反。23Please respect copyright.PENANAqWt8HlEFS2
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魚魚雖未讀過【靈璽書】卻能從中感覺出幾番的低潮打擊,卻給了兩人內心的成長。雖未能可知,未來男主是否完成他需要履行的承諾,但此刻卻使他更加以堅定而繼續下去。
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▌篇75 這個男人是真的冷23Please respect copyright.PENANAq9xDj171Zd
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▌作者 夏夏
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主角非常的有趣的突然穿越。即便,真的再也回不去原本的世界中,卻意外的與故事的帥氣男主結為連理,還救了一命。23Please respect copyright.PENANAqCIiHdDrc5
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雖然,不清楚他是怎麼知道自已打翻了熱可可的這段設定。23Please respect copyright.PENANALEKcmQjCT3
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然而,這次啟動的歷程,卻也讓人無意間莞爾一笑,這爆笑情節。
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▌篇76 花23Please respect copyright.PENANAe2cQKVSvOR
▌類型 新詩23Please respect copyright.PENANA0hLXdb1ikM
▌作者 月言
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希望與失望,僅隔一念之間。23Please respect copyright.PENANA464QPXvnqw
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如同此刻飄落下的片片雪花;冬季正演奏著一幕曲調,僅為抬起頭來細心品嘗的賞花客。
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▌篇77 紅屁股與白屁股23Please respect copyright.PENANAwJlegcFbLp
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▌作者 大寫E
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相識秋季23Please respect copyright.PENANAnVqJESudw7
相戀冬季23Please respect copyright.PENANASzalmvh7d1
相別春季23Please respect copyright.PENANAlomIiNDnL4
那短暫的微戀,卻竟是場複雜的三角戀情。23Please respect copyright.PENANArL4O5IvH4Q
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故事的女孩,如是溫室裡的一掌小花,金魚或許是美好的曇花,卻如煙火般絢麗了不過一個季節。23Please respect copyright.PENANAfXYNkJws6x
二月冬季不走,卻劃過幾絲離別的憂愁。23Please respect copyright.PENANA4A20x5mmgN
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心目中理想的學弟,到頭來也只個渣男。23Please respect copyright.PENANAUsDBGc5ISO
卻又如何放不下這情感呢?23Please respect copyright.PENANAi24BMqL1lr
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或許,在歷經十年、二十年,這將只會是偶爾夜半時分的一個背影罷了。
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▌篇78 歸家23Please respect copyright.PENANAtcyoRdICud
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▌作者 蝕語
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金髮與銀髮男人兩人之間的耽美故事,卻也讓這個只下雪國境,點綴出不一樣的迷人。23Please respect copyright.PENANAh2v8XHLhBs
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簡單的剷雪,卻可巧妙流出兩人的單純的愛意。23Please respect copyright.PENANAEEF0S5uyi6
雖是僅有異性戀觀的魚魚讀後,卻也能感受到兩人的情感。23Please respect copyright.PENANAFwS9QbWtK9
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PS:一千字寫短篇,本就要犧牲某一部分的環節,這考驗著作者本身的敘事能力。
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▌篇79 冬23Please respect copyright.PENANA2IwQSMXytG
▌類型 新詩23Please respect copyright.PENANA1MXGnkMHN2
▌作者 翠玉
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殘骸是你過去的挫傷,23Please respect copyright.PENANArE9vAfezy2
但卻仍沒有打擊我兩人的真摯情感。23Please respect copyright.PENANAaiKr449SFI
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而在冬季雪地裡,相繫相依的彼此,指尖拴住我兩人的羈絆,即便未來仍是未知數;在一篇空盪如雪白的道路,是你加快了腳步,卻試圖與我共通頻率。23Please respect copyright.PENANAqVpKxSTPix
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書房的書籍,在我兩人伴讀下,爐火也比及不了心中的炙熱。23Please respect copyright.PENANA82bTWRexqo
寒風的打擊與盡頭的歧路,終究將你與我給留了下來,只道聲最後的沉默,化作下感情戲最後的落幕。23Please respect copyright.PENANAWIknT9DHIw
