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前面的主角身份很清楚但行走過程有點淡算是都用風景表達,但是科技觀念等級有點意思。最後切換到學者視角算是點亮整個故事,感覺到主角不是同等級生物的立體感。8964 copyright protection199PENANAecmYAE1VaI 維尼
寫風景那邊我看到有點放棄了,因為用詞漂亮但是我沒有看風景的興趣。主角性格不激昂,所以還不至於直接放棄閱讀,算是跟風景滿搭的。8964 copyright protection199PENANARc1HveFgZ1 維尼
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