這篇其實是用來參加哈皮舉辦的活動比賽而寫的!114Please respect copyright.PENANABo57nDW8iL
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有關比賽的評語,很遺憾當天有事外出忙,沒辦法聽到評審的評語。
然後找到了評分的圖114Please respect copyright.PENANAz76HNajWwe114Please respect copyright.PENANAu0GseE3sd1
老實說,要改進的地方不少……
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