冬季,我的詩歌還能如何響徹?23Please respect copyright.PENANAs5tSNiTvCK
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以上,為魚魚的詩文解析。
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▌篇80 冬23Please respect copyright.PENANAtED5rAuUS8
▌類型 新詩23Please respect copyright.PENANANUwzrwfgsi
▌作者 朔洌
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我打雪月走過,那等在季節裡的足跡如燦菊般飄霜。23Please respect copyright.PENANAujF9Suj3mE
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而你在那片雪地裡,悄悄然進出。23Please respect copyright.PENANAR7fFGruU1w
是否還能再回憶起我倆曾經的美好呢?23Please respect copyright.PENANAusyAGNH92A
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足跡再次被銀白雪花覆蓋,而歲月靜好,只是伊人已不在。
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▌篇81 最後一個與你渡過的冬天!-223Please respect copyright.PENANAw7B2mse0lW
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▌作者 Breeze
▌第二篇
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第二部,以第二人的視角解讀這部作品,而同一故事卻延伸出男人恐懼感,成為閱讀完後的一絲韻味迴盪在讀者身上,我們尤以那男人可怕又貪婪的眼神,與前一部比對,更可察覺出另外的慾望。23Please respect copyright.PENANAfzJuwcHcWt
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女孩的無助,與男孩的狂暴,成為了最強烈的對比。只怕這世界,早已腐敗的令人惋惜,而最為遺憾是故事早就沒有救世主這種東西,有的只剩下性格扭曲的小鎮人們了。23Please respect copyright.PENANAdwIaFGuTbq
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Breeze大雖以獵奇風格寫文,卻又能毫無保留地將人性完整呈現而出,筆下的那絲求生慾竟像是我們希望的那般。23Please respect copyright.PENANAPFHGVc5KiT
是生存,還是死亡,恐怕我們每人心中早就有了答案。
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▌篇82 冬之花23Please respect copyright.PENANASktLoKO3Sr
▌類型 新詩23Please respect copyright.PENANAdLSZJwLK98
▌作者 落陽塵
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以其冬末之花蕊綻放出另一種花的獨特表現。23Please respect copyright.PENANAh2MqJJXwhl
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尤以愛著是那不經意的試探,好比如兩人之間的曖昧,誰都會彼此跨越出那條線,而是否能獲得自己內心的答案,卻緊張地不敢直視。23Please respect copyright.PENANABZmOtRnWPr
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而我們仍立身在這個位置,默默等待著答案的來臨。春,仍未來;但心卻早已在冬天緩緩升起火苗。23Please respect copyright.PENANA054sWATtGm
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卻如,你的離去,我不是想妄,只是引頸期盼下一個春天,我們將可不分彼此。23Please respect copyright.PENANAWRi2JbzCx6
夢境,我又是否能再次遊歷這片盎然的冬之花大觀園呢?
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▌篇83 指尖的溫暖23Please respect copyright.PENANAIjadlMe2md
▌類型 短文23Please respect copyright.PENANA2riBM2Jk1r
▌作者 沛紜啊
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雪,飄零而落,卻失去了掌心的溫度。23Please respect copyright.PENANAqmT8FLEnIJ
指縫之間,早已滲透走了你的鼻息。23Please respect copyright.PENANA8Fk7dIyHiq
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醫院裡的最後一刻,是無盡循環的相思情,卻在腦海不斷迴盪。23Please respect copyright.PENANA9vVo5Mu8dc
我憶不起你確切的樣子,卻僅剩下永冬相伴。23Please respect copyright.PENANAEkoDFWth7l
時間,或許早在你離去那一刻,早就停止了下來。23Please respect copyright.PENANADgrA5TGeQJ
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誰又能喚醒我呢?同如這場雪,誰又能在雪地裡撥開再尋覓得你。
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▌篇84 冬梅23Please respect copyright.PENANAnuU6SlTusE
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▌作者 落花
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「落花大的深情碰碰車,總能無情地不斷往前駛來,即便在侷限於千字的顛簸路上,也能如履平地。」23Please respect copyright.PENANAxPwIMFcRll
寂魚此刻正在螢幕前,思索著該如何評判,這一回合的短評,但,最主要還是因為我自己也想上車車(???23Please respect copyright.PENANAvbUF8CRv12
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或許是女子早已離世遠去,抑或是,女子熱情不再,追求新刺激,拋下了顏禾而去,但我更願為是後者,至少還有今世再見的機會。23Please respect copyright.PENANAfQZlBX1bsG
