1.0 核心表現力351Please respect copyright.PENANAqyEvEJs92y
以懸念型的小說為例,核心表現力是:351Please respect copyright.PENANAaCF8MJL408
a. 過去(日常):簡單的細節入手,塑造環境不安全351Please respect copyright.PENANApx9JyhDdyL
b. 現在(懸念):不安全的異常描述351Please respect copyright.PENANAHKJWWvuuaI
c. 未來(心理):探索人的身邊和心理,各種荒誕的可能性
2.0 爽感351Please respect copyright.PENANA99qs17CaTV
表現力的最終目標,是帶給讀者爽感。351Please respect copyright.PENANANBkykICpho
如果單純只有爽點,而沒有爽感,那麼這種表現力是錯誤的。351Please respect copyright.PENANApUVPPsEBqj
常見的爽點雷區:351Please respect copyright.PENANAKED5mMsjYS
a. 俗氣,如亂葬坑,紅高跟鞋,紅嫁衣,笑聲,哭聲,水聲351Please respect copyright.PENANAlbAa1wxtcJ
b. 虛假,如靈力捉鬼,寶石,水晶,這些是都市爽文,而非懸念351Please respect copyright.PENANAvsaWpmtt0C
c. 空洞,如鬼手突然出現,缺乏了像環境、推理、心理這些表現力
3.0 主線劇情351Please respect copyright.PENANAp525NdA0Aw
首先必需理解表現力和爽感,之後才能懂得設計好看的主線劇情。
3.1 人設+三條主線351Please respect copyright.PENANAQVh1FV2nEp
以【治癒】和【惡夢】兩書作為藍本,它們的架構有相似之處。351Please respect copyright.PENANAa4Lwu9miLA
a. 賣人設(不會有恐懼/社恐)351Please respect copyright.PENANAQyak0ttItU
b. 功法線(開局比別人強,裝備,夥伴,天賦,等級)351Please respect copyright.PENANAO2TMzc0Gx7
c. 刷副本地圖線(幸福社區,益民社區)351Please respect copyright.PENANAmhGx9u37Hj
d. 世界觀歷史線(惡夢病毒,大boss蝴蝶的)
3.2 主線劇情服務於表現力,目標是給讀者爽感351Please respect copyright.PENANAdqOlbeeHJM
首先,人設+三條主線,設定了故事的賣點(長篇架構)351Please respect copyright.PENANAnZMkAmzmju
然後,用釣子懸念設立期待感(懸念)351Please respect copyright.PENANAZvRuGAPoVU
接著,完成任務和探索地圖的表現力(核心爽感)351Please respect copyright.PENANAhSdXpVRbuq
最後,才是傳統意義上的爽點(榮譽感,越級挑戰,獲取裝備夥伴功法,升級,打臉)351Please respect copyright.PENANAc9Rl2YV6Xe
這是一個累進過程,像上圖中的三維空間會愈來愈大,而架構則幫助了小說不易寫崩。
3.3 功法線的表現力 351Please respect copyright.PENANAD1EYmu6wIB
主角的功法線有四個維度,包括:351Please respect copyright.PENANAhqplQ1uwsE
a. 裝備:351Please respect copyright.PENANAh7QO8prYhC
裝備必需有限制性,如時間限制、消耗品,而絕不能是無敵流裝備351Please respect copyright.PENANAvim3ZkeolE
攻擊裝備:主角用作關鍵尾刀351Please respect copyright.PENANAfh8NQ7Ol8W
防禦裝備:主角前期太弱,需要消耗型防裝351Please respect copyright.PENANA63ly1cAiiV
b. 寵物:(加成型)351Please respect copyright.PENANAjUGVcy4mfD
c. 夥伴:(法師範圍型,戰士物傷型,刺客偷襲型)351Please respect copyright.PENANAyXr6y2KdDi
d. 天賦:(成長型)
351Please respect copyright.PENANA1hScnyk8Pi