《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGeW0IvADdu
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNOVPtp7HPM
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUF7mP2NSOe
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsmKLR8cjtE
而是是人在食用時能入口即化229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj7YBUZBH8F
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmyfYgImUfM
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu8Dgfez8Zj
使人不會因為時間的洪流229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6iuYsRtLkP
失去了炙熱229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjNf3cwSmEZ
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhsz2JcwKla
但夏季怎麼會有雪229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4NkOs8IACd
令人加以反思229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlRvzkhZZ4h
雪季不該有的畫面229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcrMuOBb4Tg
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNkGtrM0f73
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或許229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn7ATHlF7V1
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJIuj2qRqkB
即便是來年229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY7YmVC3p4F
之後的每一年都依然如此