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剪不斷,理還不斷地來亂;知己已是難得可見,尤以是在床上這方面,簡直如稀世珍寶,顏禾或許這輩子都將會背負著,這一無法忘懷的情感走向墳墓,如他那抹除不掉的手腕刺青,這是全文中最令人難以忘懷的兩人情感互動。23Please respect copyright.PENANAY7zKlLxDSf
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而在用詞方面,魚魚莫過於深愛著「冬梅」點點開、點點落,唯美同時具備浪漫氣息,雖是敘述著依人離去的悲落心情,卻又能反覆再次咀嚼前文的激情畫面,主題仍又帶回了令人印象深刻的情密繾綣之中。23Please respect copyright.PENANAA4uWW7Yrh7
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寒冬似乎還未走完,而葉去早已落得冷清枯寂,這樣悲愁的深情,只能在記憶中朦朧找尋回來了,想必即便未來再有身軀契合的對象,也不見得能在情感上填補這個空洞。23Please respect copyright.PENANA0xBCE6yeQP
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僅只希望,春季晨曦,可以多帶有些這片愁的滋味。
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▌篇85 遲來的冬日23Please respect copyright.PENANAZduUWrVvX1
▌類型 短文23Please respect copyright.PENANAY3lQK93run
▌作者 shiun
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以男主真的角度,仰望著前輩的高度,從敬佩到愛戀,而畫面一轉,此刻他的後輩,桐生竟也帶著與他相同的角度注視著他。23Please respect copyright.PENANAiyRJwQWfKT
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失落的心情,再次峰迴路轉。23Please respect copyright.PENANAd0FdlQnKHs
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這聖誕節,飄落下的是染紅了悸動的雪片。
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▌篇86 風厲霜芒23Please respect copyright.PENANAMrnfcENk9F
▌類型 短文23Please respect copyright.PENANAppNdUSOmSw
▌作者 李宇霜
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以孤單與寂寞辦佐著這片冬季,而妳那芳香使我獲得了片點的救贖。23Please respect copyright.PENANAy0DLmHlEwm
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雪花融了,可單獨的身影卻還在原地。23Please respect copyright.PENANAZW09P5f934
有妳贈與我的溫暖衣裳,卻仍握不住妳。23Please respect copyright.PENANA9d2hvj0KwC
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只希望平行時空下的妳,也能感受我這番思念。
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▌篇87 兄坑同人-印飛星視角23Please respect copyright.PENANAIxehgqJSCc
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▌作者 夜黎
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這是甚麼展開,有沒有半點提示(?????????23Please respect copyright.PENANAwUqqzGjKmS
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大師兄,你的劍就留在原地吧,好好安息而去吧。23Please respect copyright.PENANARQBn5zGry2
冬天這番冷,你別硬撐了。
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▌篇88 十四歲の殘酷青春物語(科幻篇) :核冬天23Please respect copyright.PENANAvAUWSAFrU5
▌類型 短文23Please respect copyright.PENANA1uHicoLM53
▌作者 余軍
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這些在地下生存的後代人們,早已走不出這片地球末日的殘存之地,而這卻也是物種的悲歌。23Please respect copyright.PENANAuOucZywwqB
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即便孩童真能跨出百里外搜尋到生物與傳說的綠洲又當如何?23Please respect copyright.PENANAmntScwtH8a
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地底人民,或許早已不敢再走出溫室,也或許科技再也舉步維艱的地步了。23Please respect copyright.PENANA0yVbudMQVr
即便突破了,又到了陰謀論的展開,暗中祕密破壞成功突破的人與機器也說不定。23Please respect copyright.PENANAl4ZQOpOBzz
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然而這一切,殊不知都是人們自己所造成的結果。
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▌篇89 冷冰23Please respect copyright.PENANAuZpra9yfMa
▌類型 短文23Please respect copyright.PENANAM2jHTGfNSV
▌作者 仁傑大師
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原來姆明竟然是我們熟知的魯魯咪,又學到了一課了。23Please respect copyright.PENANArR8FkFvyEQ
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在詩中,可以輕易瞧見,冬天的冰冷,兩人之間的離別均化為,孤單一人的冷落之意。23Please respect copyright.PENANACjP9JrdSH6
