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《電車》455Please respect copyright.PENANAnK6gpM6ozj
在這方空間內,時間流動速度如轉動中的摩天輪。455Please respect copyright.PENANAeez7Z1I2EF
車廂內站著的人們擠得像沙丁魚,坐著的人們也瑟縮著,凜冽的寒風刮著車身,刮著人們的頭髮,刮著人們的耳後。455Please respect copyright.PENANADho2JD2iVf
當中一個少女用手機傳送著短訊,陽光照得她柔軟的髮絲烏亮了起來,長髮掩了她的小耳。455Please respect copyright.PENANAu3jHD5I4py
上面的木屑如沙粒滴下,落在乘客厚重的衣服上。455Please respect copyright.PENANANR1fR8mz56
須臾,碎屑愈來愈密。突然傳來一聲震耳欲聾的巨響。上層的部分辟里啪拉的坍塌下來。455Please respect copyright.PENANAeYqvh4xG02
「叮……叮……」的聲音靜止了,世界靜默了。455Please respect copyright.PENANAfGbzvtSuCl
鮮血染了車廂,飄揚了腥甜。455Please respect copyright.PENANAzNJWIQzo90
人們淒厲的哀號,驚異的餘悸,急遽的心跳,費力地呼吸著,爭取漸稀薄的空氣。455Please respect copyright.PENANAYHpR4xBBnV
少女的半張臉綻放瑰紅色的薔薇,在電車的上層崩塌的一瞬間,她的瞳瞥我一眼,她的幼臂伸向我。455Please respect copyright.PENANAHaqf7ruiEY
可是,她抓不著我。455Please respect copyright.PENANAY9H7B8RI0K
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