《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRmZXtbbqmS
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsdbvBqW8T4
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaMQNmOOTEF
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwjnU8W0yED
而是是人在食用時能入口即化272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvsqWqGHSsp
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1deuR7csoO
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfkGzhCJo5i
使人不會因為時間的洪流272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSXkZE0XlMf
失去了炙熱272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8UKLnAzNiy
272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJkH5avFCHI
詩名為《夏，冬眠》272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg6TcYAH5x7
但夏季怎麼會有雪272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEMvpg2xhvu
令人加以反思272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtQt2kV435e
雪季不該有的畫面272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxmvH6pRwup
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfiPprLlzu2
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或許272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡelXlHZuIBJ
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwGrMbQIsRK
即便是來年272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyJ0HiDCPEC
之後的每一年都依然如此