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直盼望,冷冬---23Please respect copyright.PENANAFC9s0xupfa
趕緊離去。
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▌篇90 冬,冷暖自知23Please respect copyright.PENANAVdNOY0Ilkd
▌類型 短文23Please respect copyright.PENANAZFWUNpyM7i
▌作者 吐司可可
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一處相思,兩處閒愁。23Please respect copyright.PENANAwA3yeh4K8y
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女孩當時毅然拒絕的神態,而如今卻又「剪不斷,理還亂」出現在自己的世界裡,或許,她仍不想將他走進自己的內心。23Please respect copyright.PENANA0K1Dna5m0D
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有些人,正是如此。即便再好、即便再有緣,終將成為好友。23Please respect copyright.PENANAnLxWpgoUO7
而兩人彼此間尚未跨出那步,或許,下一個冬天,抑或是下下個冬天將有所改變。23Please respect copyright.PENANAgsKOBeQoSO
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天空六出飄零,此時夜裡午時,答案早已呼之欲出,只是彼此不願承認罷了。
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▌篇91 Stand by you (1)23Please respect copyright.PENANATqjwlrFer7
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▌作者 勝雲 第1篇
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雖然我未看過這部飆速宅男,但藉由勝雲在二創中,重新為故事點燃起一道新的靈魂。23Please respect copyright.PENANALGekuOBrb3
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然而,究竟失蹤的小野田坂道又去了哪裡呢?
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▌篇92 Stand by you (2)23Please respect copyright.PENANAUSdHYRhMN8
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▌作者 勝雲 第2篇
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在受到了喜愛之人的威脅後,才得知原來這背後消失的原因,一一顯露而出,是這般鼻酸。23Please respect copyright.PENANApD9VnOegaK
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為了愛,放下了身分。23Please respect copyright.PENANAiQHkEESRm2
為了愛,放下了興趣。23Please respect copyright.PENANALMrl77ETEz
為了愛,放下了一切。23Please respect copyright.PENANArTh18toLFo
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這是要多麼大的決心才能做到如此?23Please respect copyright.PENANAffvx1lTw1p
然而此刻,他的身影卻離她如此的近。
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▌篇93 冬天的故事23Please respect copyright.PENANA92o4tbdCeD
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▌作者 雲遊
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以冬天的冷寒,把自心中的記憶停留片刻,來回複沓。23Please respect copyright.PENANAcVcZ3mfV2k
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夾於段落間「我的心,我的情。」加上最末尾一句「下一個冬天」,不難看出新詩中營造出由追憶、牽手而至親密,此皆「雪」的形象生動,變化顯見。23Please respect copyright.PENANAB3V0cLAAAh
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苦海翻愛恨,世間難逃命運,相親卻不可接近,而一切都均照緣份而走。23Please respect copyright.PENANA6zyZIf8e7L
風再次迎拂而至,你的足跡、你的溫度、你最後散場的擁抱,都深深記在腦海之中。23Please respect copyright.PENANAy2mHaUrAv0
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我們一起期望,冬季北風吹鳴之時。23Please respect copyright.PENANARFIflTJdyr
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兩人還能再次相見。
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▌篇94 幸好這冬天有你23Please respect copyright.PENANAELHBffMwOk
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▌作者 小羊
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自從喜歡一個人之後,他的一切在情人眼底都將成美好的事物。23Please respect copyright.PENANA1l543QnCjs
「別人又如何能懂?」
文中的阿陽致阿雲的內心話,形同一場日記,在內心響徹大作,掀起一場如戀愛風暴。23Please respect copyright.PENANAYJSSgTK9bl
只是既然已經度蜜月了,這些又何嘗不敢給對方看,有時甜蜜更甚內心的熱情。
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▌篇95 Stand by you (3)23Please respect copyright.PENANABcs5sUsPS3
