If you find the time, I'm looking for someone to look over "A Quilan Called Brisance". It's a long one, so even a skim would be helpful. It's a love story set in an alternate steampunk timeline. There are also giant eagles. And gin. Lots of gin.
I need someone to look at it and tell me it's crap... and then tell me how I can improve it.
Thanks in advanced.