這是我首次寫 rap 歌詞 (09/22/2023 完成),因為我節奏還不會抓,所以先借用 MC HotDog〈貧民百萬歌星〉的節奏&旋律來寫自己的 rap 歌詞〈夏之熱力學〉。
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〈夏之熱力學〉
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啪啪啪啪啪啪天啊 傘骨竟然全斷
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塑膠布蓋在頭上 彷彿有一種 sign ~ 哦478Please respect copyright.PENANAxIhUfOfMdt
我撥開塑膠往外看 目瞪口呆478Please respect copyright.PENANATV43e5gXO2
四周扭曲又冒煙 好像世界大戰
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熱力學 從第零到第三定律478Please respect copyright.PENANATR2sq54uYf
講的是熱這能量如何平衡和遞移478Please respect copyright.PENANAYcIaD8vEFa
說到平衡 我找不到好用的磅秤478Please respect copyright.PENANAYY4HzEoQwr
Give me a fine fridge 冷卻我夏天的熱能
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熱氣不間斷累積 持續傳遞到我這裡478Please respect copyright.PENANAhnk1ZlcQQy
我又沒有保冷劑 時間一久就爆氣478Please respect copyright.PENANAk4TSL7rIBG
自始至終都是某隻小強的錯478Please respect copyright.PENANAoIlqOgNnhy
不是我的問題 是夏日這個氣炸鍋 478Please respect copyright.PENANAd3XOmH4EPm
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逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說478Please respect copyright.PENANAVVGA7ojAyo
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它478Please respect copyright.PENANAMVaFvUFw19
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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刀光和劍影 這個夏季 差點就沒樂趣 478Please respect copyright.PENANApxkbuqEFOT
降低熱氣 非關修養 而是靠分析478Please respect copyright.PENANAixpFI65pUc
邏輯和紀錄裡 思緒才得以梳理478Please respect copyright.PENANAXz3WFtWSYb
沒有人知道怒氣變成動機包括我自己
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熱力是一種動量 燒起來挺耗能478Please respect copyright.PENANALeOd0jVwux
平常我彬彬有禮 典型INTJ人478Please respect copyright.PENANApa8bmmDJno
人不犯我我不犯人 人如果犯我478Please respect copyright.PENANAfHlow0TsYS
用事實反擊截圖蒐證 這是種本能
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一隻網蟑 觸鬚是雷達拼命找人蹭478Please respect copyright.PENANAh0fkAVcVOb
在網路上面爬來爬去 那氣味臭不可聞478Please respect copyright.PENANAPuPysFmiSJ
以為虧人很爽洋洋自得478Please respect copyright.PENANAx1BWbfFBH4
卻不曉得天道好還 大家都有個小本本478Please respect copyright.PENANAibYg42duwy
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無形者例行一遊 在這熱爆的夏祭478Please respect copyright.PENANAaSsbQbZYBQ
沒想到 參與一齣莫名的破戲478Please respect copyright.PENANAIHPDnqp9wP
那隻網蟑什麼都不怕 以為最大是自己478Please respect copyright.PENANASIq1aLwN3H
以污辱 以扭曲 把無形者扯進去478Please respect copyright.PENANAmBW4ISuA0q
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?478Please respect copyright.PENANAqN1eHhDUxG
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說478Please respect copyright.PENANAT3ecaqzExk
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它478Please respect copyright.PENANAOgw9iwIKN1
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
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We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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you, dude !
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如果一張嘴能將正義伸張478Please respect copyright.PENANANxxX2dB4mV
就算只剩下一張嘴那又何妨?478Please respect copyright.PENANArFk8A367xx
遠勝用嘴造謠478Please respect copyright.PENANAp1wRGe8zqY
扭曲污衊侮辱人鬼神的網蟑478Please respect copyright.PENANAGS2kI0Bku9
待無形者彙整報告 全身爛光光
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知不知道色厲內荏究竟哪四個字478Please respect copyright.PENANAk6xRhs2SQj
尾巴下垂心虛而吠敗犬就是如此478Please respect copyright.PENANAIvdB4c0a7J
裝出老子不怕的樣子只為了掩飾478Please respect copyright.PENANAKRJE8o9LkW
殊不知已被看穿可悲的心思
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熱到不行的盛夏總算已經完畢478Please respect copyright.PENANABBO2aaSJcG
將要開始的是到達臨界點的業力478Please respect copyright.PENANAvdVwQmWAkV
作用力必定會帶來反作用力478Please respect copyright.PENANAk9vok4L33u
網蟑舉止人鬼神再也看不下去
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人在做惡,天在冷看478Please respect copyright.PENANABfeMGG6mjn
懲罰或者機會都將由祂們決定 人無法管478Please respect copyright.PENANAEgb3S1UiBR
網蟑現在所有一切都是它不斷拼命478Please respect copyright.PENANArqMQVWw2IH
用骯髒言語行徑 自己走向絕境
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?478Please respect copyright.PENANAqMZbFJugnM
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說478Please respect copyright.PENANAXpKaZ6DTN0
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它478Please respect copyright.PENANAzguXnp9iDQ
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?478Please respect copyright.PENANAktTXsVEtDy
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說478Please respect copyright.PENANAz0keIwa0Ak
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它478Please respect copyright.PENANAX2jBflJnzS
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude ! ( x 3)
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魔鏡歌詞網〈貧民百萬歌星〉歌詞連結:
https://mojim.com/twy101024x12x2.htm
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【創作感想】
目前為止,我已經寫了上百首新詩,也聽過不少 rap,本以為 rap 不難寫,沒想到一寫才發現:rap 歌詞的字數真是超・級・多!而且要配上節奏來唸,不曉得哪些拍子適合 rap 節奏?華爾滋的 3/4 拍?探戈的 2/4 拍 (註)?還是其他?
雖然我音感不錯 (以前是合唱團團員,也玩過MIDI),但節奏感不夠強,所以第一首 rap 就先借用現有歌曲的節奏&旋律,不過歌詞完全是原創。
之後會來發展自己的節奏能力,使用我的蘋果福利機的原生軟體 GarageBand 做節奏+作曲,配上我的原創歌詞。
韓森老師的《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》有提到,rap 歌詞可以先單獨存在,之後再放上節奏和旋律;所以等我寫熟一點,應該會直接寫歌詞,之後再自己創作節奏或者請人配。
寫 rap 歌詞,也算是另類新詩,還滿有趣;因為 rap 歌詞的承載量大,也比較直白,所以用它來寫讀書心得或法律常識,未嘗不是某種變形的筆記或網誌。
最緊要有意思!!
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(註):【探戈舞的認知】
http://www.dancers.com.tw/te/te-03/te-0313.html
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【博客來書店:《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》】
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