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▌作者 勝雲 第3篇
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命運,能讓相愛之人離去。23Please respect copyright.PENANADGQFktY48H
同樣,也能巧妙復合。23Please respect copyright.PENANAu4L23FpaLO
兩人失去了聯繫的第四年,鳴子章吉的重現,把斷裂的紅線再次牽連在一起。23Please respect copyright.PENANAwPuyxvpBHQ
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彼此眼底之中錯過的星空,睡夢中遺忘的影跡,再次出現眼前,多少人又真能把握住呢?23Please respect copyright.PENANAXbLyskMVjs
現在這一刻,擁在懷裡的真摯,即便會有生命安全的風險,也絕不再放手。23Please respect copyright.PENANAdPZNwXXywr
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如此真情,是難得可貴的好文
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▌篇96 兩世寒冬23Please respect copyright.PENANAfv1WaYDXWU
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▌作者 清夢
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以大異稟然的精神,與自己兄弟共赴黃泉,超脫世俗,只為了地府上再次續緣。23Please respect copyright.PENANAqTmWUBRziJ
換做今生的先天失明,卻仍保留記憶,這是要多大的善緣才可獲得的報恩。23Please respect copyright.PENANAA9WyPmayZv
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此刻,簡單的一吻。23Please respect copyright.PENANAlxeJXTWUw5
卻是輪迴兩世,要歷經多少責難才等候不易的結果。
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▌篇97 冬雪如我23Please respect copyright.PENANAVFzkxbC2R1
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▌作者 微暈沙拉
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文字優美,而冬季正如那聖誕樹下飄下的大雪飄零,美艷不可方物。23Please respect copyright.PENANAEnIEP9TpkO
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兩人炙熱的眼光,此刻早已凝結一起,分不清你我。23Please respect copyright.PENANAksVtroqsKZ
如此浪漫,只希望時間真能停留在這一頃刻之間。
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▌篇98 冬日錯覺23Please respect copyright.PENANAOcIgUpVe7u
▌類型 新詩23Please respect copyright.PENANAYY90OcIZrp
▌作者 寒天七舞
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閃過短暫的際遇,卻深入不了彼此之間的更進一步的可能性。23Please respect copyright.PENANAMhzeNOH9o2
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你預測了我們的戀情。我卻始終沒猜測出最終的結局。23Please respect copyright.PENANAn5XU8VplD8
冬季的錯覺其中便是我與你的偕手于老,與永結連理的鼓箏合鳴。23Please respect copyright.PENANAP00o0sSCq7
春夏秋,都不及冬季的漫長,與思念。23Please respect copyright.PENANAtwkan5j2l7
錯覺已然不再,如是再次打下的冰雹,竟把我砸的遍體麟傷。23Please respect copyright.PENANA1lGdp1TKhf
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幻夢醒來,已是春季。
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▌篇99 寒冬平安夜23Please respect copyright.PENANAiiZhysMflM
▌類型 新詩23Please respect copyright.PENANAHuka0Wcclb
▌作者 東津雲
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走過一個人的冬季,以其街角往來的雙雙入對,映襯著你與她兩人的離情。23Please respect copyright.PENANAYUo3jI2CUn
滑落的幾滴咖啡苦澀卻苦不過陳年往事的舊情。23Please respect copyright.PENANALirHNVTXCu
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自由,無論今夜響起再多的訊息與版面。23Please respect copyright.PENANAlffvuZwI1J
拋之腦後,獨享著這片點的孤寂感。
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▌篇100 威靈頓的夏季23Please respect copyright.PENANAqPJnsIq0be
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▌作者 mi-na-mi
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第一段詩句藉由回踏技巧,點燃了冬季惆悵的孤獨、夏季孤單的映襯。23Please respect copyright.PENANA3d64tmPrgb
與妳相隔萬里的距離不是距離僅有內心,是你與我的依伴。最初的內分愛意---至今猶愛。23Please respect copyright.PENANAnMPXnmwyrN
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尾段後勁的病痛將醞釀了多日連月來的孤寂全然爆發開來的思念藉由這日傍晚裊裊的一某夕印抹去在從威靈頓跨海千里外的太平洋西岸邊上。