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《電車》434Please respect copyright.PENANAvSLJRnXycr
在這方空間內,時間流動速度如轉動中的摩天輪。434Please respect copyright.PENANA2EsYGf3AMH
車廂內站著的人們擠得像沙丁魚,坐著的人們也瑟縮著,凜冽的寒風刮著車身,刮著人們的頭髮,刮著人們的耳後。434Please respect copyright.PENANATnZjGL5EBW
當中一個少女用手機傳送著短訊,陽光照得她柔軟的髮絲烏亮了起來,長髮掩了她的小耳。434Please respect copyright.PENANAzmUIumgpal
上面的木屑如沙粒滴下,落在乘客厚重的衣服上。434Please respect copyright.PENANAM9P6GYOvyL
須臾,碎屑愈來愈密。突然傳來一聲震耳欲聾的巨響。上層的部分辟里啪拉的坍塌下來。434Please respect copyright.PENANAyRsTwAS4C8
「叮……叮……」的聲音靜止了,世界靜默了。434Please respect copyright.PENANAExQMUikjqn
鮮血染了車廂,飄揚了腥甜。434Please respect copyright.PENANAluopvNwS51
人們淒厲的哀號,驚異的餘悸,急遽的心跳,費力地呼吸著,爭取漸稀薄的空氣。434Please respect copyright.PENANAn6MLnVrIoj
少女的半張臉綻放瑰紅色的薔薇,在電車的上層崩塌的一瞬間,她的瞳瞥我一眼,她的幼臂伸向我。434Please respect copyright.PENANAk5JfFbIAOB
可是,她抓不著我。434Please respect copyright.PENANA6im9TDH2ts
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(297字)434Please respect copyright.PENANAT4UXG1jgs5
第一次參加434Please respect copyright.PENANAeupe6k5vNP
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