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這是我第一部寫完的故事，感覺很神奇，沒想到我也能夠完成，還要是每日一更的形式。308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoU09ZCaZJP
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我也不懂寫什麼大鋼，就單純跟著心中的劇本去，完成了我當初希望完成的事，真的太好了。308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpgzmLBNVaD
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當然同時也看見了很多問題。架構，內容，時間線所有也不完整。308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYntHcJdnDP
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308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8oPkIUrne3
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很多自己不自知的問題都在自己的作品中一一呈現。8964 copyright protection304ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9wNb6e36ew 維尼

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果然..... 8964 copyright protection304ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8o7WEHoP3b 維尼

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以嘗試性質來看的話是good try 啦。308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3TOWCbEJF2
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看見自己的問題也好過有問題而不自知。308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQR6fkJeyxF
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好像要由頭學起欵，現在這個程度，100%新手的感覺呵呵，盲目去做也無法提升自己。因為只會一直錯在同一個位上吧。8964 copyright protection304ＰＥＮＡＮＡyzRYMg80Il 維尼

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因為光自己嘗試會走很多冤枉路所以目前而言吸收別人的創作，了解別人的寫法可能會更好一點，創作不是以量取勝吧。8964 copyright protection304ＰＥＮＡＮＡwy27Tkj0A6 維尼

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這是嘗試之後得出的結論。8964 copyright protection304ＰＥＮＡＮＡkvqeCTjqx6 維尼

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不管怎樣還是自己的作品，也不用太貶低自己，不懂就學，不懂就去嘗試，就是這麼簡單。308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxoR2uMr5pL
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現在的我想通了一點，就是現階段的我最需要的是學習，而不是急功求成，盲目追夢令到自己遍體鱗傷也不是一個辦法，不是真材實料的硬撐也撐不起來。8964 copyright protection304ＰＥＮＡＮＡrHBKBoLnQp 維尼

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還不乖乖去學習 ? ( 事實暴力 QQ )8964 copyright protection304ＰＥＮＡＮＡ96YeuAzokX 維尼

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